Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't know when the idea came into my Mind when I was watching MEIEJ.

KABHI NAA KAHO ALVIDA

Prologue.

A Girl Sitting in front of a Beautiful Idol of Lord Ganpati, her Face as well as her Dimples resembles her Father very much according to her Mother which is She hate the most in her whole life. With her closed Eyes She Prays in her mind, "Bappa you gave me everything in my life which I never asked but Today I am asking you One thing that is to give all the happiness to My Mumma she never asked you this as She Always think of us Please Bappa, Today is her Birthday and I wanted to make this Day Best Day in her life." As She open her Eyes and Prays One last time as She hears Running Sound of footsteps

She turns and Find her Friend Pari Standing there looking at her as She says,"Your Dangerous Si..." With this only She knew what is going to happen.

Somewhere at other Place Six Bikers Wearing a Stylish jackets and Helmets wating for a Girl Standing Near the Race track with a Red clour Cloth in her hand , as She drop the cloth Within a minute Bikes started to run like a jet in the Track, Everyone watching started shouting for There Favourite one but the most Common was "ROCKSTAR" , "ROCKSTAR" which was running in a very High Speed .

" Who is this Rockstar " One of the Girl asked to her friend "You will see my My Dear" Her friend Said to her and again continues to Watch. A stylish Bike stop perfectly and smoothly cross the line leaving every Bickers behind, everyone shouted"ROCKSTAR". Still siting on the Bike balancing with leg Bicker Remove her helmet allowing her hairs to fall over her shoulder and her Beautiful Brown eyes which to make everyone Fall for her and She utter one word which is "Ahaan"..

It's My first Story So I was very nervous So if I made a mistake so please don't be angry if you want me to further continues pleases like or comment.


Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Promo

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Teaser

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Tinku2015 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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d 😛 nice n diff..concept n this side of madhu would want to see more ...pl continue...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new story dear..do continue..this is our forum...
you can write as per your wish...will surely encourage you...

Racer Madhu...interesting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is she Rishbala's daughter? Interesting prologue...
Waiting for the update! Thanks for pm me!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for ur first story,
Interesting prologue , different concept madhu as a racer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on ur first story.😛
Is she Rishabala 's daughter?
She is a rockstar as well as a racer.😛 Very different concept.
Plz continue soon.
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. Nice start. I think both girls are twins or same one. Continue it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for the new story. very interesting one. is the racer madhu or trish? any way do update soon n dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intriguing start. Looking forward to next part . Thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start
Madhu is racer then who was d one praying

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