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Originally posted by: jayvenk

<font size="4">Thick lashes shyly screened</font>

<font size="4">Her khol lined eyes</font>

<font size="4">He was so near</font>

<font size="4">Yet so far</font>

<font size="4">Her fingers played with the red roses</font>

<font size="4">Their fragrance gently wafted</font>

<font size="4">Like a signal it slowly spiraled</font>

<font size="4">His eyes from the Danush shifted focus</font>

<font size="4">Across the murmuring court</font>

<font size="4">Their glances held</font>

<font size="4">The wait is over my beloved.</font>

Marvelous work jayvenk... 👏

Thank u sahana. And eternity😃 Jaishree here.

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Thick lashes shyly screened

Her khol lined eyes

He was so near

Yet so far

Her fingers played with the red roses

Their fragrance gently wafted

Like a signal it slowly spiraled

His eyes from the Danush shifted focus

Across the murmuring court

Their glances held

The wait is over my beloved.

Originally posted by: jayvenk

She stood

Watching the chariot disappear.

Laxman glanced back just once

And then he was gone.

She stood

Her head held high

No sadness

No anger

No fear

She stood

The trees

The birds

The wind

The tiniest blade of grass

stood silent

As if in Waiting

And then

There was

Just the slightest moment

Deep within her womb

She smiled

Protectively Her hand covered

Her happiness

I understand navya, thank you

uh. looks like I missed fee drabbles. okay let's go one by one. before I start commenting, a request to the writers, can u have a name or title for each piece of ur work? it will be easy to point to them while we talk or discuss. mandavi's travel to ayodhya. this one shruthi, is an anothet beautiful one. loved it

another drabble on the last pair. never imagined that they will celebrate the night like that. nice and thumbs up for this.

@barbie my fav character in Ramayana is hanuman and u have written this amazing piece on him. Loved it to the core. hanuman wanting to know the reason for his lord's agony. I can't wait

hi tuna, ur poem is nice but I got lil confused with the line " I saw him putting flowers in bhabhi's hair". u said this poem is from urmila's POV. then who is the narrator and the person he/she is referring to?