Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: newIFmember

Tanya u write everything in detail..i must say u are a very good writer..but pls post d next part soon

Thnku so much 😳
Whats ur name?
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Posted: 9 years ago
My name is Sameeha u can call me sam
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update tanu 👏
loved nibir sign talks
nishu revealed her past
kabir ko jaana pada 😒
nishu kabira ko j kar rahi h 😆
m loving J kabir 🤣
update soon tanu
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PART - 17
they keeps the bags sat in the car ..kabir and sauro in the front seat nd nisha at back
k - vaise nisha tu yahan achanak ? nisha doesnt listens to him ..
k- nisha? ...
n - sauro isse bolde ki yeh mujhse baat na kare..
s - kabir nisha ne kha h ki tu ussse baat na kar ..
k - are nisha i knw ki tu mujhse naraz h kyuki mai tumse mile bina aagya but kya karta itna late hogya tha ki maine tujhe disturb karna sahi nhi samjha ..
n - saurav isse bolde ki itni bhi late nhi thi disturb karne se kuch ho nhi jaata ..
s - kabir nisha keh rhi h ..kabir stops him in the middle ..
k - sauro mujhe sunai de rha h nd tu mera dost h ya uska ..
n- ofcourse mera ..h na sauro ? ..
k - excuse me agar tujhe pta na ho toh mai btadu ki hum childhood frnds h ..
s - kabir dosti ka kya h vo toh kisi se bhi ho sakti h isme time beech mei kaise aagya ..
n - yeh hui na baat sauro nd they gives each other a hi-five ..
kabir with shock - haww sauro ek ladki ke aate hi tu apne bachpan ke dost ko bhool gya..dekh li teri dosti saurav..kabir makes cute puppy sad face ..nd seeing sauro he says .. ' dost dost na rha ,pyaar pyaar na rha ' ..hearing this nisha laughs ...
kabir seeing nisha - sauro ladki hasi matlab ..
s - fasi ..nisha punches kabir on his back ..
k - aah kya nisha aate hi tere punches shuru hogy ..
n - kyu nhi honge tu itna bda k jo h ..
k - han or tu mere k se kitni j h .
saurav gets confused hearing this k nd j ..s - guys yeh k or j kya h ..
nisha nd kabir together - chup reh saurav yeh hmari code language h nd they continues their fight .
.saurav gets shocked monologue - yeh kya ladai khtam ...code language ? hey bhagwan kinn paglo ki beech fas gya ...

finally they reaches the rathod mansion
s - guys tum log andar chalo car park karke aata hun
nisha nd kabir gets out of the car ..nisha gets mesmerised seeing the house
n - kabir its beautiful ...
k - han par tujhse zaada nhi ..
n - kya ? kuch kha tune ? ..
k - nhi toh
suddenly nisha hears a voice.. n - yeh kiski awaaz h nd she sees a dog coming towards her ... nisha screams ' kabirrr' ..nd she hids behind kabir nd holds his hand tightly ..kabir looks at her nd they have an eye lock but due to the dog's bark they comes out of the trance ...
nisha with fear - kabirr ..iss dog ko yahn se door kar mujhe dogs se bohat darr lagta hai ...
k - are nisha darne ki koi baat nhi h yeh toh mera sandy h my cute buddy tumhe kuch nhi karega ..h na sandy ? ..
n - kabir maine kha na ise yahan se door leja ...
k - nisha yeh toh bas tujhse frnship karna chahta h ..hai na sandy ..chalo nisha ko hello bolo
nisha with anger- kabir ek toh mujhe darr lag rha h or tujhe mazak soojh rha hai ..

vasu comes out hearing nishas voice nd becomes happy seeing nisha
v - oh nisha aagy beta ..kaise ho ? ..
n - aunty mai bht achi hun par plz kabir ko bolo na yeh dog ko yahan se le jaay ..
v - kabir kyu pareshan kar rhe ho nisha ko ..jao sandy ko andar le jaao ..dikh nhi rha nisha usse kitna darr rhi h ..
kabir laughs - kya mom nisha toh khud ek sherni h ..yeh kya sandy se daregi ..sandy khud isse darr rha h dekho toh bechare ka face ..darr ke maare iske toh muh se awaaz bhi nhi nikal rhi .. n - kabirrr ..
v -kabir tum sandy ko yahan se lekar jate ho ya nahi ..
k- ohk ohk mom chill jaa rha hun nd he picks up sandy winks at nisha nd goes vasu notices this nd smiles
vasu nd nisha hugs each other
vasu holding nishas face with her hands -nisha tum toh pehle se bhi zada cute hogy ho ..15 saal ki thi tum jab hum tumse mile the ab dekho kitni sundar hogy ho ...nisha smiles
v - chalo andar chalo you must be tired ..
n - ya aunty ..nd they goes inside ...vasu takes her to the room ..she opens the door ..nisha is shocked to see it ,it was big nd girlish types room ..
n - aunty yeh toh ...
v - han yeh dolly ka room h ...
n - par aunty mai kaise yahn ...
v - are nisha tum bhi toh hmaari beti jaisi hi ho nd dolly ne hi kha tha tumhe yeh room dene ke liye ..nisha smiles ...
v - tum rest karo hum tab tak lunch ki tyari karte h ...
n - thnku aunty ...
v - no problem beta nd she left

nisha keeps her bags nd goes to change ., after changing she takes a nap ...after 1 hr or so a vasu calls everyone fr the lunch ...everyone comes in the dinning hall
k - mom kya bnaya h bht bhook lagi h ..he opens all the bowls ...yeh kya isme se kuch bhi meri pasand ka nhi h ...
v - ha kyuki yeh sab nisha ki pasand ka h ...
n - oh wow aunty thnku soo much nd she side hugs her ...lekin aunty apko kaise pta mujhe khaane mei kya psand n ..
vasu - mujhe dolly ne btaya ...
k - dekha sauro nisha ke aate h maa hume bhool gy ..
vasu pulls kabirs ears - badmaash ...
k - ouch mom ..
v- vaise nisha tumhari training kal se shuru ho rhi h na? ...
n - jee aunty ..
v - kabir tum mujhe or nisha ko aaj shopping pe le jaana ..nisha ghoom bhi legi or mujhe bhi thodi shopping karni h ...
k - no way mom mujhe pta h ki aapki thodi si shopping kitni hoti h ...nishas phne rings ... n- han ranbir nd she goes a little away frm them ..kabirs ears opened hearing rabirs name nd he tries to listen the convo ...
n - acha sachi ok bie ...nd she turns ...nd kabir gets back to his normal postion ...
n - aunty koi baat nhi kabir ka mann nhi h toh mera frnd ranbir h uska aaj half day tha or vo keh rha h ki mai uske saath chaloun toh aap bhi aajao na ...
v- acha nisha theek h ...
k - mai ready hun chalne ke liye ..
v- are achanak kya ho gya tumhe ..koi baat nhi agar nhi chalna toh ...
k - han toh ..ab mann kar rha h mera ..nisha nd vasu got confused ...
v- o ohk ...
n -par maine toh ranbir ko han keh diya ...
k - koi baat nhi mna karde na ..
v - nhi nisha mna mat karo vo bhi hmare saath chal padega ...
n - ohk aunty ..kabir got upset


kabir drove his car in front of the entrance nd when nisha came out he opened the door for her ...nisha was just going to sit when a honk of car stopped her ..she turned nd saw ranbir coming out of a convertible BMW Z4 ...she was amazed seeing it nd immediately ran towards him
n - wow ranbir such a nice car...yaar tu toh bda ameer hogya kya baat h ..
r- kya nishu toh bhi ...mai toh yeh car nikalta bhi nhi voh toh bas tujhe lene ke liye nikali i knw that u like these type of cars ...
n - tujhe yaad h ...
r - har cheez ...kabir was listening to their conversation nd got a little upset as now she would go in his car ...the others came out nd their expressions were same as nisha seeing the car ...kabir was just going to close the door but he was stopped by nisha ...
n - kya door kyu band kar rha h maine baithna h abhi ...kabir smiled widely nd ...
r - par nishu ...
n -sorry ranbir yaar some other time abhi tu aisa kar sauro ko leja saath mei he is more interested in cars than me ...saurav was extremely happy he excitedly sat down in that car ..vasu also sat in that car

in car ...kabir was not able to digest why nisha sat in his car ...
n - tu yahi soch rha h na ki mai uski car mei kyu nhi gy ..are purane dost ke milne pe nye doston ko thodi koi bhoolta h ..kabir was surprised how did she came to knw this but he avoided nd chose to remain silent

they stopped in the front of a mall...saurav got a call frm office nd he left in kabirs car ...kabir tried to stop him but failed ...he got angry as now he have to be with ranbir ...
vasu also went into the store where she have to buy some things nd promissed to join them after some time ..kabir ranbir nd nisha were stalking the stores ..nisha nd ranbir were busy recollecting their childhood memories while kabir was getting a little bored ...nisha noticed it ... nd started talking to him too nd kabir too understood that she noticed him ...ranbir recieved a phone call so he excused himself ...

kabir nd nisha went to a store which was of clothing of both men nd women ...nisha was selecting dresses ...
n - kya yaar kaash vasu aunty hoti idhar kuch toh help hoti ..
k - are koi baat nhi mai hu na ,he said in a filmy way ..nisha giggled ..
n- acha mera chodd tujhe kuch pasand aya ..
k - nhi yaar pta h kal na ek business party bhi h jisme mujhe jaana h uske liye ek fromal suit khareedn h nisha was helping him select nd were having funny talks ...suddenly ranbir came there ...
kabir sighed monologue - agya phir ...
r - nisha kal na ek business party h so would u join us ..
.k - acha tumhe bhi invite kiya h velvet lounge ? ...
r - han u too ? ...
k - yaa ..
n-nhi yaar mai kya karungi aisi formal party mei i would get bored ...
r - nisha u would get an opportunity to meet different business tycoons ..it would help u lot to deal with them ...
k- han or vaise bhi mai or sauro bhi toh honge waha ...
n - theek h lekin agar bore hui toh mai tum dono ko nhi chodungi ..they nodded ...

nisha helped kabir selecting his clothes ..now it was time for the most difficult task .selecting a party dress for nisha ...nisha was in the other section while they were in the other ...
r - yeh nisha pe acha lagega ...
k - nhi its too bright i dnt think she will like it ..
he saw a white gown k- yeh acha lagega ...
r - no its a little heavy ...
k - its perfect ...
r - theek h dekhte h ..
they called nisha nd put the dresses on the table so that she dont come to knw who selected which one ..
k - bta nisha inme se tujhe konsa pasand aaya ...ranbir was a little confident abt his choice ...nisha stared at the dresses for a few minutes ...firstly she touched the gown selected by ranbir ..ranbir got happy but suddenly she picked up the gown selected by kabir ...
n - its beautiful nd perfectly my taste..i loved it ..kabir thnku ...
k - tujhe kaise pta chala yeh maine select ki thi ...
n - are i knw ranbir use aisi bright cheeze hi pasand aati h nd jahan tak mai tujhe jaanti hun yeh teri hi choice h ...kabir gave a victory smile to ranbir while he too gt surprised ..
r - wah yaar itne kam time mei tum logo ne itne ache se jaan liya ek doosre ko ...vasu too came there ..

v - are sorry nisha beta late hogy ..
n - koi baat nhi aunty , yeh dekhiye kaisa lga yeh gown ...
v- its beautiful ...
after shopping they went to a resaturant , had their dinner as it was 8 pm nd ranbir dropped them to their home as kabirs car was with sauro ...they collectted their shopping bags and went to their respective rooms .

the next day
Nisha got up early nd got ready as it was the first day in the office nd she didnt wanted to get late...she went to the dinning hall nd found vasu there she greeted her good morning ..
v - nisha beta breakfast karlo maine tumhara tiffin bhi ready karva diya h dont be hungry ok ... n - aunty aapne kyu itni pareshani uthai ...mai canteen mei kar leti na lunch ..
v - phir vahi baat tum mujhe apni maa jaisi nhi maanti ...
n-aunty aap bhi na ..thnku so much nd she side hugs her ... ..
v- maine driver se keh diya h vo tumhe drop kar dega ..nisha nodded ..
kabir also came there ..
k - are driver kyu drop karega mai kar dunga na nd vaise bhi iska office raaste mei hi aata h.. .. v- vo sab toh theek h lekin aaj tum itni jaldi kaise uth gy ...
k - vo ..vo ..han vo office mei kuch extra kaam tha kal jaa nhi paya tha na ...
v- oh acha ..
after nisha nd kabir had their breakfast , they left

kabir stopped the car as they have reached ...kabir turned towards nisha nd saw that she was a little upset ..
kabir holding nishas hand - kya hua ..
n - kabir mujhe bht ghabrahat ho rhi h ...
k - are chill , dont worry ...
n - hmm i will try ,chal mai chalti hun ..
k - theek h all the best ...
n - mai jaun ...
k - han jaa na ..
n- mai chalti hun ...
k - are kitni baar bolegi ab jaa bhi mai bhi late ho rha hun ...
nisha angrily - abe mera haath toh chod tabhi jaungi na ...kabir realised that he was still holding her hand ,he immediately left it ...
k - acha na gussa kyu ho rhi h ..jaa late nhi ho rha ...
nisha was going to argue but when she looked at the time - acha ok bie nd she went into the office while kabir also left with a smile


Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Marvellous superb kabir j ho raha hai..nishu ka forst day of office..viraj uska boss hoga kya? Waiting for nest epi.. 😊
Edited by newIFmember - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update yaar 👏


Bechara J Kabiraa 😆


But Nishu ne to harbar Kabiraa ko hi select kia chahe vo car ho ya dress 😉


Pata nahi party main kya kya kya hoga... 😉


Kon kitna J hone vala hai iye to nxt update main hi pata chalega so update soon 😃


Thanx for the pm & tu exams k beech bhi update de rahi hai uske lie spcl thanx 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Bechara Kabir j Ho raha tha

Saurav 😆

Nishu Kabir ki car mai

Kabir ne nishu ke liye gown select kiya 😳

Nisha knew it was Kabir's choice

Thx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Awesome update yaar 👏


Bechara J Kabiraa 😆


But Nishu ne to harbar Kabiraa ko hi select kia chahe vo car ho ya dress 😉


Pata nahi party main kya kya kya hoga... 😉


Kon kitna J hone vala hai iye to nxt update main hi pata chalega so update soon 😃


Thanx for the pm & tu exams k beech bhi update de rahi hai uske lie spcl thanx 😳

Are koi nhi thnks bolne ki koi zaroorat nhi h..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update tanu 👍🏼
bichara saurav 😆
I love j kabira 😆
nishu ne car aur gown dono kabir ki chose ki
excited for the party
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
very cute
thanks for the pm
ritika

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