Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
nice concept..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
that was a mysterious beginning. Good luck with your story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats 4 d new n 1st story dear..do continue..
Racer Madhu...interesting...curious 2 know this side of her...n where is my hero u didnt mention😭 bt know he also d same as madhu...r she's rishbala's daughter? pls pls pls contn dear cant wait...n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue. Seems different.
do continue as per your wish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so different concept. what is RK then. waiting and waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for liking and commenting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1.

She turns and find Pari standing their looking at her as she says " Your dangerous Si..." Seeing her she knew what is going to happen next."Beta here take your Prasad" Pandit ji Interpreted them and gave Prasad. "Come now tell me what happened " . " Vibha your dangerous sister has beaten Three boys in our college, one got fracture too". Pari says. "What ,Why" Vibha worriedly asked. "Don't know". "Come lets meet her" . They sat on Pari's New BMW and started their journey .Vibha who was looking outside the Window silently watching their New York City were they live for almost 21 Years but she didn't found any connection with this city, She and her sister was born Here but then also She wasn't happy to be here She wanted to go somewhere else ,she feels like someone was waiting for her other place, feeling little awakened with the situation Pari started to have conversation" Vibha you and your sister both are twins Right" . " hmmm" . "Then why you both behave differently, I mean you are so Calm, caring, decent , well mannered but your Sister she so Wild, outspoken and she is so Kamini..." Pari was about to say further but she found Vibha glaring at her as if saying DON'T YOU DARE TO SAY A WORD AGAINST MY SISTER look , Pari gulped her saliva she knew Vibha is sweet but when it comes to her sister as well sa mother she too becomes The most dangerous species in this world.

At Racing Track " Ahaan" everyone started running toward her and started to hug her and Congratulate her , After Announcing her as Winner they Started to give Trophy to her she Refuse to accept " I don't Participate to take this So called Tropy for you , racing is my Passion , love everything " . Everyone looked shockingly at her but they didn't say anything , but one of the Biker Ken who was their Senior believe himself to be extra Intelligent interrupted her and says " Don't be over smart , if you have taken part in the competition then you must have to take trophy too " Ken angrily told her. She just gave him a usual smirk " I am not interested in this bloody trophy if you want take this " . He again started to shout at her and says " You don't have any Manner , didn't your Parent's teach you how to behave with your senior " . This was enough for Her, she shouted so loudly " HOW DARE YOU , TUM HOTE KONE HO MAYA ,' MAYA MALIK ' SE AISE BAT KARNE WALE " [who are to to talk to MAYA, MAYA MALIK in this Manner]. Maya was About to hit him but She hears her sister's voice. " Maya what are you doing , stop it ". Vibha came running to protect her sister. "Nothing babe just showing some people there place" Maya tells her calmly. "Hey Ken don't Mess up with her , you know na whose Daughters they are please, She has also beaten few guys in our college today I the last day of our college don't make it last Day of our life" One of the Ken friend pleaded him .Ken quietly make his way to his car from there. Everyone Again cheer for Maya's " Maya you are our Rockstar , you are so brave " one of girl tells her . " JAB JAB MAYA AAI HAI SIRF WO HI CHAAI HAI MERI JAAN " Maya tells them gave a goodbye and went from there taking her furious Sister with her.

"So Sorry Vibhu, I am not going to do this again " Maya holding both her ear with a cute smile . " No , I am not going to listen to you this time this is enough now ,everytime you mess up things and I Have to handle " Vibha angrily tells her . " What I have done " Maya started recognise what is she have done today . " Yeh Right , you don't know I will tell tell you firstly have beaten few guys in our college then now again here too you started to fight with him ,Maya today is our Mama' s birthday and this day you didn't stop what should I do with you". Vibha shouted at her. "Vibhu you are behaving like Mama please stop" Maya tells . Vibha looks at her , her sister is totally a mad person but what to do she loves her sister so much . " Now give me your big toothy smile" Maya started t o pull cheek's At last Vibha gave up and both the Sisters Sat in their Car bidding adieu to Pari.".

"Good Morning Ma'am" Receptionist Wishes a lady in 40's wearing a simple but elegant Saree entering a huge building with a beautiful smile on her face , nodding she push the door which led her inside a large office were so many employees sitting working in there system , they all stand up and wishes her happily. " She is so beautiful, who is she" one of a new employee asks to his colleague. " Yeh , She is the C.E.O of this Compancy Madhubala Malik" He tells.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Congrats for yourr first story,
Interesting prologue , different concept madhu as a racer, loved it. Loved the update, please continue soon, thanks for the PM Poorva.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
loved the update,
it is so different
madhu is not a racer but its maya and both maya & vibha are sisters the girl who was praying in temple was vibha they're madhu's daughters
waiting for rk's entry & also to know what happened in their past
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
ok so they r madhu's daughters. ok this one seems too interesting. where's rk? hope maya n vibha reunites them soon. awesome update buddy. thank 4 the pm

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