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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1



I am starting it as soon as Zoya reached the warehouse where Asad was unconsciously layed down with Tanveer in a very compromising state.

As soon as Zoya reached the ware house, she panicked. She had lost all the important people in life, she can't afford to loose him. She upholded her choli with her efforts and tried to walk more fast and find Asad. As soon as the door flung opened, what she saw was beyong imagination. She couldn't believe what she saw but it was the truth. She saw Tanveer rising up from the bed and giving a evil smile. She now knew this had to be something to do with Asad's state. Yeah, she somewhere know that Asad couldn't betray her butbshe can't refuse to what her eyes saw. Suddenly she saw Asad moving his hands and decided to move, before she could run he was wide awake. His expressions were even more shocking than what was on Zoya's.

He Quickly wore his Sherwani and Ran behind Zoya. "Zoya...". He frustratingly moves his hand in his hairs. And as he reached out side, he saw her. He saw her crying under the thundrous weeping of the god. Yes, it was raining but not god's abode but his grief. They were the tears of pain and aghast. That acid was unbearable as the heartbreak of Zoya's. And he knew that. Yet couldn't understand the game god was playing with him.

He reached to Zoya and looked at her. As their eyes met, they showed emotions, nothing but fear, pain, anger, plead, regret. Fear of loosing someone, pain of betrayal, anger for breaking the trust and himself/herself, plead of trusting one and regret, regret of loving someone, regret of not knowing anything. "Zoya.." he spoke but stopped as saw her hands in air stopping him. He stopped and looked at her. He didn't know what was happening, what he knew was, that something was wrong. Not wrong but not in place.

She looked at him, how much she trusted him and he, he did nothing but gave her betrayal. She moved back as he moved forward and then both stopped, a sob left her throat, piercing his heart. She closed her eyes and her knees gave away and she fell on the ground on knees crying. She cried harder till they turn more painful and hoarse.

"Zoya Meri..Meri Koi galti nahi .."*Zoya There..There is no Fault*He spoke with tears coming closer to her when she cutted him

"MR. Khan aapki koi galti nahi , par meri hai. Aapse pyaar karna, meri zindagi ki Sabse badi galti, sabse bada gunah hai. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You."*Mr.Khan you have no fault, but its mine. Loving you, is the biggest Mistake, biggest Sin of my life. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You.*

She cried and then Ran as he tried to stop.

Har Khata Ki Hoti Hai Koi Na Koi Saza
Gam likhe toh Kismat Mai, Toh Ban Hi Jaati Vajah
Ab Sabhi Gam Ashko Mai Simat Sai Gaye
Toh Sabhi Aanso Palko Sai Lipat Sai Gaye,
Ohh Piya Aye Na , Oh Piya Aye Na.

"Zoyaaa...!!" Asad shouts and stumbles on ground


Zoya reached at the wedding hall. All distorted. "Zoya What Happen?" Nazma went to her as she saw her state

"Mr..Khan..Mr. Mr.Khan, he.." Zoya tried to speak but couldn't, Dilshaad's heart grew heavy. As she was about to ask Zoya more she saw Asad coming there. She ran to him and asked "Asad?" but he could utter a thing but what she saw was Tanveer coming from behing smiling evily.

And she now knew what was the matter. She couldn't meet her eyes with Zoya or Asad.

Between her state of shock, Nazma too got the whole of matter and she all do was cry.

"Asad, I am ashamed of calling you My Son."Dilshaad looked at him with tears

"Bhaijaan.!! We didn't expected you to do something like this."Nazma said hugging Zoya crying.

"Ammi..Listen"Asad moves forward to justify him.

"Bass..!! Uss Phool si bachi pai kyaa beet rahi hai tumhe andaza hai?"*What the flower like child is going through, do you have any idea?*

And they left giving disgusting looks to Tanveer.


"Ammi..Zoya is not in her room"Nazma came running in kitchen with Panik.

"What? How is this even possible..Where could she go?"

"Ammi, I don't know, I had searched for her in the whole house"

"Hey Allah Miya, uss bachi kai saath aap aur kya kya kar rahe ho, wo toh bass apne Abbu ko dhundne ayi thi"

And then she rushed to Asad's room. As soon as she entered, she saw was all the room was a mess. And Asad beside wall sitting with tears leaving his eyes. Dilshaad looked at him and said "Iss galti kai gunehgaar tum ho, aur saza uss bachi ko mil rahi hai Asad. Kya meri Parwarish aisi thi?"*You are the reason of this mistake, but that child is getting its punishment. Was my values were like that?*

He looked up "What happened to Zoya, Where is she?". Dilshaad nodded in a no and then he got up worried and Ran taking the keys of his car.

"Where are you going Asad?"

"To find her.." he shouted

"She must've gone..!!" She sighed

"No..Ammi she promised she won't go. Not for the sake of promise, I still know she won't go, not untill she find her Abbu" and then ran.

As he drove the car, he continues to cry and think was about Zoya. He just hoped that she would be there where he is thinking. He just hoped, hoped that he maybe know her, know her so well.



Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
THIS CHAPTER IS FOR IPSITA AND AJU. IPSITA IS HAVING THE WHOLE FF ON HER NAME AND AJU, THIS ONE COZ SHE IS MY LONG LOST RIDHIMA 🤣. LOVE YOU ALL FOR THE OVERWHELMING RESPONSE.

Love
Sanju ^_^

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Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Maine Pm ninkara tu agayi. Stalker.
Aja aja
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Maine Pm ninkara tu agayi. Stalker.

Aja aja

HAWW...!!! APNE ARMAAN KO PYAAR KARNA STALKARNA HAI KYA?😉😳
MAIN TOH TUMHARI HELP KAR RHI THI...TAKKI TUMHE MUJHE BULANE K LIYE PM NA KARNA PARE😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awee..Aju I love Uuu Rey.
Meri Ridhima, tu gussa mat ho. Tujhe toh pata hai mai kitna paagal hoon. Tum toh bohut samjhdaar ho Dr.Shashank Gupta ki beti. Sasurjee nai bohut ache sai padhaya hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Awee..Aju I love Uuu Rey.

Meri Ridhima, tu gussa mat ho. Tujhe toh pata hai mai kitna paagal hoon. Tum toh bohut samjhdaar ho Dr.Shashank Gupta ki beti. Sasurjee nai bohut ache sai padhaya hai.

ACHHA AB BAS BHI KARO ARMAAN!! TUM PAPA SE KAB BAAT KAROGE?😳
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#47

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

ACHHA AB BAS BHI KARO ARMAAN!! TUM PAPA SE KAB BAAT KAROGE?😳

Bass 2 Min mai sabko PM karke aya, phir iss bare mai baat karenge. Ek baar Sasurjee pat jaye toh kya kehna.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Bass 2 Min mai sabko PM karke aya, phir iss bare mai baat karenge. Ek baar Sasurjee pat jaye toh kya kehna.

THIK HAI...JALDI AANA😳 TC BABY..MWUAH...❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Amuu di waiting for your unress


Done
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: _Amrita_

brilliant updates

sorry for delay😳

Thnx amuu di. Np

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