IshRa Love Story - 15/01/2016 - Chp 2 pg 5

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Hi Guys,

Thanks for all the comments, like and PM on my other stories.

This concept has been in my mind for quiet few months but owing to lack of time as I am unable to update my IshRa memories and Abhika Love regularly I was pushing this back but finally decided to pen it down.

This story is entirely different from YHM except for the names of the cast.

Please leave your valuable comments after reading the story.


Index


Chapter 1 - Below


Chapter 2



Thanks,

Maya

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IshRa Love Story

Character Sketch:

Mr. Vishwanthan Iyer(Viswa): Proxy Business tycoon

Mrs. Madhavi Iyer: Wife of Vishwanthan Iyer controls the business empire. Matriarch of the house what she says is the law in their house.

Vanditha Balachandran(Vandu): First daughter of the Iyers. She likes parties.

Balachandra Ramchandran(Bala): Husband of Vanditha works as a professor in a college. He is Mr. Iyer friend son

Ishita Iyer: Second daughter of Iyers she is extra ordinarily beautiful just completed her studies.

Mihika Iyer: She is third daughter and a twin studying in college.

Karthik Iyer: Son of Iyers and twin of Mihika studying in the same college. He is slightly irresponsible,shrewd and very loyal.

Shagun Aurora: Friend of Ishita she is working for Bhalla company and staying with Iyers in their house (She is a positive character in my story)

Suburamanian Ravichandran(Subbu): Son of Madhavi brother and he is thinking about Ishita getting married to him

Mr.Ravichandran(Ravi): Brother of Madhavai

Mrs. Deviyani Ravichandran(Devi): Wife of Mr.Ravichandran. Little bit money minded.

MR. Ompraksh Bhalla(Om): Face of Bhalla industries

Mrs. Santhoshi Bhalla(Toshji): Home maker

Mihir Bhalla: Studying in college a year senior to Mihika

Rinki Bhalla: Studying in college a year junior to Karthik

Romi Bhalla: CEO of Bhalla Industries

Simmi Khurana: Wife of Prameet Khurana - Home maker

Prameet Khurana: CEO of PSR Company a sister concern of Bhalla industries.

Sarika Raghav(Sarika): Works for Iyer group of companies and sister of Abimanyanu

Abhimanyanu Raghav(Abhi): Owner of Raghav enterprises

Raman: Cook of Iyers/Manages the household expenses

Murgan: Driver of Iyers

Shanthi: Maid of the Iyers house

Neelu: Maid of the Bhalla house

I will add other characters as story progress.

Chapter: 1

It is around 11:30 in the night Ishita stealthy reaches the servant's room looking around once again as to see no one is there and then she enters Raman room stealthy and sees him sleeping on a steel cot. She sits at the foot of the bed closes her eyes and images keep flashing before her eyes and unknowingly tears fall from her face on Raman's foot which wakes him up and he realizes it is Ishita who is crying with great difficulty he pretends to be asleep. Ishita after crying her heart out slowly caresses his face and covers him with a duvet and left the room.

Raman on the other hand sat on the bed after she left and said to her I am sorry Ishita I know I am the reason you are so sad and I am unable to comfort you and loses his sleep after that he calls his friend after talking to him for some time his heart settles down finally he sleeps peacefully.

In the morning Raman comes with a tray of coffee in hand and knocks on Ishita room. Ishita scrambles from the floor cursing herself for sleeping late and places all her things on the bed and rushes to open the door. Raman when he comes inside he sees Ishita chest is rising and falling due to her fast activities earlier he turns away from her immediately and places the coffee on the side table. Ishita doesn't understand why he is avoiding seeing her and then realizes her state and a slow blush creeps on her face.

Raman on the other hand finally looks at her face and sees a blush there which warms his heart in turn making him smile contentedly which brings out his dimple. Ishita seeing his dimples her eyes light up 1000 volts and when she goes near to touch him he immediately leaves the room giving her an awkward smile which dims her happiness when Raman came out of the room he once again says sorry to her in his mind and walks towards the Iyers room.

Raman knocks on the Iyers door Madhavi opens the door and takes the coffee from him and telling him the menu for the day. Vishwa just smiles at him from the back. Raman then knocks on Bala room he opens the door and Raman gives the coffee to Bala and Vandu in the background mumbles to stop the noise saying that my head is aching. Then Raman knocks on Mihika room who takes the coffee from him sleepy and finally Raman reaches Karthik room but Karthik takes the coffee from him but looks into Raman eyes as if trying to find the truth from Raman

Raman is busy cooking Shagun enters the kitchen after making sure as to no one is there with lot of files on her hand and takes the coffee from the pot and sits on the breakfast nook and smiles at Raman. Raman gives her a smile once again making sure as to no one is there continues with his work.

All the family comes for breakfast Ishita looks at Raman and feels guilty for his state. Vishwa on the other hand praises Raman for his culinary skills. Raman takes the praise with a smile and leaves from there. Karthik walks behind him and says to Raman I know you are hiding something and I will find out soon what it is. Raman gives a smile to him as well as walks away.

Please leave your valuable comments and press the like button if you like the update


Do tell me do you guys want me to continue with story as well.


Thanks,

Maya

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Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok Raman is not be a cook...but pretending to be one ..he's definitely there to win his Inlaws heart ...for Ishu?
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Originally posted by: Mdwst

Ok Raman is not be a cook...but pretending to be one ..he's definitely there to win his Inlaws heart ...for Ishu?


Hi Viji, Thanks



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raman is here for ishu infact he is son of bhalla and he is here to win ishus hand...
Am I right????
Please tell yes...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Raman is here for ishu infact he is son of bhalla and he is here to win ishus hand...

Am I right????
Please tell yes...
Update soon


Hi Sushma,

Thanks, glad you liked the update will continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was awesome...
I love the starting

First i was like Raman is cook...but i realised he is doing this win his in laws...

I am super duper excited...

Loved it...

Update next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulation Maya for new story after long break🥳🥳 really raman real cook or just his talent and his image or behind the chef dress he is someone else . Interesting how he serve coffee to every bedroom and a kind to see everyone out of bed like that every morning especially Ishida. continue update dear. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When I read the cs...I was like...he is a cook...
Then I understood when I read the part
Interesting start...
Nice characterisation
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting
I think Raman is pretending to be cook
Update soon

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