Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 27

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OMG!! RK and maya face off was amazing...loved it dear
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Lovely update enjoyed dad and daughter fight
Waiting for reasons why they r away from rk
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Awesome update, please do continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: zelja89

Awesome update, please do continue soon😊

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Part 11

Maya Happily Started whistling as She Came out of the Studio. It was Really fun to fight with that Superstar Rk. "What does he think of himself.. He don't know who am I. Now he will never Mess up with Me." Maya says as turned towards her Car but stop in Midway seeing her Car condition her Car's all four tyres are pulled out, Windshield was Broken in other words HER CAR WAS COMPLETELY MESSED UP!! . A Car stop infront of her and Window Class pulled down, She Saw Rk Siting inside Car with a Smirk on his Face. Rk throws a bundle of Cash towards her "oh, your Car.. Sorry for that..Take this.. If you want I can give you more money.. " Rk says as He wears his goggles and then he car drives away. Maya stand there like a Status still not Digesting what happened. Bittuji came towards her and Started Shaking her "Maya!!"

"Deepali!!" Radha shouts as she Came out of her Room. "Yes, Mumyji." Deepali Came toward her with Sikky Behind her. "I am Going to Mandir. Do you want to Come?" Radha Ask her picking Puja Ki thali. "No, Mumyji.. I am not feeling Good today and would be coming anytime now, he must be tried and hungry. So I will stay here. Or if you want then You can take Sikky with you." Deepali says Disinterestly. "Mumyji, even I can't go. My Wife is not feeling good. I will take care of her." Sikky replied holding Deepali. "Stop it Sikky." Deepali says as She Pushed him away. "Alright then I will go alone." Radha says and leaves. 'Wife you should take rest." Sikky says Running Behind her as Deepali walks way.

"Maya!!! Plz Slow Down.. I don't want to die." Bittuji tells Maya worriedly. Maya in Reply increases the Speed of Car, Bittuji hold his Breath. He knew today is the last day of his life. "Mamu!! How.. How can he.. He messed up with me.. He will pay for this." Maya says as She Drink whisky directly from The bottle while driving Car. "Bappa.. Save Me." Bittuji says folding his hand praying to GOD as Maya Drives More Harshly. Suddenly Bittuji Spot A Car coming towards from other side Them "Maya!!" Bittuji shouts. Maya tries to Control the Steering wheel and Car Slowly stops. But other Car collide with a Tree. "Maya.. What you have done!!" Bittuji says angrily as he Step out of Car. Maya too Runs behind him.

"Auntyji..." Bittuji Says as he Saw Radha In Car. "Are you Ok?" Bittuji ask as he Help her to come out of the Car. "I am fine Bittuji." Radha Replied. "Mamu.. Driver is Fine." Maya says as came toward him. "Mamu!!" Radha says as She looked at Maya. "Aunty are you ok?" Maya ask her. "Maya everything is Fine.. You go sit inside car." Bittuji says Maya worriedly knowing Radha is Soon gonna realize who she is seeing Maya's Appearance. "Bittuji.. Is She is My G..." Radha was about to say when suddenly she falls down.

"Bittuji.. Where She is." Radha ask Bittuji as soon She get up from the Bed. "Who?"'Bittuji ask her. "Maya!!" Radha replied. "Wo.. Auntyji.." Bittuji tries to Say. "I want to Meet her.. I know She is My Granddaughter." Radha says as She Cries. "Please Auntyji.. Don't do this.. Plz. They don't know anything.. Maya will broke down if she got to know what happend in Past.. Bhabhiji never told them anything.." Bittuji says as he begs her, Radha was About to open door but stop in midway. "You are Right Bittuji." Radha says as Sat down on Sofa. Bittuji look at Her 'he Can't do this', "Auntyji, you can meet her. But please don't reveal who you are." Bittuji says "She is Like Chief." Bittuji warns her "She is?" Radha ask him in excitement. "But!!" "Go auntyji.. She is sitting in living room." Bittuji says.

Radha step ot of Room with Bittuji behind her and Find Maya sitting on Sofa in living Room, "Aunty.. Are you fine now?" Maya Ask her as soon as She spot her. "I am fine beta." Radha says as They sat down. "I am really sorry aunty." Maya says slowly."it's ok beta.. Don't worry I am worry.. And please don't call me Aunty.. Do I look like a aunty to you?. You can call me Dadi." Radha says as she caress Maya's face. "Dadi.." Maya says happily. "where I am?" Radha ask her curiously. "Aree.. This is My hotel." Maya Replied. "This you yours?" Radha ask her. "Yes.. This I My Mama's hotel." Maya says. "Oh. Tell me about your family." Radha ask her wanting to know more. "Well My Mother Name is Madhubala Malik. She I business women. I have a twin sister Vibha who is totally a Cry Baby.. Mama and Vibha compete each other when it came to crying then I have a Dog snoppy he is 10 years old gifted by Mamu..." And they continued to Talk. "Aunty.. I am sorry." Maya Says to Radha again and again. "How many times I have to tell you not to feel sorry.." Radha says in fake anger. "And, if you are really felling sorry. Then come to My House tomorrow for lunch." Radha says happily. "Ok I will come." Maya replied to her. Bittuji looked at Radha shockingly. "Ok, I will leave now. Will wait for you." Radha says she get up. "Good to see you." Maya replied as she walked behind her. "Auntyji.. I will drop you." Bittuji says.

"Auntyji!! What you have done.. How can you invite Maya." Bittuji ask her worriedly as he drives Car. "That is none of my business.. You have to handle that I only want My Maya to come for a lunch.." Radha says. Bittuji signs. "She is beautiful nah.. She is Completely taken after Madhu." Radha says as she Recollects their conversation. "Only by Appearance apart from that she was completely like chief." Bittuji replied as he knew Maya very well. " Really.", "She throws a lot of tantrum since childhood.. Whereas Vibha is Calm and loving person.. But Vibha's appearance is like Chief." Bittuji replied. "Shit, auntyji I forgot to tell you what happened today.. Maya and Chief fight with each other.." Bittuji says as he concentrates on Road. "What!! They meet.. But your Chief didn't recognize his own daughter." Radha furiously replied. "Woh.. Auntyji you don't know.. Actually Auntyji Chief didn't recognize them because Chief saw Bhabhiji everywhere.. In every girl.. So he thought it was his illusion. When he used to Romance with his co-stars he used to believe that he was Romancing with Bhabhji.." Bittuji explains. "He is a idiot."

Next Morning..

"Auntyji.. Everything is ready!! Chief is having a Shoot so he will be there for atlest 5 hours. Chief Pictures are Removed even Bhabhji's.. Only there is one Problem." Bittuji says As he looked at Deepali and Sikky looking at them curiously. "I'll handle them." Radha says. "Sikky, do you know what is happening?" Deepali ask sikky. "No wife.. Seems like some guests are coming." Sikky says as he looked everywhere. "Something is Fishy.." Deepali says as she looked at Radha.

Maya stop infront of Door as She waited for someone to open the Door. Within few minutes A servent comes and Open door for her. Maya smiles as She saw Radha standing there. "Mumyji who is there?" Deepali ask as she heard Doorbell. Deepali stood there still as She saw Madhu entering inside house. "Wify!! Why do you leave me?" Sikky backhugs Deepali. Deepali didn't utter a word. "Wify?" Sikky ask and he look where his wify was looking. "She looks like Madhubala." Dipali says still looking at Maya. "huh?" Sikky looks confused. "Hi Aunty." Maya wishes Radha. "Hello Beta, did you forget what you have call me." Radha ask her. "Oh.. Sorry DADI." Maya replied happily. "Dadi!!" Sikky whispers in deepali's ear. "Shut up." Deepali furiously whispers. "See.. You didn't coordinate with me otherwise Mumyji don't have to hear Dadi words from Strangers." Sikky tells her. "Idiot!! Didn't you see she looks like Chawlbala.. And didn't you saw glow in Mumyji's face.. She asked that girl to call her dadi.. It means..." Deepali says and sikky adds "Her Dadi." Sikky says disinterestly. Deepali look at Sikky she wanted to kill me Right NOW. "Sikky.. Mumyji is her Dadi it Means.. That She Is Rk's daughter." Deepali explains him. "Wow.. Junior Rk!! Wife lets go and Meet her. Her hot Chachu and Sexy Chachi." Sikky says as he walks towards Maya but deepali stops him "No, there I more that we didn't know.. Just wait and watch!!" Deepali says with evil smile on her face.

Precap : Rk v/s Maya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update,
loved it,
maya and radhaji both met and she came to know she is her granddaughter
both sikky & deepali recognized maya is rishbala's daughter seems like deepali is again planning sth against them,
waiting for the precap,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
even after 20 years deepali is the same. she is such a bitchy witch.even sikky is the same clown.
maya impressed me in this update. driving the car harshly when she gets angry, drinking and what not ? i loved this junior RK. rk is ready to pay back for his insult, as always. expecting their next meeting.
what about madhu? isn't she suspicious?
oops i forgot to say how your update is. it was beautiful, i was reading maya's part again and again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow! just an awesome update dear!
love rishbala!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update ... ROFL faceoff b/w daughter-father was Awesome :) Next time add more of their scenes :):) Great except for daddy dearest everyone could make out from the face that Maya is RK's daughter ... I want RK to realise SOON that Maya is his daughter , so do update their truth asap ... It was a good update . :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for inviting me to read ur story
I have just read the prologue and it sounded interesting
Looking forward to read it
Will surely read all the parts
But I won't be able to read it soon as I have exams approaching soon
But will try to read it

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