Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update, loved it. Father is come for daughter's rescue. Curious to know what happens next, please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
😛 thank u for the pm...nice update hope the daughter doesnt fall in love with rk...but pl when r u revealing the past on the separation of rk n madhu...v v anxious to know...the whole world knows about both ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
v well written.
maya in trouble n rk helped n saved his daughter..interesting
looking forward to next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
gr8 part..
finally maya and rk met
cont.soon

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Hey Everyone
Those who are interested in Getting PM of My Story can PM me...
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Hey Everyone Those who are interested in Getting PM of My Story Kabhi Naa Kakho Alvida can PM me...
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So rk met Maya. Seems fire works on the way as both hot headed peas of madhu's pot are together.
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
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Great updates.
Sorry for the late comments. Exams r never ending.😡
Maya is coming in search of her father. RK saves her from those idiots n is going to take care of her now.
What did RK do that everybody hates him now?
Waiting for,the story to unfold.
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Part 9.

Rk stood outside in the Balcony of the hospital staring at the Black Sky, he don't know Why is felling so Restless since Morning he Signs, "Mr. Kundra, there is no need to worry there is a small Cut, she is fine now but she needs Some Rest for atlest 2 weeks." Doctor arrives from the Room and tells Rk. Rk was about to enter the Room when seeing Bittuji Calling he picks up The Call, "Chief where are you. Are you Ok?." Bittuji asked Rk Worriedly. "Bittuji, I am OK. I am at Hospital now." Rk tell Bittuji.

"What Happened Chief... Accident??." Bittuji asked knowing him full well that he will do something disaster in anger. "No, Few Drunkard were Behind a Girl, So I rescued her. She was unconscious so I Brought her to hospital." Rk explains Bittuji. "I am Coming there." Bittuji tells. Rk tells Him Address of the Hospital and turns to watch the girl who was cutely sleeping on Bed.

Bittuji enters Hospital Panicked Searching for His Chief. Bittuji was about to Pass by a Room when Suddenly his eyes grew wide seeing Maya on Bed with Nurse in the room, "I don't have any Relative here." Maya tells Nurse. "Maya..." Bittuji worriedly enters the Room seeing her in this Condition.

"Mamu..." Maya gulps her Saliva seeing Bittuji, She wanted to tell nurce that She has Mamu who lived in Mumbai but then Mamu will create a huge Racket and so her he will got to know that she came to Mumbai to find that Men. "Seems like your Relative is here, I will come in Half an hour, now you can meet your Relative." Nurse tells Maya and leaves from there.

"What happened to you, Why you are in INDIA, did your Mother knows about your accident, where is She?." Bittuji started asking Questions continuously without taking singal Breathe. "Mamu, Calm Down... I am fine just few goons were behide, my head hit a Stone and got unconscious." Maya explains him about her few hours thrilling experience. "WHAT." Bittuji shouted. "Mamu, I AM FINE don't worry." Maya Says getting up. "No, don't get up." Bittuji tells Maya. "Let me Call Bhabhiji." Bittuji says and was about to Call Bhabhiji when Maya shouted " No, you Can't." "Why??." Bittuji asked her. "Woh..." Maya tries to Explain when suddenly Bittuji's phone started ringing, "Chief..." Bittuji horrified seeing Chief Calling "Wow...Mamu, you Know Chief Minister???." Maya asked impressed as her Mamu knows Chief Minister of India.

Bittuji looks at Maya then his Phone and again looks at Maya 'Chief said he rescued a girl from goons who was unconscious that Means Chief is the only One who saved Maya.' Bittuji thought seeing Maya. "I am Coming in Five minutes." Bittuji said and leaves the Room hurriedly leaving a Confused Maya.

"Bittuji where were you, I was hell tried calling you." Rk ask Bittuji angrily Seeing Bittuji coming. "Chief... Actually who." Bittuji started Blabbering. "Anyway I don't care." Rk says Causally flipping his Mobile Screen. "Chief where is that Girl." Bittuji asked Rk Praying that Rk is Not the one save Maya. "She is in that Room." Rk pointed towards the Same Room where Maya was admitted. "Did you meet her?." Bittuji asked Rk. "No, I haven't meet her yet." Rk tell Bittuji. 'Thank God.' Bittuji thought.

"Chief, you Can Go now, it so late and if Media got to know about this then... You know." Bittuji tells Rk. " No I will meet her First." Rk says as he don't know why but he desperately wanted to Meet her as her Voice sounds familiar with Madhu. "NO.. I mean plz plz Chief, This Media will again Create a Some misunderstanding, I beg you." Bittuji Begs Rk. Rk gave Bittuji a look and then decided to just leave seeing Bittuji going totally Mad.

"Mamu, actually My Friend Krati invited Me for Her Brother's Marriage." Maya lies to Bittuji. "Then why you didn't tell this to Bhabhiji ?." Bittuji ask sitting near Maya. "WO... Mama will Not allow me." Maya tells. "Plz Mamu don't tell this to Mama." Maya make a puppy face. "FINE, but where are you Staying?." Bittuji asked he is not going to stay Maya in this City alone. "In My Hotel." Maya smilingly says. "No, you can't. you will stay in My House." Bittuji says getting up.

"NO WAY." Maya shouted, Sunny is Fine She can Stay with Bittuji But his Wife and That Sweety is totally Mad and horrible. Bittuji thinks for a while, Taking Maya to his Home is not a easy task, She will Made him Cry and beg him to come to his house. Secondly Lelavati, he knows Lela will surely say something to Maya about RK. "Fine but you have to update me every single Minute." Bittuji says to Maya.

"Rk, where were you." Dipali ask as Soon as Rk enters. "Shut up..." Rk says to Dipali. "I don't know what the hell is your Problem with me, I took care of all your needs for past 21 years when that Chawlbala left..." "Enough." Rk Shouted angrily and takes a knife from the fruit Basket and holding Dipali's Shoulder he puts knife around her Neck. "Rk what are you doing." Dipali Panicked as Rk put Knife on her neck. "IF YOU DARE TO SAY SOMETHING ABOUT MY WIFE, I WILL CUT YOUR NECK WITHOUT ANY FEAR." Rk says angrily, throwing his knife he Went to his Room. " this Chawlbala, did something Magic on My Rk, 21 years passed but Still Rk and Mummyji only Sings Madhu.. Madhu, I thought making Madhu out of this house will Make my way to Rk's life but damn... Chawlbala you will pay for this." Dipali angrily says.

Rk Angrily Pacing around his Room Drinks his Scotch, Now he Drinks Rarely only when His temper rises, first because of that Stupid Media and Then this 'Daayan' Dipali. "Rishbh." Rk turns and Find Radha Standing with Tray filled with Dinner, "I apologize from behalf of Dipali. Am sorry." Radha says. "Maa, You don't have to. Please." Rk says Coming Closer to her, there was dead silence in Room for few minutes then Radha Broke her Silence.

"Woh.. I thought you haven't eat since Morning so I thought to bring Dinner. You must be hungry." Radha says little uncomfortably, placing Dinner on table. "Tomorrow I will go Back to Delhi." Radha says and Rk gently Nods, "Maa, please stay here for atlest few days. Please.." Rk says, Radha don't know what to do so she sat on bed, Radha watches Rk's room it has been years since She entered This Room, She turns and find Rk Who finishes in Eating Dinner, "It was not only your Fault." Radha says with hint tears in eyes. Rk confusingly looked at Radha Then he Understands what She was saying, "Maa." "No, Even there is My fault too I thought that Madhu would... Chee.. How could I, i know DIDI Brainwashed me, but I should have trusted Madhu she is My daughter." Radhu says Cryingly. "Maa, it was not your fault, I am the only reason for all this mess up." Rk says hugging her. "I Broked her heart too." Radhu says, Rk consoles her.

Maya sat on her Bed angrily, her head was Blasting so much, "God, I wanted to Beat Someone, I am so angry now." Maya says. Bittuji bring orange juice for her, "Maya, there are Stiches, plz don't angry it will hurt you more. Now Drink this and then take this tablets you will be fine." Bittuji says. Maya take her Class and Started drinking juice suddenly her phone started buzzing, "God." Maya picks up her phone "SPECIAL RECHARGE OFFER FOR YOU PRESS 1 T..." Maya angrily throws her Phone which strike on Glass of Dressing table And Glass broke into pieces, then She throws her juice Glass too. "Maya calm down." Bittuji came running towards Maya. Manager came Running inside Room and shockingly looked at the Whole Room. "Just Clean this Bloody Room, I will be coming in half an hour." Maya says Rudely pointing her Finger towards Manager and leaves the Room angrily, Bittuji too follows her.

"Maya what is this." Bittuji asked Maya as they walk in hotel's Huge Garden. "What." Maya too asked Bittuji in Same tune, Seems like Medicines are doing there work and so Maya's anger is getting down. "Throwing things here and there." Bittuji says. "Oh come on Mamu, what if I broke few Glasses, Chill we are so Rich we can buy anything, I can buy a huge Mansion without Mama's Acknowledge." Maya says with attitude. Bittuji don't understand what to say it is Better to Show.

"Come with Me." Bittuji says and Maya follows him, "Where are we going?." Maya ask as they sat on Bittuji's Car. "you will see soon." Bittuji says and drives the Car. "What the hell is this. Why do you bring me here." Maya says in disgust pointing at a Chawl with one hand on her nose. "This is the Place where your Mama lived, where She studied." Bittuji says entering in Chawl, Maya Shockingly watches Chawl. "Come I will so you." Bittuji says Climbing ladders, Maya silently follows him.

"That was Bhabhiji's house." Bittuji says pointing at a Small house from far. "Come." Bittuji unlocked the house, Maya enters the Room watches the House amazed, she picks up a Photo of Madhu from the Table. "Watch this Place Carefully." Bittuji says. "This place is Smaller then your Own Room. Right Maya." Bittuji asked Maya. "Your Mother don't have Things to throw to Calm her Anger when she was of your age, but you... I won't say not to throw things here and there.. broke glasses, i know You can't control... it is in your blood, but saying that your are so Rich, I don't liked that." Bittuji says Sitting. "I am sorry." Maya says. "Your Mother worked so hard Maya. This Attitude won't work, I am your Mamu that's why I am telling you." Bittuji says.

"who are they." Maya asked Causley as She a picture in which her Mama is hugging a girl and another in which there are so many people standing with smiles on there faces. "Woh.. She is your Masi, she is Your Nani and he is your Nanu." Bittuji Tells her. "Where are they." Maya asked. "Woh.. They don't live here." Bittuji says. "Hmm, where are they, I want to meet them." Maya ask bittuji. "they are not in Mumbai, but promise you won't tell this to your Mama." Bittuji says, After Madhu leaves Mumbai she didn't have any touch with anyone except Bittuji and Roma. Maya excitedly nods.

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