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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Fabulous OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm


Thank you HappyTwinkle! Glad you liked it! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
both OS 8 & 9 wer fab..
nice songs...
& superb story...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just finished reading all ur shots
N i must say thy all are beautifully written
I luved readng thm
N yes all the songs perfctly fit into the choice of words u put
Excellnt wrk
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Niranjana! Just like i told Candyjan, i can't guarantee but i'll definitely keep the request in mind! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

both OS 8 & 9 wer fab..
nice songs...
& superb story...
thnks 4 d pm...


Thank you Hiya! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: loftynoni

Just finished reading all ur shots

N i must say thy all are beautifully written
I luved readng thm
N yes all the songs perfctly fit into the choice of words u put
Excellnt wrk



Thank you loftynoni! It's a pleasant surprise to read comments from someone who isn't from the usual list of commenters! Keep reading and giving me feedback! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Caught with last 3 One shots now...
They r supercute n fabulous..👏
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Caught with last 3 One shots now...
They r supercute n fabulous..👏
Thanks for the pm😊


Thank you Shiny! It's good to see a comment from you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

OS 10 - Inspired from Chori Kiya (Dabangg)

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zXJluBR26A)


Author's Note:

When i first began this series, i was not sure of what to expect. Unlike my previous work, PMs were reduced and not sent out to all. It was a risk considering that IPKKND is an active forum and the thread could go from page 1 to page 5 in mere minutes. Today after 10 OS shots, i am happy that i took such a decision. From writing to please the readers to writing to please the inner me, there has been a major transformation and i must credit the readers who have been actively trying to contribute in terms of comments and likes. From the bottom of my heart, thank you!

As much as i would like to write full fledged stories, i would have to put that on hold since it is my final semester of undergraduate studies and it is going to be busy. For now, i will try my very best to write one shots and maintain the weekly Friday updates. Please continue to read and give me feedback as to what songs you would like. With that being said, here's to a wonderful journey ahead!


Khushi was pacing around her classroom. Seven whole days had gone by and Arnav was nowhere to be found. He had not come for the classes and Khushi had tried all means to reach him. She had called him but his phone was switched off. She had visited his apartment but it was locked as if no one lived there. Something was terribly wrong considering that no matter when she visited, someone in Arnav's family would always open the door. As much as she hated it, her mind began to think of all terrible things that could have happened to Arnav.

Just then, the professor walks in and Khushi has no choice but to go back to her bench. She sits down sadly and without any forethought, Khushi caresses the side of table Arnav usually uses.

"Khushi..."

Khushi jolts out of her dream land and looks up to see a pair of eyes looking down at her.

sachi sachi teri nazrein ek darpan
Dede mann ki yeh khabrein ek pal chhin

Truthful, your eyes are a mirror
Give the news of heart in a second

As Arnav gazes into the eyes of Khushi, he could read her mind. Her eyes seemed moist and red as if she had spent many days crying for him. He could feel her pain.


Adharon ne kuch na kaha re
Naino ne keh diya

Lips didn't say anything
(but) eyes said

As their eye lock became stronger, Khushi could sense Arnav's apology for leaving her clueless. Khushi's mind screamed that Arnav was fine just like before and that there was noting to worry about. Khushi's heart screamed that she had fallen in love with the man standing right in front of her.


Tune toh pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya mora jiya

You just stole my heart in a moment, my heart

That moment, Arnav knew that Khushi was his happiness, his life, his everthing.


Tune bhi pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya

You too stole my heart in a moment, my beloved..

Khushi's heart overpowered every thought and all she could think of was Arnav. It just felt like they were meant to be.


"Attention Class, we are experiencing some technical difficulties. It will take a while for this to be fixed so please remain seated and wait patiently". The voice of their professor broke their eyelock and Khushi moves in to allow Arnav to sit.

"Khushi, I'm..."

"It's okay. You do not have to explain anything."

Khushi turns away from Arnav with tears forming.

As much as she was happy that he was back, she was hurt that he did not bother to inform her. Her heart told her that Arnav would never do something that would make her upset while her mind instigated her. Her heart reminded her that the missed call she received seven days ago in the wee hours of the morning from Arnav would have got something to do with this.

"Khushi. Please. Listen to me"

"Arnav I..."

Khushi turns and faces Arnav to see his eyes filled with hurt and immediately, she softens down.

"Khushi, I never wanted to do this to you. I just had no choice. Dadi passed away and I had to go back to the ancesteral village with the family. Everything happened in the wee hours and in the rush to leave, I did not pack my phone charger. I tried calling to let you know but you did not pick up. Later, I tried to messgae you on the way but my phone died."

Khushi is filled with regret for having misunderstood Arnav. She immediately apologizes and offers her condolences. Arnav holds her hand and looks into her eyes.

Gumsum gummsumm rehne wali humri ek gujariya re
Kal-kal kal-kal behne lagi jaise prem ki nadiya re

A wish of mine that remained lost,
started to flow with noise, a river of love

"I never knew how much I would have missed you until I experienced it. I never knew how much you would miss me until I saw your tear filled eyes today. And now I know something - Neither you nor I would ever want to experience something like this ever again. There could be no better time to let you know that you are special to me and I would never like to see tears in your eyes."


Arnav breathes heavily and continues,

"Up till a moment ago, I never knew how you might react and thus I never wanted to say this. But now, your eyes have said it all. Will you consider the next step with me?"

Tujh sang preet humne lagai hai
Tab jaake yeh rutt aayi hai
Tune bhi pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya
I have loved you,
Then only this (beautiful) weather has come,
You too stole my heart in a moment, my beloved..

Khushi's heart flutters. Arnav had asked her if she would be willing to commit to a relationship, one step more than just friendship. The past week had made her understand that she had feelings for Arnav. She wanted to inmediately acknowledge and hug him. But she did have her apprehensions. Would everything work out?

She looks at Arnav and then down at the table. Her mind and heart clash and she was confused. She takes a deep breath and closes her eyes. She attempts to pray to Devi Maiyya but all she could visualize was Arnav. She opens her eyes and with a shy smile, she looks up at Arnav and words out "Yes".

Gupchup gupchup dil mein aaya sajna swaang rachaiya re
Pal pal har pal jiski chhaya apna paar lagaiya re

Silently came into (my) heart (my) beloved, in a disguise,

every moment whose shadow is my guide (literally, one who is going to make me cross all the problems)


Arnav breaks out into a smile and Khushi looks down shyly. Before they can say anything, they are interuppted by their professor's voice.

"Mike testing... Arnav, Khushi can you hear me from the last row?"

Arnav and Khushi nod and their professor acknowledges it. He begins lecturing. Khushi turns away from Arnav and attempts to take out her notebook when she feels Arnav holding her left hand. She looks into his eyes and smiles. It just felt so right.


Ho tujh par jaan humne lutayi hai
Tab jaake tu sang aayi hai

I've sacrificed my life on you,
then only you have come with me

Arnav mentally thanks Khushi's devi maiyaa. He shudders upon wondering what would have happened should she refuse. Their beautiful friendship would have been broken. Luckily, Khushi shared the same feelings as him. He smiles at Khushi before taking out his notebook.


Tune toh pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya

You too stole my heart in a moment, my beloved..

An hour later, their class ends. Arnav and Khushi go out of the room and as they walk to nearby Caf two buildings away from their campus, they keep smiling at each other.

Khushi decides to break the silence and says "Your smile just steals my heart everytime". Arnav replies in a playful tone, "Just my smile? I thought every bit of my charm stole your heart". Khushi nudges him and they laugh.

Sachi sachi teri nazrein ek darpan
Dede mann ki yeh khabrein ek pal chin

Khushi looks into Arnav's eyes which is filled with pure love. That gave her confidence that everything would be okay if she had Arnav by her side.


Adhron ne kuch na kaha re
Naino ne keh diya

Arnav looks into Khushi's eyes and likewise, he is greeted with the same emotion. For once, he was thankful for forgetting his charger. Absence had made their hearts fonder.


Tune toh pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya
Tune bhi pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya mora jiya

As if cued, their mouths word out at the same time, "I love you".

Edited by KhushiArnav_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww loved d song..

dear y do u fear.. wen m here...😉
i know frm wer ur fear cums...

but dont worry in this forum u wont be disappointed...
& m happy abt it...

coming to d os.. nice story...
loved it...


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