Ishra TS:Main Rahoon Ya Naa Rahoon Epilogue on pg 24 on 5/2

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Last part -Pg 13
Epilogue -Pg 24
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This song is a very special one...
A few weeks back,I lost a very good friend of mine...this song I feel is a perfect ode to her...
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Finally updating the post after ressing it for quite a long time...

Thank you all for your patience.

Here it goes...

Main Rahoon Ya Na Rahoon

The Bhalla house was in its normal morning routine with Ishita running around to everybody's needs.

Adi was already up and engrossed in his morning chores while Ruhi was being extra fussy this morning.

Toshiji had tried waking her up but she had only covered herself more in the blanket and refused to wake up.

Next to try was Romi and Raman,whom she refused to listen at any cost.

Normally she would wake up by anyone's call but not today...

Everyone knew that today it was only Ishita's pampering way which would wake her up.

She went to her room and sat on her bed,Ruhi had covered herself fully.Ishita started saying loudly...
I-Raman...can you bring some ice cubes and ice cream here please...

Raman immediately came listening to her strange request.He questioned her with his eyes and she signed him to just go on with the flow.

Raman also replied after sometime...
R-Ishita...here...but why do you want it at such a odd moment...Is it an indication of something?
He said with a glint in his eyes.

Ishita glared at him...muttering kuch bhi to him..
I-Nothing I just felt like eating it and as for the ice pack...give it to me...

She took the pack and slowly slid it under her blanket...
Ru-Brrr...Ishima it's very cold...

I-Raman did you hear any voice?

R-No...

Ruhi slowly peeped out...

Ru-Ishimaa...

I-Oh looks like someone woke up...

Ruhi got up and snuggled into her...
Ru-Good morning Ishima

Ishita smiled and thought to play with her...
She placed her cold hands on her cheeks and said...
I - Good morning baby...
So finally you got up...
And why were you troubling everyone today?

As she kept her hands on her cheeks for quite a long time...
Ruhi shivered under her touch and quickly jumped out of her lap,wished Raman good morning and ran out.

I-Arre...

Raman smiled at her and went back to the hall while she started arranging Ruhi's bed...
I-This Ruhi na...so naughty and childish just like her father...today I was at home,what if I was not there tomorrow?

The last thought made her think.

I-What if I was no there tomorrow...

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna
Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhiri
Tum khwabon mein aate rehna

She was lost in her thoughts when Toshiji called her and she went out...

The morning thought had affected her so much that from that evening onwards she made her efforts to make each and every member independent from her in all possible ways.

She started giving Sarika most of the important work in the house,made Adi and Ruhi do most of the work on their own or mostly with Raman's help and became busy with her clinic

Raman had started noticing her weird behaviour and decided to ask her about it.

Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhme kahin baaki rehna

Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samajh lena boondon mein main hoon
Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samajh lena kirno mein main hoon

In their room,
Ishita was busy setting the wardrobe when he came.

R-Ishita

I-You came,sit sit,I will get some tea and snacks for you...

As she was about to go out,he tugged at her wrist making her stop.

R-What happened to you?

I-What...nothing happened.

She tried to avert his gaze as she knew he would be asking her about her behaviour.

R-Do you think I don't know you...you are telling something and your eyes are telling something else...

She kept silent.

R-Out with it now...you might hide something from the family or even your parents but not from me.

I-I have to go now...

R-Go where?

I-Mummyji is calling me...

R-Come on...you could have given more better excuses...

I-There is nothing Raman,seriously...

R-Fine then if you don't consider me good enough to share your thoughts,then I think I don't deserve to talk to you as well...

How's it...
Please do take a minute and leave your feedback...both good and bad...

Sorry if I couldn't meet your expectations...😭
And if the writing and song is haphazard and doesn't make you feel connected...



Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thought it would be a OS ,but became a TS
2nd part will be up soon...

Wishing you all a very Merry Christmas again...
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res...pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really like this song

Plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updated the story...on page 1
Do check it out
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
but short it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Hetvi,
Is Ishita sick or was she thinking about her not being there in general?

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Why Ishita's mind crossed this very thought, I mean was it general or is there something more to it. Raman is too good at noticing his wife's behavior.

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