The ring, some tears and a punch

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Aww That was beautiful yaar

Two persons who agreed to marry just because their parents wanted to fell in love with each other

Tht proposal. Yaar I am dead

He expressed his feelings so easily. Its really difficult to express your feelings in front of the person whom u love.

Amazing. Hansini was in love with him.

I just loved it

Quote

Hema

@_.serendipity._

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Aww That was beautiful yaar

Two persons who agreed to marry just because their parents wanted to fell in love with each other

Tht proposal. Yaar I am dead

He expressed his feelings so easily. Its really difficult to express your feelings in front of the person whom u love.

Amazing. Hansini was in love with him.

I just loved it

Thank you so much, Nethravathi for your kind words! 😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Fatima

@fatimarahaman

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

My dear Hema! Just loved reading this beautiful story!!!!!!👏👏👏.❤️Its simply amazing!!😊

Quote

Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I know not how I reached this page but the fact of the matter is I somehow ended up at a very beautiful place...this story

The simple emotions, and the unaffected pace of the story is what drew me in and the relatability of the story is what kept me hooked.

There he had been sitting, waiting, sandwiched between his parents, cornered by their dreams and expectations, silently bristling at his own weary submission to the artificiality of the whole scenario.

The suffocating weight of these lines delivered a powerful punch to the gut.

And yet the journey from the above lines to these "And thus began a lifetime of banter, laughter, tears, comfort, friendship and love." was so very loving and lovely.

Thank you for this beautiful piece😃

Quote

1 2

The ring, some tears and a punch - Page 2

Related Topics

Explore Topics