Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope maya realizes rk's love for madhu n helps in uniting rishbala...loved both last update...loved bittuji in last part how sweet of him...look forward n Thanks a lot for the pm dear
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I Can't Believe that I am writing 10th part of my story, I didn't thought I CAN write a story. Thank you so much for encouraging me everytime. Love you all!! Lol I am the only idiot writer whose Main Characters didn't meet till now. But I promise Rk and Madhu will soon be Face to Face.

Part 10

RK opens his eyes n turns. Madhu closes her eyes seeing Rk Caught her Red handed watching him. "Biwi.. Don't act as if you are sleeping. I know you likes to drool me but biwi Mujhe Nazar lag jaegi." Rk says with a Smirk. "No ways i was thirsty so I was getting up." Madhu says getting up from Bed. As Madhu tries to pour water from jug the glass breaks and Madhu's hand gets cut. RK rushes to her Seeing her hand. "Biwi be Carefull." Rk says taking her hand in his. He makes her sit and cleans her wound. RK asks "Biwi is it paining." Madhu looks at him n says "RK it is paining so much that I can't bear." "but the wound doesnt look too deep, maybe the glass pierced deeper? sometimes one doesnt know how a small piece digs deep." Rk says and takes out first aid box.

"Yes it cuts many things n by the time one realises its too late." Madhu says. RK loks curiouisly at her and Madhu get up from the looking at the Sky. RK comes to her and says "its My love..that has pierced deep in her heart? Right? Its his love that hurts her, why his love is like this why his love is not like hers, which is all about selflessness n his love is about possessing wish knew how to love u like u then." Rk says coming closer to her. "then they wont have been here. then i wont have betrayed her n brought her forcefully here! then they did been really happy, You knows Me better than me why I am like this?" RK tells Madhu cupping her face. "We have talked this before in drunken night at Studio. Madhu you remember that conversation Right? RK asks. "yes but I don't remember what we talked." Madhu says confusingly. "I know you asked me why i betrayed you. Then you said that if i apologize that you will return to me then you said..." "I said No." Madhu completes him with tears in her eyes.

RK turns Madhu around "You came back to me." Madhu pushes RKs hand away n walks away from him. Madhu recollects RK humiliating Madhu at the wedding altar and then proposing to her before. She has a smile on her face. She turns and runs to RK n hugs him."RK I returned for real to her RK forever." RK hugs Madhu back. "Madhu I knows why You has returned to Me coz You cant see his heart broken." "yes cant see your broken heart n nor can I break Your heart bcoz I loves You a lot." Madhu says and hugs RK again.RK cups Madhus face "how can You love Me so much despite i always hurt you." Rk says. "Bcoz I am a bit crazy." She says. "woh ishq hi kya jisme koi pagalpan na ho." Rk happily says. RK smiles at Madhu n she smiles back. RK hugs Madhu n she hugs him back.

Flashback ends.

Madhu woke up completely Sweating, she drinks water placed on table "Why, Why Rk did you do this to me, why I trusted you again, why Ioved you so much." Madhu says cryingly. Madhu picks Vibha and Maya's photo from the Table and gently caress their photo "you have given us a great pain But now I won't let you hurt my Daughters." Madhu says angrily. Mumbai."Rishbh Kundra." A women open door "Rati who is there ?". Maya throws divorce papers toward him "Sign this and make my mom free from you." Maya says. Rati picks up papers "Hey Bagwan, Me Barbad Ho gayi, how dare you.. You married a woman before me." Rati pulls his coller. "See I cheated you." Maya tells her. "I will kill you." Rati shouted. "Hey I don't know who is she. She said about her mother.. I am 26 and look at her She is nearly 23 - 24 do you I will marry a women at that age." Rishbh shouted Angrily. "What." Maya shouted. I my god I think he is not my mama's husband. "Excuse me I think I left my... phone on car..." Maya says and run out of the house. "Wait..." Rati shouted.

"Hello MA - MU.. Where are you?" Maya asked Bittuji on phone while munching her chips. "I am at shooting now." Bittuji says looking at Rk. "Shooting woow. I am coming now give me address." Maya says excitedly. "No, you are not coming." Bittuji tries to explain Maya. "No.. no.. no.. I will." Maya shouted. "Fine!!!!!!" Bittuji says. Chief shoot is soon gona be over so it is fine to call Maya otherwise Maya will eat him, Bittuji thought.

"S-I-T-A-R-A studio." Maya read out loudly the banner of the studio. "Shit!! I forget to bring umbrella." Maya says seeing heavily raining. God!!! This is the only unique City where Rain comes without informing just like Bin bulaya Mehman, Maya says thought. She parks her car and Run towards inside the studio but suddenly a Car in high speed passes by her and small pool of water falls on her completely making her wet. "What the..." Maya shouted loudly but car didn't stop. Everyone started Laughing seeing her condition. "RK." Maya says as she saw Rk steeping out from a same car which made her face horrible. "How dare.. he is superstar that doesn't mean he can do anything... You will pay for my insult." Maya says and enters inside the studio. "Chief what are you doing here?" Bittuji ask worriedly. "what I do here, Acting... Director called me, he needs to talk something urgent." Rk says filliping his phone's screen. What I will do now, bittuji thought.

Rk comes out of his vanity with Director "Thanks Rk.. And sorry for again calling." Director apologize "No worries.. anyway I will live now." Rk says. Bittuji walks here and there in worry "Bhagwan... Chief is here Maya is here. What if they meet each other. I told Maya not to call me Mamu infront of everyone thank god she didn't fought with me and easily accepted my request, bappa you too help me." Bittuji says. "Why do you want Bappa to help you?" Rk asked curiously, bittuji turns towards Rk who was watching him suspiciously. "Nothing chief." Bittuji thanks god that rk didn't Listen complete of what he just said. "I am going now." Rk tells him.

Rk was about to step out when suddenly a dirty mud smelling like hell falls above him from the top making him completely dirty. "What the hell." Rk shouted. Everyone in shock stand still not knowing what happened here. "WHO DID THIS!!!!" Rk roars. Everyone started laughing seeing him. "Shut up." Bittuji shouted everyone "Chief you go and change otherwise you will get cold." Bittuji tells him. "Ha ha ha..." Everyone turned towards Maya who was laughing madly. Rk shockingly looks at her the girl her resembles is just like his Madhu but hairs are short and she was wearing a a top and shorts as well as high heels her clothes are completely dirty, face was dirty.

"Maya." Bittuji slowly whisper which Rk didn't listened. Rk fumes and walks towards her "How dare you girl." Rk shouted. "how dare you..." Maya too shouted in same tone. "you car splashes water on me and you didn't even came to apologize me.. You insulted me in front of everyone so did I.. This is my Revenge." Maya shouted. "You messed up with me.. You will pay for this." Rk shouted. Bittuji look both Father and daughter fight watching them one could easily say that they are soon gonna kill each other. "Chief you change go I will talk with her." Bittuji says. "No, bittuji this girl messed up with me." Rk tells him fumingly. Maya too fumes. They continued to fight like mad.

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Posted: 9 years ago
baap beti amnay samnay
ab ayaga ma👏👏👏👏👏za
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rk and Maya..ek sher to dusra sava sher
Hah loved it
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome Update
Loved it
Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update ... Loved the last scene b/w father-daughter duo .. So finally they both have come face to face ... I hope that she calls Bituji as Mama infront of RK and RK realises that she is his daughter .. I want to see infact now make them come face to face as father-daughter asap ... Loved the chapter ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing. Flashback makes me nostalgic .Like father like daughter rk n Maya r shouting at each other.Will rk recognise Maya.waiting for early update n thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update.
Waiting eagerly for nxt part
thnx a lot 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear..



Read all 10 parts in one go..
It was fab..
Thnx for PM..



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