short fiction series~index updated 6/2 - Page 17

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

hi tuna, ur poem is nice but I got lil confused with the line " I saw him putting flowers in bhabhi's hair". u said this poem is from urmila's POV. then who is the narrator and the person he/she is referring to?

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Shruthi tuna barbie simply superb stables pens and stories.

We can make our own mini series.

😃

Originally posted by: tuna_star

I think u missed the note dear... after ~~ sign the next part id from lakshman's pov..

😛

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

oh okay, so its ram who is keeping flowers to Sita and lakshman sees if and remembers urmila?

I don't think ram will show his affection on Sita while he very well knows that lakshman is away from his wife.

sorry, this is my POV.

Originally posted by: tuna_star

friends ke beech no sorry...😊

I know yaar couples those days didnt do PDA 😉.. . waise I agree to u.. I just thought ki maybe he can witness something mistakenly... staying 14 years alone with a couple and not witnessing any cute moment thora muskil lagta hai(talking abt humans)...😉😉

PS:gutter mind😲😳

Originally posted by: tuna_star

Thank u so much guys for the appreciation it means a lot...🤗

I m being lazy but i will post my next work soonish...😊

guys may I send buddy request to u all plzzz...😊😕

Naira accepted the buddy request...😊

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

buddy request?
okay send it. I may take time to accept it as am using my mob now.