The Best of Things: Thread II - Part 74 on Page 139 - Page 11

Originally posted by: simsen23

Bubble
first of all i should say that you are a sensible person.
i mean the way you potray the intimacy of characters is so perfect.
nothing vulgur ..but still real and practical.
well i love the way swara confessed her love anx sanskar's happiness...
wow
A man and his wife finally...
last line was emotional.
keep writting
love,
simi 😊

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the update bubble. Finally he makes her feel comfortable with him and she confessed her love too. So sweet bubble. And the next morning she saw herself as new as his wife and asked him to put sindhoor on her head. Well written bubble😊

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Bubble!! The awesomest chapter!! Finally the scene we were all waiting for ... And written so exquisitely by u!!! Each and every expression bang on..Swara's hesitation and her subsequent eagerness...the sweetest husband ever Sanskaar who knows every nuance of his wife's feelings ...really!! How does he do it!!! And her final capitulation and their consummation!!! Sigh...I'm in la la land now

Another epic scene u took from the show...the sindoor one...so very appropriate!

Loved it!!
Tas

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Wow

Awesome

Originally posted by: sweetheart999

Loved the updates

Amazingly written

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Such a lovely update yaar!!🤗 Swara didn't know she had to actually say 'i love you'😆😆😆 And sanskar's reaction at that, stunned at first but followed by racing heartbeats, was priceless Finally together, in every sense😃

Originally posted by: _Esha_

Too intriguing and passionate bubble...you write wonders 😊 they are just too addictive 🤗

Originally posted by: alisha17

Superb update

Loved it