Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 18

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ananya2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update, loved it, continue soon.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey girl ! I am quite impressed with the plot of this story . Its unlike the usual love saga which I read or write about Rishbala . And the most eye catching thing is that its Rishabala's story even though they have 2 beautiful daughters ... Ok so the duo have taken Madz signatures on the divorce paper . I have done this trick of taking signature of my mom when I was a kid and till date she isnt aware about it LOL . Hey but that was on my report card bcz I got less marks in maths . Holy crap I will never do such tricks of tricking and deceiving like how her daughters did ... I dont know with which character to sympathise and for which character I should feel like giving a tight slap . I am still waiting for the main secret of Rishbala to come out so that I can get a clear picture and then decide who is at fault . I am looking forward for it . And good going . You know what...actually you should have written this story when MB was on air after that wedding fiasco near the lake side or maybe when they got married with 7 vows , then maybe the CVs could have taken this plot of yours and maybe we could have got another mindblowing year for MB . No worries baby , better late than never . Adios .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great part
Sorry for delay.
So Maya is going in search of her father. I wonder how they will react when they find to is their father. How will rk react? I guess there is going to be fireworks as father dynamite meets daughter dynamite.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Hey girl ! I am quite impressed with the plot of this story . Its unlike the usual love saga which I read or write about Rishbala . And the most eye catching thing is that its Rishabala's story even though they have 2 beautiful daughters ... Ok so the duo have taken Madz signatures on the divorce paper . I have done this trick of taking signature of my mom when I was a kid and till date she isnt aware about it LOL . Hey but that was on my report card bcz I got less marks in maths . Holy crap I will never do such tricks of tricking and deceiving like how her daughters did ... I dont know with which character to sympathise and for which character I should feel like giving a tight slap . I am still waiting for the main secret of Rishbala to come out so that I can get a clear picture and then decide who is at fault . I am looking forward for it . And good going . You know what...actually you should have written this story when MB was on air after that wedding fiasco near the lake side or maybe when they got married with 7 vows , then maybe the CVs could have taken this plot of yours and maybe we could have got another mindblowing year for MB . No worries baby , better late than never . Adios .



Thanks dear..
Wish i would have written this story that time so CVs might would have been taken our MEIEJ
Edited by Pmmpta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8.

Maya taking her Coffee Cup Step out of her Balcony watching Mumbai, it has been few Hours since She landed but now only She Started to feel Connected with Mumbai, Maybe Because her Mother Passed her life's 22 years in this city, feeling really Board She decided to spend some time in exploring this City and then her real work will start that is to Search Rishbh Kundra. "Good Morning Ma'am." Hotel Manager wishes her giving Car keys. Maya gently nods and takes Keys from Manager. "This is Your Car keys Ma'am and if you want anything else you can tell us.. Wish you have a great day in Mumbai." Manager says. "yeh thanks, but I need a favour, Please don't tell this to My Mother that I am here in Mumbai and if you dare to Say.. you better soon start hunting a New Job, Understand." Maya says smilingly and went from there leaving a shocked Manager standing there. Taking her Car Maya Drives.

"Congratulations Rk ! your latest Romantic Movie Darmiyaan Broke all Records of Box office, your Movie got great review, So how you felling now ?. One of Journalist asked Rk. "Yeh, it feels so Great and Proud too When your Movie Breaks all records of Box Office." Rk says smilingly. "Rk, Abhay Kapoor's Movie Deewana will Collide with your Movie Fitoor on 20th March 2016 so... What do you think ?. Journalist ask him. Rk gave them A Smirk and replied "Did you Know that Deewana was first Offered to Me but I Reject that offer, don't want such Crap Movie.. only our Superstar Abhay Kapoor can get this." Everyone laugh hearing Rk. "How much he Can try, but he can't hold a candle next Your Rk." Rk says. "Is there any other Questions, if have then you all are having only 5 minutes." Rk's assistant tell everyone. "Rk, your Wife Madhubala was last Spotted in South Africa in business conference, She is now one of the Top Businesswoman in USA... we tried to contact her but she remains quit and what about your twins daughters did they know about you and if yes then will there is a chance for us To have a great opportunity to see them." Keira a top journalist asked Rk.

Bittuji stare a Rk angrily his Sister is a Hot topic in this industry since 21 years and this Media also disturbs Madhu whenever she came to India. If Maya and Vibha got to know about this how will they react with situation, through Vibha is very understanding but Maya she is exactly like Chief, she will burn this whole world. Bittuji thinks and sighs.Rk holds his fist tightly as he tries to calm his anger, as much as he likes this industry he hates it too, Media made his life terrible everytime one would surely asked this question. "tell Us Rk." Keira says standing up, everyone too started asking same questions to Rk. "Enough." Rk Shouted and leaves from there leaving media.

"Damm." Maya shouted as her Car Stopped infront of complete isolated road at Night. "Shit what will I do now." Maya says coming out from her Car. "Let me Call that Manager." Maya picks her phone and Started dialling Manager's number. "Bloody Hell there is no Network here ." Maya shouted and kicks the Car angrily. "Ooch..." Maya shouted.2 Hours later..."Hey..." Maya shouted as a Car Passes from the Road. "God, Can't they just give me a lift." Maya says and again Sat on her Car. "Hey!!!!!..." Maya shouted seeing A car, the Car stops and 3 - 4 Fully Drunk Mens Step out of Car "Hii... Sexy wanna come, will have funnn..." One of the Men says. Maya fumes as they came Closer to her , "Don't come Near me... I will kill you." Maya shouted. "KILL ME BABY." One said gripping Maya's shoulder making Maya angry. Maya angrily Kicks his Private Part with her knees making him Fall down "don't try to Mess up with Me understand." Maya says angrily. "Ahhh..." "She is acting so Smart I will show you who I am." One said pointing gun towards Maya. They started to came closer to her, through Maya is a Black Belt Champion but She Decided Not Make any more scene as they are fully Drunk and they can do anything, making a quick decision she Run fastly and all the Men run Behind her. Maya hide behind a tree as She tries to Calm her Breathe. Bappa please help Me, Maya thought. "There She is." Maya gasps in Fear without seeing Back She Run as far as She could. "Help me." Maya shouted as a Car passes away. "Mama, I want you." Maya says as tears started coming out from her eyes.

"Ah.." Madhu Put the knife on Table and Started Cleaning her cut, She Bandages her hand She doesn't know but She was felling restless. Madhu tries Calling Maya but She only says THE NUMBER YOU ARE TRYING TO CALL IS CURRENTLY OUT OF COVERAGE AREA PLZ TRY LATER. Feeling Restless she Enters Vibha's room who was Sleeping on her Bed with her Books spread all over her Bed and laptop still on. Turning laptop off Madhu ruffles Vibha's hair and kisses Her forehead, They are her life and if anything happened to them she will die, she is alive only for them till now.

"Mama." Vibha says waking up. "you are so tried Vibha Sleep." Madhu says. "What happened to your hand." Vibha panicked seeing her Hand. "Nothing just a small cut." Madhu tries to explain. "IT IS NOT A SMALL CUT MAMA." Vibha examines her hand. "Didn't I told not to work so much, you are handling a Huge company and now you also wanted to work what is this, your must relax mama." Vibha orders Madhu. Vibha takes Madhu's hand and drag her to Madhu's Room and stand up there eating her brains until Madhu sleeps. "Come sleep with me Vibha." Madhu says to vibha. Vibha jumps on Bed and sleep with Madhu, "What happened Vibha, you are so silent since few days tell me." Madhu says caressing Vibha's hair. Vibha don't know what to say to Madhu guilt started coming again in her Mind. Should I tell her or Not. Vibha thinks and turns towards Madhu's side where she found Madhu sleeping. Vibha just smiles seeing Madhu.

Rk drives his car In High speed as he tries to Recollect the words said by That journalist. His Madhu hates, His Daughters hate him, his Mother hates, everyone hates him is there good reason to live. He thought. "I wanted to end myself now... This is enough." Rk says angrily and his Car tuned towards the Nearby Cliff.

Maya Runs and tries to find the way Back to Main Road and all drunk Mens still behind her running. They again spotted her and Maya falls down on road And her head hit by A stone, she tries to get up but her head was so much paining. "Where you will go Now." One said. They came closer to Her, Maya closes her Eyes in fear but then a Flash of Car hit her eyes and she opens her eyes but Can't see who the person his. A Man jump out of his Car and punches of the drunk guy hard on his face and guy falls down, He beat everyone and everyone run away from there. "Ahh.." Maya shouted in Pain. He picked Maya and help her to settle down on Car. "Are you Okay Girl." He Ask worriedly. Maya tries to open her eyes but her head is Blasting so much due to falling. "Ahh.. My Head." Maya shouted in pain. "Who are you," Maya asked to him few minutes later. "Rk." Rk replied to Maya.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update ... So finally RK came to his daughters rescue ... OK so I am imagining the next chappy like this - RK will take his daughter to his home and would take care of her and he will feel connected to her but still they both will be unaware of the relationship they share . Maybe Bittuji might be able to conclude this fact that they both are father-daughter by eyes or by Maya's temper or etc etc ... As usual media doesn't have any other good work than interferring in someone's life . I am still waiting to know the reason behind Rishbala's sepration and the reason why no one likes RK in his house . Nice execution of the story .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
I think roma sent Maya purposely to rk
And also think roma is in the silent mission to reunite Rishbala
Maya going to be a papa's girl it is going to be fun

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part.
RK is his daughter's saviour unknown to both of them.
now waiting to see how the truth reveals.
Also curious if RK knew about Madhu's where abouts why he didn't go to her & apologize (seems he has hurt her)?
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update,
loved it
why no one likes him and why rk and madhu got separated
finally father & daughter met with each other and rk saved her from goons
thanks for the pm
Edited by harini_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super part now rk got to meet his daughter

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