Ye Fitoor Mera .. Laya Mujh Ko Hai Terey Kareeb.

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So Rizwaan Ahmed Khan is crumbling in front of her raging and screaming wife. Persistently. Preet demands her right whenever she gets a chance, and Rizwaan manages to flee that situation, every time, by hook or by crook. By lying or saying the truth, by looking in her eyes or by avoiding her, he manages to flee .. but this time .. he crumbled. He crumbled and he gave in.

Tomorrow we will get a clearer picture of how far did he give in, will he go all the way to give Preet her right because her pain is reaching a threshold that rizwaan cannot bear. Preet has her own tangent of pain. Imagine a wife living with her husband for the past 4 years and never having to felt his touch because apparently he is in love with his first wife? For how long can we expect her not to react, not to demand?

And Rizwaan .. what to say about the dilemma of this man, the love of his life thinks he is not coming near her because he loves somebody else? and yet he cannot soothe her pain, he cannot soothe it.

The two people in immense pain have now reached their threshold, Preet is no mood to listen anymore and Rizwaan is crumbling, he has ran out of ways to dodge Preet now.

He just came back from meeting the head of his mission, he just came back after defending her wife infront of Baba, and now his wife is screaming from a bleeding wound she is harboring .. so he gave in.

Ye Fitoor Mera .. Laya Mujh Ko Hai Tere Kareeb ..

Fitoor is an urdu word of arabic origin. It means disorder. Chaos, disarray.

The state of mind that doesn't let you think straight. The state of mind that lets you succumb to your vulnerabilities. The state of mind that is so complex that you shut your brain and pull your love in your arms shouting .. "nahi jaane de sakta .. "

The woman whom he is suppose to leave, from whom he is suppose to stay away, he has pulled her in his arms and said, "nahi jaane de sakta tumhain .."

Sigh .. Rizwaan Ahmed Khan .. that one virtue .. that one virtue that was suppose to stay with you, that one virtue that could be your your good memory in her mind, that you never touched her, never confessed love to raise her hopes .. never crossed your line, never asserted your right as a husband.

That one virtue that could be his chance of forgiveness .. he is going to lose because the fitoor of his mind is taking over.. the disorder of his mind , his mission his love, his pure heart .. all of it snatched away his one last hope of a good memory, maybe forgiveness too ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fantasia.

So Rizwaan Ahmed Khan is crumbling in front of her raging and screaming wife. Persistently. Preet demands her right whenever she gets a chance, and Rizwaan manages to flee that situation, every time, by hook or by crook. By lying or saying the truth, by looking in her eyes or by avoiding her, he manages to flee .. but this time .. he crumbled. He crumbled and he gave in.


Tomorrow we will get a clearer picture of how far did he give in, will he go all the way to give Preet her right because her pain is reaching a threshold that rizwaan cannot bear. Preet has her own tangent of pain. Imagine a wife living with her husband for the past 4 years and never having to felt his touch because apparently he is in love with his first wife? For how long can we expect her not to react, not to demand?

And Rizwaan .. what to say about the dilemma of this man, the love of his life thinks he is not coming near her because he loves somebody else? and yet he cannot soothe her pain, he cannot soothe it.

The two people in immense pain have now reached their threshold, Preet is no mood to listen anymore and Rizwaan is crumbling, he has ran out of ways to dodge Preet now.

He just came back from meeting the head of his mission, he just came back after defending her wife infront of Baba, and now his wife is screaming from a bleeding wound she is harboring .. so he gave in.

Ye Fitoor Mera .. Laya Mujh Ko Hai Tere Kareeb ..

Fitoor is an urdu word of arabic origin. It means disorder. Chaos, disarray.

The state of mind that doesn't let you think straight. The state of mind that lets you succumb to your vulnerabilities. The state of mind that is so complex that you shut your brain and pull your love in your arms shouting .. "nahi jaane de sakta .. "

The woman whom he is suppose to leave, from whom he is suppose to stay away, he has pulled her in his arms and said, "nahi jaane de sakta tumhain .."

Sigh .. Rizwaan Ahmed Khan .. that one virtue .. that one virtue that was suppose to stay with you, that one virtue that could be your your good memory in her mind, that you never touched her, never confessed love to raise her hopes .. never crossed your line, never asserted your right as a husband.

That one virtue that could be his chance of forgiveness .. he is going to lose because the fitoor of his mind is taking over.. the disorder of his mind , his mission his love, his pure heart .. all of it snatched away his one last hope of a good memory, maybe forgiveness too ..


Great write-up! Can't wait for tomorrow! I rewatched the recap several times. At first it looked like Preet was referring to consummation, but after rematching many times, I think she is actually referring to a confession from Rizwaan. Thats why when Rizwaan say "humne hammare rishte ko aage nahin badhaaya...", she says she didn't mean that. I think she is asking Rizwaan to clarify his feelings for her. Does he feel anything for her or not? So we might just have a passionate confession, but not a consummation.

I fear that if they consummate, it will work against Rizwaan even more once Preet finds out the truth, which I'm sure will happen right after this confrontation. Preet might feel that Rizwaan used her, and after such a big betrayal, she won't believe a word of his (that he truly loves her, and was manipulated by Baba). So maybe Rizwaan should keep it platonic for now. Wonder what the writers have planned though.

Also, I feel there is an outside chance that Rizwaan might confess his feeling to Preet AND also tell her why he can't take forward the relationship, that he is actually Rizwaan. That would be awesome.
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Shame on Sony for ending such a beautiful show. Crappy shows go on forever. They should have let this one run till its logical end. So pissed off right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kinzaaa yaaaraa katal kar ditta.. As if the precap is not enough .. You write about the turmoils of rizreet..

Lovely lovely write up..

I have a feeling there wont be a consummation but an intense scene for sure.. Till now the cvs haven't disappointed when it comes to Rizwaan's character.. Preet Ki conflicts ko dikhane ke liye Jo time thaa woh chavannichaaps ne kha liya..toh no hopes on that front..but I don't think rizu will take a step ahead..but then again I am not keeping any expectations right now.. Jo bhi dekhne ko mile..it will be great..because its Iqbal and mona we are talking about..

Now that I am out of the dazed rizreet eyelock..i feel Sana will tell rizu about baba's plans and who knows rizu might confess to preet.. Pata nahi kya hoga.. But I say ..bring it on !!

Thanks again for this lovely post..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing post
Amazing title

U write very well.
Pinning down all thoughts Rizwaan goes through.

Just finger crossed for tonight's episode.

Will be glad to see if their is consummation, but I hope they don't show it right now.

But if we get don't know how I will come out of Rizreet oh lala land ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet di! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"

"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"

"Tumne Trisha aur Bilal ka rishta kyu tod diya? Tum Ishaan nahi ho...aisa kyu kehe rehi thi Naina?

For days Preet was being bombarded with words that threatened to uproot her core existence... Even while not wanting to, she was forced to doubt Ishaan...

She even questioned him... Why won't you take our relationship forward? Am I not attractive to you? Do you still love Meghna? Or are you hiding some secret from me? That time Rizwaan let her believe that he was still in love with Meghna.. And Preet cried her heart out!

Preet patience regarding her husbands identity is being tested relentlessly... Why won't you take the next step..? What's stopping you..? I am guessing Preet can no more believe that's it's Meghana's memories that are stopping Ishaan... There is some other reason.. And that's why she wants Ishaan to take the next step that will dissolve all her doubts... A confession and maybe a step towards physical intimacy. Something that will steady her mind, make her believe that Ishaan is genuine.. Until now Preet had no reasons to believe that Ishaan is fake.. He has been THE ALMOST PERFECT husband, except for the love confession part and the physical intimacy part.. And Preet believes that when he takes this step along with her it will all be only PERFECT.

I can imagine Preet's pain if their marriage is consummated and Preet comes to know that he is really a terrorist involved with Baba in killing her family. She was molested that time... Will she then feel raped now? What status will Rizwaan have in her mind ? Her Husband..? Or a Terrorist..? What would the consummation stand for? Loved by her husband or Raped by a terrorist?

Preet is already in love with her husband, she has seen and experienced his goodness.. What impact will her love for him have on their equation after reveal?

Either way the story moves it has so much potential..but time constraints are killing the story and characters prematurely... thanks to the TRP hungry entertainment world..

I only guessing that before Preet and Ishaan return home.. Rizwaan's truth will be in front of Preet.. Five stars if Rizwaan himself confesses! Well things still have to play out in tonight's episode but it's always fun to speculate..

Lovely post Kinza...and whatever you have written about Rizwaan is superb!

Edited by Loveforlife - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Loveforlife

"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet di! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"


"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"

"Tumne Trisha aur Bilal ka rishta kyu tod diya? Tum Ishaan nahi ho...aisa kyu kehe rehi thi Naina?

For days Preet was being bombarded with words that threatened to uproot her core existence... Even while not wanting to, she was forced to doubt Ishaan...

She even questioned him... Why won't you take our relationship forward? Am I not attractive to you? Do you still love Meghna? Or are you hiding some secret from me? That time Rizwaan let her believe that he was still in love with Meghna.. And Preet cried her heart out!

Preet patience regarding her husbands identity is being tested relentlessly... Why won't you take the next step..? What's stopping you..? I am guessing Preet can no more believe that's it's Meghana's memories that are stopping Ishaan... There is some other reason.. And that's why she wants Ishaan to take the next step that will dissolve all her doubts... A confession and maybe a step towards physical intimacy. Something that will steady her mind, make her believe that Ishaan is genuine.. Until now Preet had no reasons to believe that Ishaan is fake.. He has been THE ALMOST PERFECT husband, except for the love confession part and the physical intimacy part.. And Preet believes that when he takes this step along with her it will all be only PERFECT.

I can imagine Preet's pain if their marriage is consummated and Preet comes to know that he is really a terrorist involved with Baba in killing her family. She was molested that time... Will she then feel raped now? What status will Rizwaan have in her mind ? Her Husband..? Or a Terrorist..? What would the consummation stand for? Loved by her husband or Raped by a terrorist?

Preet is already in love with her husband, she has seen and experienced his goodness.. What impact will her love for him have on their equation after reveal?

Either way the story moves it has so much potential..but time constraints are killing the story and characters prematurely... thanks to the TRP hungry entertainment world..

I only guessing that before Preet and Ishaan return home.. Rizwaan's truth will be in front of Preet.. Five stars if Rizwaan himself confesses! Well things still have to play out in tonight's episode but it's always fun tospeculate..

Lovely post Kinza...and whatever you have written about Rizwaan is superb!



Oh My God this is just soo lovely
⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It'll be interesting to see how much weightage Rizwaan's goodness (which Preet has seen for 5 yrs) will carry in Preets mind vs. the fact that he was a part of the same group which killed her family, when The revelation happens. Yes he was a part of the same gang. Some of the people from that gang caused Preets world to come down, shattered her beyond repair (I wouldn't consider Rizwaan as one of those, bcoz he was completely unaware). On the other Rizwaan who is supposedly one of them, has had just the opposite effect on her. He brought her back from that irreparable condition, breathed life into her, gave her a reason to live. So although initially for Preet Rizwaan may be synonymous with Baba, she may consider him one of them, will she discern the BIG difference? In a way, Rizwaan gave her all that back, which was cruelly snatched away by Baba, despite being a 'part' of the same gang(not saying that her family is replaceable, but he healed her and gave her a family to love and which loves equally). I feel this is an interesting paradox. The positivity that Rizwaan has brought in her life all these years, will it not help him in any way? Will it not have any effect on Preet ultimate decision? Will this good karma help in some way reduce or eliminate his bad karma (which was committed in oblivion)? Can it be the reason for Preet to give him and their relationship another chance? Owing to this, will she at least give him a chance to explain his story? Only time will tell. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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He is losing his only chance at Preet's forgiveness, but maybe.. just maybe.. This is the first step towards him being a changed man, a better man.. ! for Preet !
He is in dilemma, and as Baba said, Love trumps hatred, any day ! And The precap enough was proof enough ! I can't wait to see tonight's episode !



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Originally posted by: Loveforlife

"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet di! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"


"Woh Ishaan nahi hai Preet! Meri baat ka vishwaas karo!"

"Tumne Trisha aur Bilal ka rishta kyu tod diya? Tum Ishaan nahi ho...aisa kyu kehe rehi thi Naina?

For days Preet was being bombarded with words that threatened to uproot her core existence... Even while not wanting to, she was forced to doubt Ishaan...

She even questioned him... Why won't you take our relationship forward? Am I not attractive to you? Do you still love Meghna? Or are you hiding some secret from me? That time Rizwaan let her believe that he was still in love with Meghna.. And Preet cried her heart out!

Preet patience regarding her husbands identity is being tested relentlessly... Why won't you take the next step..? What's stopping you..? I am guessing Preet can no more believe that's it's Meghana's memories that are stopping Ishaan... There is some other reason.. And that's why she wants Ishaan to take the next step that will dissolve all her doubts... A confession and maybe a step towards physical intimacy. Something that will steady her mind, make her believe that Ishaan is genuine.. Until now Preet had no reasons to believe that Ishaan is fake.. He has been THE ALMOST PERFECT husband, except for the love confession part and the physical intimacy part.. And Preet believes that when he takes this step along with her it will all be only PERFECT.

I can imagine Preet's pain if their marriage is consummated and Preet comes to know that he is really a terrorist involved with Baba in killing her family. She was molested that time... Will she then feel raped now? What status will Rizwaan have in her mind ? Her Husband..? Or a Terrorist..? What would the consummation stand for? Loved by her husband or Raped by a terrorist?

Preet is already in love with her husband, she has seen and experienced his goodness.. What impact will her love for him have on their equation after reveal?

Either way the story moves it has so much potential..but time constraints are killing the story and characters prematurely... thanks to the TRP hungry entertainment world..

I only guessing that before Preet and Ishaan return home.. Rizwaan's truth will be in front of Preet.. Five stars if Rizwaan himself confesses! Well things still have to play out in tonight's episode but it's always fun to speculate..

Lovely post Kinza...and whatever you have written about Rizwaan is superb!




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