MG-OS||Wajood: Her Existence||Complete|| Part 2 on pg1 @20/12/15

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

lovely update...
Maan became a business tycoon from a middle class family ... Geet s feeling insecure and wanna to know wat position she hold in Maans life ...
loved it ...
Continue soon
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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome OS
Maan had a dream and he achieved it successfully with the help of his soul mate geet
The last conversation with reporter where maan answered about geet is soo cute and loving

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

wow such a beautiful story feel so real loved it

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

awesome os. loved it.

liked maans answer to reporter about geets contribution...

😊😊😊

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Congrats for the new OS..

Awesome.. Beautiful story..

Thanks for sharing...

Thanks for pm..

Finally geet got her answers..about her existence in his life...

N maan gave very beautiful n fantastic answer..

He as well realized what she went through all this time in that very moment...

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anky_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

That was a nice OS...
you warmly showed how their relationship built over the period of time...
Maan acquired success in business and his relationship with Geet too went on growing well. Both fell in love steadily...
Maan in his interview acknowledged Geet , however, I felt the story to be incomplete. It didn't justify with it's name. Though Maan tried to answer the question of her existence but it wasn't enough. Identity is something which is independent of relations...but overall it was a nice try!