-Meri Mohabbat Ka Karna Tu Haq Yeh Ada- Part 1 pg 2 31/01

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Posted: 10 years ago
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]Prologue

Ishita lay on their bed; caressing his pillow... uttering his name with each passing breath. The Doctor's had clearly said "she's lost her mental balance!" yet the Bhallas & Iyers stood by the side of hope... It felt like an eternity, pining for Ishu to recover. Every medication went to futile, every prayer unheard. All she craved was to see a glimpse of her Raman!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice
ishita lost her mental balance😲
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

nice

ishita lost her mental balance😲
update soon



😉 thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue painful bt interesting..
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
but plzz continue it
prologue itself it too gud
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatica

prologue painful bt interesting..

continue soon...



Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm posting part one of my story. I hope you'll like it!

Part 1

"Puttar woh din raat teri rah takti rehti hai. Ghar laut aa Puttar. Please!"

"Main aap sabse yeh baat clarify kar chuka hoon ke mujhe Ishita se koi rishta nahi rakhna. Aap sab toh jaise samajh naa hi nahi chahte!"

"Ishita teri biwi hai Raman..."

A FEW DAYS PASSED & TOSHI JI KEPT ON REQUESTING RAMAN TO RETURN. WITH A HEAVY HEART, HE RETURNED TO THE LIFE HE'D LEFT BEHIND, WILLINGLY!


He walked into his room hoping to get over and done with this nonsense, once & for all. As he braced himself to confront her; he saw the divorce papers, he'd sent, scattered on the floor. He glanced upon her & entered a trance... filling his eyes with her serene beauty; his hand instinctively pushed a strand of her hair back...


Precap:

"Yeh... Maa... main Ishita ke saath nahi reh sakta... woh meri reluctance, mera indifference deserve nahi karti... she's too innocent..."

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part one updated two posts above. Do like, comment & feedback! Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update
why raman not accept ishita as his wife😲
update soon
pm me too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

nice update

why raman not accept ishita as his wife😲
update soon
pm me too



Hmmm... You'll have to wait for the suspense to unravel!!

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