MG-OS||Wajood: Her Existence||Complete|| Part 2 on pg1 @20/12/15 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was a wonderful OS and what a lovely ending.. you chose a very important topics most of the women who feel abt their wajood and gave a beautiful ending
sure maan is a good husband who understood that his wife's wajood was important even though he could not sometimes tell his frustrations loud enough.. however, geet was patient and it made her win the situation back...
nice work Pooja 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: zaara2212

it was a wonderful OS and what a lovely ending.. you chose a very important topics most of the women who feel abt their wajood and gave a beautiful ending
sure maan is a good husband who understood that his wife's wajood was important even though he could not sometimes tell his frustrations loud enough.. however, geet was patient and it made her win the situation back...
nice work Pooja 😊



Aww so sweet
Thnx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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here I m with the comment😆
Loved the conclusion Pooja

The guilt feeling of Maan for making Geet wait for him was so touchy
Geet as usual was a dedicated wife, made him free of guilt

Night was really funny,, par sachhi aise koi nahin karta hai jaise FFs ki Geet behave karti hai kairi khaane ke liye😆
par sab chalta hai.. thank god tumhaari geet ne samaan utha ke nahin phenka maan ke mana karne par😉
Aww Dhruv is mamma's boys..
good achcha hai dad par nahin gaya warna uski biwi bhi aise hi wait karti 😆..
The only part which i found not needed was where Maan gets frustrated to show his wife's capability to the world.. dusron ko kyun kuchh prove karna when we are satisfied with ourself..

Bur then Maan found her journal and Maan found the real pleasure of his wife was in writing.. and She truly proved that
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

here I m with the comment😆

Loved the conclusion Pooja

The guilt feeling of Maan for making Geet wait for him was so touchy
Geet as usual was a dedicated wife, made him free of guilt

Night was really funny,, par sachhi aise koi nahin karta hai jaise FFs ki Geet behave karti hai kairi khaane ke liye😆
par sab chalta hai.. thank god tumhaari geet ne samaan utha ke nahin phenka maan ke mana karne par😉
Aww Dhruv is mamma's boys..
good achcha hai dad par nahin gaya warna uski biwi bhi aise hi wait karti 😆..
The only part which i found not needed was where Maan gets frustrated to show his wife's capability to the world.. dusron ko kyun kuchh prove karna when we are satisfied with ourself..

Bur then Maan found her journal and Maan found the real pleasure of his wife was in writing.. and She truly proved that



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in that part i was trying to show that men are no easily able take things at face value, mostly they take it at ego-
also there conversation where she asks if he is ashamed of her social status of housewife, there geet try to explain him the same that they do not need to prove that to anyone; and subsequently her being writer was kind of finding that hidden talent out.
Edited by Sundari. - 10 years ago

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