The Best of Things: Thread II - Part 74 on Page 139 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear
Congrats on the new thread. I was missing your story in the first thread and here you have started a new one. Thnx for the PM though.

Coming to the updates, RagYa are so much matured here. Ragini understood that she was wrong and is genuinely trying to change. She understood Lakshya's guilt regarding Swara. I for a moment thought that she would again blame Swara.
Shomi's advice was nice. It was so deep. Thnx for that one. I'll always remember that.
SwaSan moments were good too.

Continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Hey dear
Congrats on the new thread. I was missing your story in the first thread and here you have started a new one. Thnx for the PM though.

Coming to the updates, RagYa are so much matured here. Ragini understood that she was wrong and is genuinely trying to change. She understood Lakshya's guilt regarding Swara. I for a moment thought that she would again blame Swara.
Shomi's advice was nice. It was so deep. Thnx for that one. I'll always remember that.
SwaSan moments were good too.

Continue soon dear


Yes, she understood Lakshya's guilt.
Earlier she was trying to get Swara out of the house but even as pure strategy that would not have worked. She has a better chance of a good future with Lakshya only if Swara is happy too!

Thanks very much for your kind words! 🤗
Bubble
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Best of Things
(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16
By Bubble

Chapter 48

The sunlight was filtering in through the glass. Wishing he had closed the curtains properly, Lakshya put an arm across his eyes. A shadow moved across the glass and then instead of adjusting the curtains close, opened it fully.

"What the hell!" he muttered and squinted.

Ragini stood by the window, smiling. "Abhi tak soye hain, Laksh! Utthiye!"

He sat up with a jerk, astounded. "When did you come?"

"Just now! Papa dropped me. Maa is back to feeling quite alright and today is Sunday, and Papa is home, so we just decided I should come back!"

"Oh great!" he said, leaping out of bed excitedly, "Kya baat hai! I didn't expect you home today! You should've said, I would've come to pick you up. Has Papa left?"

"Yes... just dropped me and went off... I think he wanted her to himself as well before Dada-Daadi come back... " she went on, chatting lightly, setting the room right, which had gone a bit astray after so many days of her absence.

Suddenly, the prospect of the day seemed to have brightened, but Lakshya didn't quite know why.

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The elders had had breakfast early but almost every single member of the younger set only turned up at the breakfast table at around 11 for Round Two. It was frowned upon for them to be so indisciplined but Sunday was an exception... everyone just surfaced late. Ghanshaam waited on them, bringing in fresh cups of tea.

Swara was a little worried that anyone who looked at her would at once know the cataclysmic change in her life since last night. She came down alone... and was relieved that everyone was fairly normal with her... maybe it didn't show after all!

She greeted Ragini brightly, and asked after Maa's tabeeyat. Everyone was having first cups of tea, so Swara went into the kitchen to see if she was needed there, and brought out a cook-and-serve pot full of sambhar. "This is hot, everybody... be careful," she warned and went back in to bring the idlis. The Maheshwaris were having a South Indian breakfast today.

When she came out, Sanskaar had come down as well, and was just sitting down. He reached for the sambhar, when Swara exclaimed, "Careful, Shona! That's hot!"
Everyone froze. Ragini and Lakshya looked at each other, suppressing their smiles.
The tips of Sanskaar's ears turned pink. Swara looked around self consciously and said again as if correcting herself, "Sanskaar, sambhal ke, tumhara haath jal jaayega!"
But the damage had been done. There were grins all around but no one said anything for five minutes. Then, Lakshya cleared his throat and said to Sanskaar, "Will you please pass me the salt... Shona?"

Ragini, Uttara and Parineeta burst into giggles and Sanskaar, who went a shade pinker, turned around to glare balefully at Swara.

But Swara was now laughing as much as the others and she giggled, "Mai kya karun, muh se nikal gaya!" He narrowed his eyes at her... I'll see to you later, 'Shona'! and went back to his idlis.

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But the Sunday didn't stay normal for Swara. Sanskaar attended a few work calls, so Swara sat on the lawn chatting with Mom, Uttara and Parineeta, when he came to stand at the door, looking pale. He seemed to want to say something, so she quickly followed him upstairs to their room.

"Naraaz ho?" she laughed as she shut the door. "Sorry, I'll remember not to embarrass you next time!"

He shook his head, looking upset.

"Kya hua, Sanskaar!" she asked him, in alarm.

He took her into his arms. "Swara... baby... I need to go to Japan!"

"Okay..." she said, slowly. "Kab?"

He swallowed painfully. "Tonight."

"Kya!!" Her face crumpled. "No!"

He just looked back at her miserably.

She wailed, "Sanskaar, mai jeeyungi kaise?!"

He held her closer still. "Darling... it's just a few days - we've been trying for Japanese contracts for seven months. There is a trade conference - someone from my team was supposed to go, he's broken his foot... I have to go myself."

"Tonight? you need to go tonight?!" she whispered, her hands on his chest.

He nodded, looking as upset as she felt herself.

"And I can't go with you because..." she started to say... "...because we don't have a visa for you," he finished. She nodded.

Although Swara told herself not behave like a spoilt child, she couldn't help the tears. She wiped them away and said, "Ok, if you have to go, you have to go... I'll pack your things. Tokyo will be cold, na?"

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Posted: 9 years ago
Swara called sanskar shona... That part was hellerious🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely story..

Read all parts in one go..

Waiting for more..

Give us more ragya scenes...plz..will u?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Poor sanskar got embarrassed
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG...poor Sanskaar, I mean Shona !! Ahem. 😆😆
Lovely part Bubble...so Lakshya's day got brighter but he didn't know why ?

Please shed some light on that no ? 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Bubble...
Wondeful Update ...Omggg Swara calling Sanskaar Shona..clearly says abou their compatible relation.Laksh teasing sanskaar was awesome...Ohhh poor swasan ..they gonna miss each other...very well written ...

Suhasini
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey bubble!
I think im commenting on this story for the first time even though ive been following it since ever but i just really wanted you to know what a marvellous creation youve made!
I had to stop reading to laugh out the shona part! Aww theyre so cute, all of them really
You have made this story sound so real,practical and normal!i really think it deepens the connection and i cant help but love every part you give out although i adore the swasan parts more. Cant wait till the next update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
bubble.. 😊
laksh is accepting ragini with a positive sense
thats cool
swara is blushing a lot haha
but her calling sanskar as shona was too cute 😳
and then family's reaction haha
aww love birds will stay away for somedays...thats painful...
but i love the way swara is emotional about it...
update soon dear
love
simi 😊

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