MaNan FF - Desire (Continuing note by sreesri on pg 31)

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Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Index...

Prologue - Page 1
Part 1 - Page 14
Part 2 - Page 25
Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Prologue...


Manik's pov :

I headed into the shower myself, and stood under the water trying to wash away my anger, desire & passion towards her.I was being a pervert, like a despo, I knew that...was this that got me dumped? I stood under the shower for a few more seconds and I heard a tap on the bathroom door.I wondered if Nandini had come in to pick up her dress, so I stood quietly behind the shower curtain, waiting for her to leave...the shower curtain moved aside and she looked at me with her beautiful eyes...

End of POV


Nandini : "You mind if I join you?" she asked.


Manik's jaw fell. He hadn't expected this at all. She walked into the shower & stood in front of Manik, hot water gently falling on her.Manik bent down as she reached up, and they kissed.He
kissed her on her mouth, with a thirst and hunger that had built up in him for days.His tongue made its way into her mouth as water fell in between their faces.He harshly pulled her closer.


Manik's pov :

Suddenly my trance was broken as i heard a loud knock on the door...jerking me out of my day dreaming...ohhh this was too much...how can i think this wild about Nandini. I brushed my hair back...and tried calming myself...


Manik : Kaun hain?

Nandini : Actually, Manik your phone is continuously ringing.

Manik : Ohhh, I'm coming.


After sometime he came out of washroom & found Nandini busy in her own work. He silently got ready bcoz he was angry with Nandini.


Nandini: Manik tum gussa ho Kya?


Manik didn't pay any heed to her words & went outside.


Manik's pov :

When will you understand Nandini that how much I love you.


Meanwhile manik reached downstair & saw his cousin brother Cabir was walking to & fro.


Manik : What's up bro?

Cabir : Feeling like vomiting bro.

Manik : What, par vomiting toh tera biwi I mean Navya ko honi chahiye, par tu kaise pregnant ho gaya?

Cabir : Mazak ki baad main karna. Arey kuch din se Navya mujhse gussa nehi ho rahi hain yrr.
Manik : Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye.

Cabir : Aise kaise khush ho jaunga main, mujhe uski behavior se shak hone laga aur maine pucha ki wo aapna gussa kaise itni din tak shant rakha hain.

Manik : Tujhe aapna khusi bardast nehi hota kya

Cabir : Puri baatein toh sunle, fir usne bolso ki usne aapni gussa kaam karne ke liye toilet saaf karte hain, sunker toh maine hasne laga, taab usne bola ki usne mera brush se toilet saaf karte hain har roz. Tu hi bol aab main kya karu? I'm feeling yucky.

Manik : Cabir tu dur hat mujse, ishi liye kuch din se tera muh se bad smell araha tha.

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Will continue it if got a good response...
Or esle this Prologue will be the end...

Loads of Love,
Pari & Rifa

Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was so funny... 😃
plz continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow nice prologue.
navya to cool her clean toilet lol wo bhi cabir me brush se 🤣 .
waiting for first update.
update soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome please continue with the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice prolouge
it's also romcom
i so love them
plz continue soon
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lol😆😆😆
frst
manik ka dream
omg

manik n nandini ka scene smj ni ayaa

plot to btana tha yrrr

wo gf bf h yaa cavyaa ki trh hubby wify

throw sme more lyt on the plot..

n cavya
superb
hilarious
cabir k toothbrush se toilet saaf
lol

n manbir convo
rofl

too gud
rifa ko meri trf se kehnaa
she is superb 😉

n u too pari :)

ch kab de ri h ab iska
n khbrdar isko b mon-thurs telecast krne ki baat ki to
atlst 1 to regular rkh
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Actually m gonna your first story...
d prologue is quite nice...
maniks dream...
oh my god...
that was hilarious. ...
seriously...
n then cabir...
Hahahahaha... I just couldn't control my laughter...

good going girls...
do pm me... for your other ff's too... if possible...
keep writing...
continue soon...
Avneet... (Avi...)

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