Rishbala FF : Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida (Teaser updated - Page 57) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😛 v nice update n thank ufor the pm...loved that the kids take care of their mom sooo much n think about their future...v good would like to know what happened in the past that rk n madhu r far away from each other n does rk know about their kids...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note. Guys I am really sad , there are so Many views on My Story but only 30% of Members commented or liked on my Story Kabhi Naa Kaho Alvida, it's really not fair I realy worked hard and I only want few words of comment as your appreciation, if you want you can also give me negative comments, not in my Story others story too. I have decided that now I am gonna PM only those members who will comment or like my Story.I will post Next Part, who will gonna comment or like my story will get My Pm that's it. THANKS FOR READING.
Edited by Pmmpta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ur right buddy. many people dont respond to the updates. the views are always more than the comments but dont worry loyal readers are always there for u
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Yeh, you does.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You are right dear
But pls pm me
I comment on ur updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
"So, what do you want" Maya says Calmly through she was little angry. "I want muma to marry again"."What are you Mad Vibha, From where you got this Idea".Maya Shouted throwing her Cup. "I know you would React like this only, But Maya don't you feel we are too Selfish always thinking about us only" Vibha tries to Explain her but Maya stand up and leaves. N

Next day morning.. Bittu ji comes to call RK n asks if he will go to shoot? RK asks Bittu "what is my age Bittuj ?"."Chief 49" Bittuji says."And I am no old enough like you my ears are working.. then why is he shouting?" Rk asks. Bittu says fine.!

RK stretches his hand on Madhus side of the bed n recollects the moment when she was here .(Chandaniya. From 2 states).
Tujh bin suraj mein aag nahi re tujh.
bin koyal mein raag nahi re...
Chaandaniya to barsePhir kyun mere haath andhere lagde ne...

RK is combing his hair and remembers Madhu combing her hair and doing massage. He slams the comb down.

Haa tujh bin phaagun mein phaag nahi re.
Haa tujh bin jaage bhi jaag nahi re.
Tere bina.. o mahiyaDin dariya, rain jazeere lagde ne...

He takes out his shirt and remembers Madhu helping him to put his shirt on.

Adhoori adhoori adhoori kahaani, adhoora alvida..
Yunhi yunhi raina jaaye adhoore sadaa...
Adhoori adhoori adhoori kahaani, adhoora alvida...
Yunhi yunhi raina jaaye adhoore sadaaO Chaandaniya to barse...
Phir kyun mere haath andhere lagde ne...

He looks at the sofa n remembers Madhu feeding him when he was shot or whenever he get angry with her, She would feed him.

Kedi teri naraazgi Gal sun le raaz kiJism ye kya hai, khokhli seepi
Rooh da moti hai tu Garaz ho jitni teri
Badle mein jindadi meri Mere saare bikhre suron se geet piroti hai tu
O mahiya.. tere sitam, tere karam
Dono lutere lagde ne..
He remembers chasing Madhu around the room and then packing her in suitcase.
Tujh bin suraj mein aag nahi reTujh bin koyal mein raag nahi re..
Chaandaniya to barsePhir kyun mere haath andhere lagde ne...
Adhoori adhoori adhoori kahaani, adhoora alvida..

He watches their pic on the wall his and Madhu's when he was shot n how Madhu had tripped while putting it on he smiles and saw their wedding photo in which they were happily looking toward each other eyes forgetting everyone.

Yunhi yunhi raina jaaye adhoore sadaa
Adhoori adhoori adhoori kahaani, adhoora alvidaYunhi yunhi raina jaaye adhoore sadaa
Na na na... na na na.
Phir kyun mere haath adhere lagde ne...

Taking his Clothes he leaves.
Tere bina.. o mahiyaDin dariya, rain jazeere lagde ne...

RK after coming out from Bathroom finds Dips in his room sitting pretty on his sofa..! She spots him while making a drink! She says.. "heard yesterday was your Biwi's Birthday,thought You needed support.. drinks as well as her!". RK asks "if you came here Always to be humiliated again?". She says.." purani buri adatein aur purane Pyaar.. chudaye nahi chut-te...".Dips comes to RK and offers him juice.. but he shoves her hand aside.She starts to flirt with RK and RK tells Dips "till I says action you shouldn't come in your characterless character!". Dips says."I lives and dies on your rude venomous words that create a hole in My heart!". Rk tells her that he is tired of telling GET OUT to her,but she doesnt budge. He asks" if You will take your smile to some corner n leave him alone?".Dips says "if You is feeling bad..I will leave". "Don't Forgot I am a Father of Two Daughters, so be in your limits" Rk tells her. "Daughters , the daughters who's names you don't know And you don't even have a single photo since there Birth" Dipali says smilingly."GET OUT" Rk shouted so loud that everyone down too listen to his voice , Dipali in fear leaves the room.
Half an Hour later, Vibha comes To Maya's room and find Maya angrily pacing here and there , Vibha tries to explain when a Felt her Sister's hug " You are Right Vibha, Muma Also have a Right to be happy in her life, All these years She only thinks about us, gave us both parents love, never denied our wish, our Muma will be Married to Best men in these whole world".

Maya and Vibha siting in Madhu's Cabin waiting for Madhu to come as they talk "What we will say to Muma, that we are planning to get her Married, you don't even let me think what Will we say to her about this" Vibha tells her. She felt a tap on her Shoulder turning she find Anurag Standing there. "Good Afternoon uncle" Maya and Vibha Greets him. "Good Morning Kidos, how are you" Anurag ask smilingly. "fine and waiting for Muma to come" Maya says. "Meeting will be over in any time, anyway What would you like to have juice, coffee" Anurag Asks. "No thanks" Vibha says. "So, everyone is here" Madhu Says as she enters her Cabin. "Hi, Madhu actually if you don't Mind can we talk somewhere else". "yeh Sure, Maya Vibha can you please..." Madhu asks them."ok". They both sat on the Couch outside."Vibha Stop poking". "Idiot see Anurag uncle, is so sweet, caring what about him, he is a Perfect life Partner for our Muma" Vibha says Happily. "Yeh, he is cool"Maya excitedly tells."Muma I want to tell you that wo," Vibha Pinch Maya to say. "Lets Go to shopping" Maya only could say these.

Madhu was Picking up few Clothes for Maya and Vibha Of her own Choice, "See these Maya, it will like beautiful on you" Maya says as She pick up A Pink Coloured floral Dress which any girl would surely like."NO, Not at ALL" Maya Shouted. "Maya you don't like such a beautiful dress" Madhu is now tried Checking out Clothes for Maya. "It is so GIRLY, Yuck I don't like it". "Than you only Choose yourself" Madhu says angrily. "ok"Maya says started to see few Clothes. "Muma, See this one" Maya says, Madhu turned to look and find A Black, Sponky Jacket, a Shirt in which Written I AM CRAZZZY and a jeans.
Precap : Madhu happily sat in Mandap with Her groom wearing her wedding dress looking absolutely beautiful, Vibha and Maya smile seeing their Mother so happy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz like and comment...
Edited by Pmmpta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I would only pm those who will comment or like it.
Edited by Pmmpta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update buddy. hope madhu soon declines the marriage chapter. im getting a heart attack everytime i read it. i think the precap part was a dream. plss update soon.

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