NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete) - Page 17

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Chapter 3
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Valentine Day ka update, without any romance😉 I know I am evil😈
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Ten days had passed. The investigation was going nowhere. Khyati just couldn't make any sense in the case. The evidences were pointing towards Nisha, except for the fact that she was with Dolly and Saurav before the estimated death of Navya, and Kabir had gone to Delhi for that one week. The business rivalry angle also didn't convince her.

Khyati looked at the board in her cabin. The board had pictures of the Gangwals, Dolly, Saurav and Kabir, the dead body at the location, the injuries etc.

Tawade- (pointing at Nisha's picture) So aapke according yeh guneghaar hai?

Khyati- nahi...

Tawade- Par saare evidences iske khilaaf...

Khyati- (interrupting) Pata nahi kyun, par itne saalon ke duty mein maine logo ke emotions ko importance nahi di hai, par iss case mein, mujhe Nisha ka Navya ke liye pyaar, uska protective nature manane ko hi nahi deta ki she's a culprit. This case is really going to be the most different one I have solved till date...

* Gangwal House *

Nisha had just freshened up and entered her room, when her eyes fell on the mirror. Something was written on it with lipstick, she read it, "YOU ARE NEXT ...NISHA GANGWAL...YOU ARE GOING TO PAY" Nisha screamed in fear. Kabir and Saurav entered and saw the mirror. Kabir hugged Nisha, who was trembling with fear as Saurav called the elders.

Khyati's reverie was broken when her mobile rang. She received it, spoke for a few minutes and then said, "Nisha has got her first threatening message, HURRY!"

They soon reached the mansion and entered the room. The forensic team was working on the mirror and then said, "Madam! Something unusual has happened!"

Khyati- Kya?

Forensic officer- Iss mirror pe NAVYA GANGWAL ke fingerprints hai...

All were shocked.

Khyati- Maybe kisine uske fingerprints tamper kiye ho... (to herself) though that's not possible...

The whole day Nisha was in fear. The sight of her sister's body haunted her, and the mirror's message scared her more. All failed to calm her down. Kabir asked Laxmi through her eyes whether he could talk to her alone. She nodded and signalled everyone to leave.

Kabir- Nishu, meri taraf dekh...Dekh na...(she looked up) I know you are scared, but trust me jaan, jab tak tera Kabir zinda hai, tujhe ya tere parivaar ko kuch nahi hoga... I promise you...My love for you is stronger than any criminal Nisha... aur jab tak main hoon, tujhe zara si bhi taqleef nahi hogi...

Nisha- (hugging him) Mujhe kabhi mat chodna Kabir...kabhi nahi...

She found solace in his arms. Kabir ran his hand on her back to assure her.

Here Khyati called Dolly and Saurav to her cabin.

Dolly- Madam, apne hume kyun bulaya?

Khyati- kyunki, tum dono iss case ki woh link ho, jo main sujha nahi paayi...

Saurav-(confused) Matlab?

Khyati- Dolly, Kabir tumhara cousin hai, toh tum mujhe uske life ke baare mein batao...

Dolly- Uske Mom-Dad Dubai mein rehte the, but they shifted to Delhi 2 years back. The only child, so pampered, uski har wish uske parents poori karte hai without saying a No... College mein bhi average tha, lekin superb dancer tha... When he was 22, apne kaabiliyat pe usne Delhi mein ek academy start ki, and slowly became famous...

Khyati- His love life?

Dolly- Absolutely clean... Many girls had crush on him, but usne har ladki ki respect ki, aur kabhi koi aise hints nahi diye ki any girl misunderstood him...He truly loves Nisha...

Khyati- Nisha ka bhi yeh pehla relationship hai?

Saurav- yes Madam!

Khyati- And Navya?

Saurav- We weren't really close to her... Infact, Dolly ko usse todhi chid aati thi, because woh ek bacchi ke tarah illusions mein rehti thi and wasn't ready to face reality...

Dolly- Madam, ek baat hai, jo mujhe bahut dino se khaaye jaa rhai hai...

Khyati- Bolo...

Dolly- 5 mahine pehle ki baat hai, Nisha was riding a bike aur uska accident ho gaya...Kabir offered to help her, but she rejected, that's how they met. Phir Kabir ko accident spot pe Nisha ka ID mila, so he called her in the evening. Navya ne woh call Nisha bankar answer kiya, par Nisha ko bataya nahi ki it was Kabir. Nisha uss din Saurav ke ghar thi...

Khyati- Toh tumhare mann mein yeh doubt hai ki Navya ne Nisha se yeh baat chipaayi kyun...

Dolly-Exactly, and the next day, he told Navya to meet him at Caf Sunrise, jaahan main aur woh humesha jaate hai, because humne bhi doosre din milne ka plan banaya tha... Navya wahaan aayi, par usne jhoot bola ki Kirti ne usse bulaya, aur phir achanak kehne lagi ki Kirti dropped the plan...

Khyati- Hmmm...there is something fishy...anyways, tum dono jaa sakte ho, Thanks for your time...

Khyati continued looking at the board when her mobile rang. It was confirmed that the finger prints on the mirror weren't tampered. She then integrated the forensic department and was shocked. She couldn't believe it. She made a few investigations, which brought out more shocking facts. Then she came to meet the Gangwals where Kirti and Jwala were present.

Khyati- Sir, Forensic team ke head, Dr. Shekhar Sinha ne evidences temper kiye the, usse is ke liye 25 lakh diye gaye the... Asal mein woh dead body aapki beti ki thi hi nahi...

All gasped in shock.

Khyati- Usse saare instructions phone se diye jaate the, aur paise uske account mein jiss account se transfer kiye jaate the woh account Sumeet Kashyap ka hai... Aap jaante hai usse?

Kirti- Sumeet Sir toh humare college mein intern hai... Par woh aisa kyun karenge?

Khyati- Yeh toh hume bhi nahi pata... Hume Sumeet ki details mil chuki hai, and his phone was last tracked in Lonavla, jaahan par humari ek team gayi hai abhi, toh uski fiqar aap mat kijiye... And I think I should take your leave... Good Night...Before that, Nisha, can I talk to you for a minute?

After talking to Nisha and reassuring her, they left the house.

Khyati- Iss ghar pe har waqt nazar banaye rakho, aur get the technicians to tap the calls...Aaj zaroor hume Navya ka pata chalega...

Constable- Madam, aap itni sure kaise ho sakti hai?

Khyati- Don't forget ki Sumeet ke account mein woh saare paise Navya ke account se gaye the... that means Navya shaayad victim hai, yaa khud guneghaar hai. Lekin for the first time, I am believing my instincts and am saying that aaj Navya ka pata chalega...

Here Kabir was talking to someone all frustrated.

Kabir-(frustrated) Mom! Can you just stop this! Main Delhi nahi aa raha...

Vasundhara- Par Jojo, aapki jaan ko khatara hai...

Kabir- So what? Nisha ki safety meri first priority hai, agar usse kuch ho gaya toh...

He turned to see Nisha with tears in her eyes.

Kabir- main aapse baad mein...

Nisha snatched the phone from him and spoke to Vasundhara, convincing her that she'll take care of Kabir. Vasundhara, convinced of her son's and daughter-in-law's safety, blessed them and disconnected the call, praying for the best to happen in future.

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So that was today's update😉
comments and likes are most welcome😃
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update shibu 👏
Navya 😡
You known what i want to hate navya but uske par aneri ka face hai so i can't 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haa 😲 !!kitne twist hai is story mei..lovely update actually not lovely thrilling and shocking...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cool...
Yaani navya ye San kar rahi Hai
Amazing👏
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I an having butterflies in my stomach 😆
Jaldi jaldi update Shibu... Sabko padahi karni hai ab 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woa..what a twist
Kabir's love for Nisha
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