Itty Bitty Drabbles - Drabble #5: Glum (Page Twelve) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: asmaanixx


Thank you! 🤗

I loved that scene! It really showed the comfort level between them not only as friends but as husband and wife. Swara can go to him at any given time and rant to him while he'll listen and give her sane advice. It was such a natural scene and I'm still mesmerized by it.

LOLL, he might have to think up of something a little more unique than daily pooja to shut her up. 😉


@Bold- My my ☺️

*Ahem* I wouldn't mind reading a drabble on that 😳 *ahem*
Edited by ros_aavir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: asmaanixx


Hey Sakura! 🤗

LOLL, although the two Drabbles weren't connected, I can see the hesitation Sanskaar would have had in speaking with Swara. 😆 There is no way that Swara would have let him go that easily without letting him hear an earful. :P

Thank you so much! 😳

Btw, I have started reading Snow Queen, but I haven't caught up yet. I'm still on Chapter 3 so I'm reserving my comments until I'm all caught up. 😳 You're just too fast of an updater for me. 😆

Yep poor Sanskar😆
You deserve the appreciation dear😃
I'm waiting for that comment then. I have already finished writing so update one part every day...never occurred to me it could be too fast...sorry about that😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow, the drabbles are awesome.

I loved the last two.
continue writing more.


Thanks Javeria!

Btw, I love your Green Arrow minion DP. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ros_aavir


Aw man. 💔

I have a feeling this is exactly how the upcoming scenes are going to be. Sanskaar will always think of Swara and give her distance and friendship. Swara won't acknowledge her changing feelings for her hubby out loud, probably think it is for the best.

Loved how you portrayed the painful tragedy in the most simplest fashion. 👏


Thank you Ros. <3

This is exactly what we are seeing right now. Sanskaar is giving Swara distance and a loyal friendship while expecting nothing in return from her. I wish Swara will at least give Sanskaar a thought and even think about the idea of settling down with him. Sanskaar at least deserves this much for his undying support towards her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: ros_aavir


@Bold- My my ☺️

*Ahem* I wouldn't mind reading a drabble on that 😳 *ahem*


Oh I bet you wouldn't. 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Yep poor Sanskar😆

You deserve the appreciation dear😃
I'm waiting for that comment then. I have already finished writing so update one part every day...never occurred to me it could be too fast...sorry about that😳


Oh please don't be sorry! It's actually a good thing that you have the entire story already written out. At least this way you don't have to worry about updating. I on the other hand, write the parts in one sitting and publish them straight away. For example, for Saware, I'm gonna have to find some time out to write down the next chapter. But if I had already written out the first two to three chapters, then I wouldn't have to make the readers wait too long for it.

At this point I'm just rambling and I blame that on my lack of sleep which has been caused due to the numerous essays I'm having to write back to back... I need Christmas to roll around fast. (>.<)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
I missed two drabbles, but nevermind i will comment now 😊
The 4th drabble was so cute. Cuteness overloaded ❤️ Swara's bak-bak 😆 Poor Sanskar 😛
The 5th those last lines 🥺 He is missing her. I love the way you write Leen 🤗
You are really very talented 😳👏
Keep those drabbles coming 😃
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

I missed two drabbles, but nevermind i will comment now 😊
The 4th drabble was so cute. Cuteness overloaded ❤️ Swara's bak-bak 😆 Poor Sanskar 😛
The 5th those last lines 🥺 He is missing her. I love the way you write Leen 🤗
You are really very talented 😳👏
Keep those drabbles coming 😃


I apologize for that Preet. I am thinking of creating a FB page for all my writing pieces so that rather than PMing everyone, people may merely check out the page to see my latest updates. Do you think that will be a good idea or should I approach another method? I find the PM system to be too tedious and the results simply aren't that great.

And thank you so much for the wonderful comments. 🤗

I have to admit the last three lines in the 5th Drabble are my favorite. 😳

Thank you so much once again. 🤗

I will do my best to put some more up soon. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: asmaanixx



I apologize for that Preet. I am thinking of creating a FB page for all my writing pieces so that rather than PMing everyone, people may merely check out the page to see my latest updates. Do you think that will be a good idea or should I approach another method? I find the PM system to be too tedious and the results simply aren't that great.

And thank you so much for the wonderful comments. 🤗

I have to admit the last three lines in the 5th Drabble are my favorite. 😳

Thank you so much once again. 🤗

I will do my best to put some more up soon. 😳


It's all my pleasure 🤗 The idea sounds good Leen👍🏼 I know sometimes it is a bit difficult to send PMs especially when you have friends from different fandoms, so a FB page seems a good idea 😊
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

It's all my pleasure 🤗 The idea sounds good Leen👍🏼 I know sometimes it is a bit difficult to send PMs especially when you have friends from different fandoms, so a FB page seems a good idea 😊


Awesome! I'll start making the page right away. 😃

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