SidNi Drabble 'He's Gone'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Salam friends...have written a drabble on that hill scene of last week...don't know why I wrote such drabble on such scene but I really wanted so here it is... scroll down please😳
HE'S GONE


'Zara nazar ghuma kar udhar to dekhea' (please turn and have a look at there) shabnam said in her cheap dirty voice.. Siddharth gave her anunpleasant glare before he turned to the other side and he froze, two of shabnam's men were pushing roshni's car down the hill, putting aside everything he ran past the car and came forward to It stopping it trying to save his life

He used all his power in pushing the car back and after so many futile attemps he finally succeeded... running towards the driving seat he opened it and took roshni in his amrs...sighing with relief ...all the negative thoughts were floating in his mind... what if he couldn't had save her? What if?

He kissed her forhead urgently and patted her cheeks, the blood from his wounds fell on her forehead and after continuous tries of waking her up she finally opened her eyes

Letting out a painful moan she looked around trying to register everything and the first thing that clouded her thoughts was the phone call... 'Siddharth...Siddharth tum theek ho? Ye chot..chot kaisa lagi? Kaisa hua yeh?' (Siddharth... Siddharth are you alright? These wounds.. how did it happened?) She bombarded him with questions while he tried to calm her 'mai theek hun roshni...ye kuch nahe hai ' (I am fine Roshni...it's nothing) he said but she shook her head 'nahe...itna khon beh raha hai...dard horha hoga na?' (nahe... so much blood Is flowing...it must be paining na?) she argued caressing them lightly from her fingers trying not to hurt him

'Bus kro tum dono...bohat hua ye heer ranjha ka romance' (stop it... too much of heer ranjha's romance' they heard shabnam and then sid stood up helping roshni to come out too 'kitna pyaar hai mere di or jeju k bech...haye kise ki nazar na lage' (so much of love between my di and jeeju...hayee no one set there bad eye on them) she said in a sugar coated voice 'siwae mere' (except me) she added while Siddharth and roshni looked away from her in disgust

'Ab sach mai bohat hua' (now honestly it's too much) she announced as she pointed her gun at them 'roshni...yhan ao..' (roshni...come here) she ordered but roshni stood still 'foran...soch lo warna..' (hurry...otherwise) she warned placing her fingers on the trigger 'roshni jao' (roshni go) 'nahe siddh...' (so siddh...) 'please roshni...agar usne tumhe kuch kia to mai seh nahe paonga...jao' (please roshni...if she did anything to you then I won't be able to tolerate) he pleaded but she disagreed 'tumhe mere qasam...jao' (you have my swear...go) her eyes moistened as she let go of her hold from his arms and walked away from him

'Very good...joru ka gulam suna tha par yhan to biwi shohar ki gulam hai...par bohat afsos ke sath mjhe ye kehna padh raha hai k ab apko apne shohar ki bat sunne ka moqa kabhi nahe milega... ' (with so much sad feelings I have to tell you that you will never get a chance to listen to your husband anymore) shabnam said as she hold roshni's arm angrily making her wince in pain 'shabnam nahe...' (shabnam no) Siddharth started to come towards them but shabnam pointed the gun at roshni's forehead 'apka ek kadam roshni ki maut ki wjah ban jaega jeeju..peche' (your one step can be the reason of roshni's death jeeju... srep back)

Siddharth stepped back 'itna nahe jeeju ...peche hote jae...woha kone tak' (not just this jeeju... go back...till that corner) she ordered and Siddharth obeyed having no other choice... roshni cried as she nodded a no, her voice stuck In her throat as she witnessed her life slipping from her hold 'ab apka waqt khtam hota hai jeeju...Siddharth Khurana ek bohat ache insan the par afsos ab wo is dunya mai nahe rahe...Allah Hafiz' (your time is over now jeeju... Siddharth khurana was a very good man but sadly he is no more... Allah Hafiz) she announced as she finally clicked the trigger and a gun shot was heard, 'Siddharth' screamed roshni as freed herself from shabnam's hold and ran to him.. her scream as loud as the gun shoy

He raised his hand towards her as he lost his balance ready to fall, there fingers touched slightly before he disappeared into the deep hills... roshni sat at the edge with a thud while shabnam smirked

Shabnam said something and walked away but roshni couldn't listen anything, her mind went numb her eyes wet with tears which didn't intented to stop ... 'Siddharth' she screamed yet again but met with with her own scream, which held pain and loneliness because ... he was gone... just for her he left her

Finished...do leave back your reviews and I m sorry if I bored you😳

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skinnypal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it aroo... Shabby dialogues were perfectly written could imagine saying her that! 😆
N the lil sidni scene in the car was ❤️
But sid died at the end... :'( liked the last para u wrote it well!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww..it was so damn emotional..yaar😭😭😭 their scenes .their forehead kiss their hand touch before falling..😭😭 such a powerful scene..u have written this beautifully...I really .wanted this to happen in Jr..but.🥱.u fulfilled my wish...superb writing aroo..I loved it😳🤗..
Edited by Purni12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was very emotional
beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purni12

Woww..it was so damn emotional..yaar😭😭😭 their scenes .their forehead kiss their hand touch before falling..😭😭 such a powerful scene..u have written this beautifully...I really .wanted this to happen in Jr..but.🥱.u fulfilled my wish...superb writing aroo..I loved it😳🤗..


Thankieee purni🤗I am glad u liked it...I myself wanted such scene... roshni should'd been awake when sid was shot...but alas🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

it was very emotional

beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm


Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wo emotional kardiya aroo👏
superb iska part 2 hai kya sid wapas laut aya foxy se intakaam lele keliye😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice the emotions u portrayed is so gud. .loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written aroo..shabby's dialogues are same as show😆..loved the way u made Roshni witnessed how her Siddharth scarified his life😭.

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