MG FF : A TORN RELATION #5 //part 45(a) , 45(b) pg 20,25 jan 20 - Page 10

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Originally posted by: suhaaana

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~A TORN RELATION~

Part 45(a)

******************************************&

From this part maan's past track will start , though I wanted to give maaneet moments but now I want to end my ffs soon ...



Maan was giving the presentation himself, it was a billion dollar project and it will give khurana's name in the international market.. the clients were well known for their resorts in Italy , France and Germany and this time they were opening a chain of resorts in India too and contacted khurana's , though if they had wanted there could be a tender where khurana's would have to compete with other eminent rivals of theirs but mark and sons were a step ahead when it comes to best and contacted khurana's . With maan's efforts and his hard work, KC was reaching heights and it was all because of a unwanted and powerful betrayal that maan's so called love gave him..

Everyone was listening to the presentation that maan was giving, he was an architect and was presentation the basic designs along with some 3-D models that his team has prepared. maan's stature and his words were very clear , and at the end maan presented some of the models which were no less than the completed work..,. the modeling was perfect.. Budget was discussed by arjun who was from finance department.. Everything was done when the head of mark and sons asked maan..

Richard : mr khurana , we want to add water sports in the resorts , will it be possible in the specified budget and will there be facilities for the river rafting , trekking , skiing etc..

Maan : it will be possible mr Richard but only at a certain places.. river rafting will be possible In dehradun , skiing will be in Kashmir like that and we need to take the official permission from the govt too.. Have you decided the final places..

Richard : goa , kashmir , himachal Pradesh..We want to have a resort in eastern India too.. Place is not decided yet , can your team give us the better place.. We have no idea where the business will be best..

Richard was very impressed with KC and he wanted his all India's work to be handles by them.. and maan was the MD that absolutely impressed him.. he was a man in his late fifties and absolutely knew what the person is and how will he work.. Moreover he was seeing with a different perspective too , he wanted maan for his only daughter Claire , his wife was Indian and she had wished their daughter to be married to an Indian and that was the other reason that Richard visited India and wanted to expand his business in India too.. maan had impressed him a lot , unknown to that maan was already married 😆

Maan smiled and assured him that his team will contact his and will take care of the places..

Richard: I would like to sign the deal today Mr. khurana.. Will it be possible for you.. Richard asked with a hope and he was in India for some days and wanted to complete the work today itself..

Maan asked adi and adi nodded giving maan the specifications, how much time it will take.

Maan : it will take two hours sir.. Please join us for lunch till the contract is ready..

Though maan didn't wanted the deal to be signed today as had promised geet the outing but he couldn't even refuse the client as well.. the PA of Richard read the terms and conditions and was busy in the legal procedures while maan send arjun with the client , it was almost noon and he was worried for geet , she was not well in the morning..

On the other hand geet was much better than morning, she was feeling light headed and tired after the bout of nausea and after maan left she slept for almost two hours until naina came to wake her and took her for the breakfast.. Everyone in KM was very much relaxed and were pampering geet to no extent.. she was sitting with daadima when a loud voice broke her concentration.. she tunred and looked at the little disaster of hers.. radhika came and hugged geet tight..She was missing her shy and innocent sister a lot .. geet felt that her life was coming to her again..She too hugged her little devil too tight and had tears in her eyes as she remembered how she ignored her all these days nad the last year was awful..How can she do it..

Geet : radhu..


(radhika)

Radhika tried to control her tears but listening to geet after almost a year in the way she lost her control and cried..She missed her sister a lot..all these years , they were inseparable and destiny separated them with no fault of theirs..

Radhika : di... I ..Missed you... she said in between sobs.. geet parted , she was feeling light in her heart , happy , contended and too naughty ..She never let her sister cry actually radhika never cried , she always make sure that she would never cry and be a protective sister for her geet didi..

Geet chuckled parting her , wiping her tears..

Geet : You look ugly .. radhu.. You also know how to cry.. geet said tickling her..and she giggled looking her radhika smiling and kissing her cheeks , hugging her again..

Radhika : omg ..i missed you lot.. tum toh mujhe bhool hi gayi na , she said making a baby face.. And you didn't even tell me ki mera promotion hone wala hai..Finally I will be a masi..She said grinning..This was the thing that always irked geet as radhika would always say that she would spoil her kids as she will be their masi and geet's anger will have no extent..

Geet : par..

Radhika stopped her showing her hand..

Radhika : bas.. I am mad at you..aur haan this teddy and chocolates I have brought for my would be neice/nephew.. Teddy for him/her and chocolates tum khalena tabhi baby khayega..She said giving them in geets hands..And don't think I brought this for you.. This is for my..

Her words were completed by geet..

Geet : baby.. You now care for baby.. What about baby's mom.. ahh I hate you radhika.. geet said getting irritated , this was the expression radhika was missing since months and today she felt contended seeing them on geet's face.. She winked at dadima , who knew that she was about to come.. Though rano didn't wanted her to go but radhika was adamant, and along with these she wanted to give maan some of the letters that she recently found in geet's cupboard, some were torn and crushed and seeing the content she knew what was in them..

Daadima came on geet's side and asked her to be calm..

Daadima : geet bte , dekhiye kitne ache gifts layi hai radhika.. hame bhi dikhaiye..

Geet looked at dadima and saw the bag..there was a cute teddy which she liked at that instant only..there was a baby teddy on his mamma's lap and there were geet's favorite chocolates that she had brought..

Geet : thank you.. But these are not your choice..Specially teddies and how come you brought me chocolates, tumse kaise bach gayi ye..She teased her sister..radhika was one kind of sister who always steals geets things specially her chocolates and would say.. "Chocolates oh ye wali tasty hai"

Radhika : baby ko spoil karna hai toh uski mumma ko maska toh marna padega na..kyu dadima.. haina aunty she even asked naina who just came there and was seeing geet's happiness that was reaching her eyes..

Dadima/naina : aap baby ki masi hain. Haq hai aapka..

Radhika came towards dadima and put her hand on her shoulder, she love her, dadima and especially khurana family, they were free and understanding..

Radhika : dekh liya , aunty and dm is on my side..

Part B at night or tomorrow

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute part.. foreign client was impressed by Maan n he gave contract to Maan's team.. If Maan's team wil choose space like Deharadun.. may be Maan wil get to know abt some Geet's past.. N Geet now she is fine.. n happy too.. she got Maan's support n care.. Radhika.. Get's lil sissy.. wow.. n their cute moments.. Nice update ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you sooo much for the update😃

Originally posted by: suhaaana

~A TORN RELATION~

Part 45(a)

******************************************&

From this part maan's past track will start , though I wanted to give maaneet moments but now I want to end my ffs soon ...



Maan was giving the presentation himself, it was a billion dollar project and it will give khurana's name in the international market.. the clients were well known for their resorts in Italy , France and Germany and this time they were opening a chain of resorts in India too and contacted khurana's , though if they had wanted there could be a tender where khurana's would have to compete with other eminent rivals of theirs but mark and sons were a step ahead when it comes to best and contacted khurana's . With maan's efforts and his hard work, KC was reaching heights and it was all because of a unwanted and powerful betrayal that maan's so called love gave him..

Everyone was listening to the presentation that maan was giving, he was an architect and was presentation the basic designs along with some 3-D models that his team has prepared. maan's stature and his words were very clear , and at the end maan presented some of the models which were no less than the completed work..,. the modeling was perfect.. Budget was discussed by arjun who was from finance department.. Everything was done when the head of mark and sons asked maan..

Richard : mr khurana , we want to add water sports in the resorts , will it be possible in the specified budget and will there be facilities for the river rafting , trekking , skiing etc..

Maan : it will be possible mr Richard but only at a certain places.. river rafting will be possible In dehradun , skiing will be in Kashmir like that and we need to take the official permission from the govt too.. Have you decided the final places..

Richard : goa , kashmir , himachal Pradesh..We want to have a resort in eastern India too.. Place is not decided yet , can your team give us the better place.. We have no idea where the business will be best..

Richard was very impressed with KC and he wanted his all India's work to be handles by them.. and maan was the MD that absolutely impressed him.. he was a man in his late fifties and absolutely knew what the person is and how will he work.. Moreover he was seeing with a different perspective too , he wanted maan for his only daughter Claire , his wife was Indian and she had wished their daughter to be married to an Indian and that was the other reason that Richard visited India and wanted to expand his business in India too.. maan had impressed him a lot , unknown to that maan was already married 😆

Maan smiled and assured him that his team will contact his and will take care of the places..

Richard: I would like to sign the deal today Mr. khurana.. Will it be possible for you.. Richard asked with a hope and he was in India for some days and wanted to complete the work today itself..

Maan asked adi and adi nodded giving maan the specifications, how much time it will take.

Maan : it will take two hours sir.. Please join us for lunch till the contract is ready..

Though maan didn't wanted the deal to be signed today as had promised geet the outing but he couldn't even refuse the client as well.. the PA of Richard read the terms and conditions and was busy in the legal procedures while maan send arjun with the client , it was almost noon and he was worried for geet , she was not well in the morning..

On the other hand geet was much better than morning, she was feeling light headed and tired after the bout of nausea and after maan left she slept for almost two hours until naina came to wake her and took her for the breakfast.. Everyone in KM was very much relaxed and were pampering geet to no extent.. she was sitting with daadima when a loud voice broke her concentration.. she tunred and looked at the little disaster of hers.. radhika came and hugged geet tight..She was missing her shy and innocent sister a lot .. geet felt that her life was coming to her again..She too hugged her little devil too tight and had tears in her eyes as she remembered how she ignored her all these days nad the last year was awful..How can she do it..

Geet : radhu..


(radhika)

Radhika tried to control her tears but listening to geet after almost a year in the way she lost her control and cried..She missed her sister a lot..all these years , they were inseparable and destiny separated them with no fault of theirs..

Radhika : di... I ..Missed you... she said in between sobs.. geet parted , she was feeling light in her heart , happy , contended and too naughty ..She never let her sister cry actually radhika never cried , she always make sure that she would never cry and be a protective sister for her geet didi..

Geet chuckled parting her , wiping her tears..

Geet : You look ugly .. radhu.. You also know how to cry.. geet said tickling her..and she giggled looking her radhika smiling and kissing her cheeks , hugging her again..

Radhika : omg ..i missed you lot.. tum toh mujhe bhool hi gayi na , she said making a baby face.. And you didn't even tell me ki mera promotion hone wala hai..Finally I will be a masi..She said grinning..This was the thing that always irked geet as radhika would always say that she would spoil her kids as she will be their masi and geet's anger will have no extent..

Geet : par..

Radhika stopped her showing her hand..

Radhika : bas.. I am mad at you..aur haan this teddy and chocolates I have brought for my would be neice/nephew.. Teddy for him/her and chocolates tum khalena tabhi baby khayega..She said giving them in geets hands..And don't think I brought this for you.. This is for my..

Her words were completed by geet..

Geet : baby.. You now care for baby.. What about baby's mom.. ahh I hate you radhika.. geet said getting irritated , this was the expression radhika was missing since months and today she felt contended seeing them on geet's face.. She winked at dadima , who knew that she was about to come.. Though rano didn't wanted her to go but radhika was adamant, and along with these she wanted to give maan some of the letters that she recently found in geet's cupboard, some were torn and crushed and seeing the content she knew what was in them..

Daadima came on geet's side and asked her to be calm..

Daadima : geet bte , dekhiye kitne ache gifts layi hai radhika.. hame bhi dikhaiye..

Geet looked at dadima and saw the bag..there was a cute teddy which she liked at that instant only..there was a baby teddy on his mamma's lap and there were geet's favorite chocolates that she had brought..

Geet : thank you.. But these are not your choice..Specially teddies and how come you brought me chocolates, tumse kaise bach gayi ye..She teased her sister..radhika was one kind of sister who always steals geets things specially her chocolates and would say.. "Chocolates oh ye wali tasty hai"

Radhika : baby ko spoil karna hai toh uski mumma ko maska toh marna padega na..kyu dadima.. haina aunty she even asked naina who just came there and was seeing geet's happiness that was reaching her eyes..

Dadima/naina : aap baby ki masi hain. Haq hai aapka..

Radhika came towards dadima and put her hand on her shoulder, she love her, dadima and especially khurana family, they were free and understanding..

Radhika : dekh liya , aunty and dm is on my side..

Part B at night or tomorrow

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan is busy in a meeting.
He wants it to end soon so that he can spend time with geet.
Radha comes to meet geet nd gave her chocolates.
She brought some letters for maan also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Update
Maan doing well in business and the foreign clients are very impressed with him
they want to sign the deal today itself while Mr Raichard also is looking for a Indian groom for his daughter and is unaware that Maan is married I wonder what will happen or what will be Maan's
reactions knowing that the client too likes him for his daughter
Geet now seems happier and it has been a long time since she and Radika really had fun speaking
to each other that was great that Radika came to see Geet

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