Itty Bitty Drabbles - Drabble #5: Glum (Page Twelve)

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello everyone!

Many of you may not know me, as I am new to the Swaragini forum. So to give a brief introduction of myself let me just say, my name is Gurleen. You may call me whichever variation of the name that you want (Gur, Leen, Guru etc.) but try not to call me by my username asmaanixx. It's really formal and it creates a weird sense of distance between us. Basically it feels cold to me and it just doesn't sit well with me. I would much prefer you guys to use my name.

What am I here for?

Well, obviously to enjoy the show and interact with the fans and see your various interpretations on the characters and the story lines. I had been attracted to the show because of SwaSan, however, I am now here for all characters and the entire cast. They are doing an absolutely amazing job in portraying their characters and deserve immense recognition for it.

What is this corner?

Here's a little fact for you: I'm a writer. 😉

I won't brag about how well I write since I still feel I'm not that great and have a lot to learn. But my readers have said that I'm good and I'll leave the rest of the judgment up to you guys.

I do have bigger ideas to write out for the show but due to university and work, I just don't have the time to do it. The bigger ideas will be taking up a lot of space as they will be formatted as either short stories or even possibly fan-fictions. In the short time that I do have, at the most I can manage One-Shots. But for now I've decided to stick with Drabbles as they're even shorter than One-Shots.

So without further ado, let's officially open this thread! 😃

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Bitter: page oneLetting Things Go: page fiveGoal: page eightMusibat: page tenGlum: page twelve

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MusicMyLife.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome to forum Guru 🤗
hope u hv lots of fun here 😉
waiting fr ur first drabble 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Bitter

"Swara zid maat karo aur dawai khaa lo." Sanskaar pushed the spoon full of the dark red cough syrup towards his wife, irritation beginning to creep up on him because of her tantrums.

"Nayi!" Swara looked the other way, refusing for the fifth time now.

"What is your problem Swara?" Sanskaar asked highly irritable. "Do you want to get better or not?"

"I'm not a small child that you can emotionally manipulate me into taking the medicine Sanskaar." Swara reproached him, with her hands on her hips. Then scrunching up her face in disgust, "It's so bitter and... bleeehh." Swara shivered and shook her head to show her distaste.

Sanskaar took a deep sigh. "Fine. If you're so set on being stubborn then there's nothing that I can do about it. But don't forget that so am I." He challenged, looking at her directly in the eye.

"What are you gonna do about it huh?" Swara asked, provoking him even more.

"This." Sanskaar leaned in and kissed her on the cheek.

Swara gasped in shock, not expecting him to take that approach. Using the opportunity at hand, Sanskaar shoved the spoon full of medicine into her mouth before she could protest. Swara cringed at the taste and shut her eyes. Taking the spoon out, Sanskaar offered her a glass of water which she graciously accepted by gulping it all down.

The bitter medicine was down, but Sanskaar knew that the bitter attitude was yet to come.

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome to the forum Guru😊😊

U will have a awesome time here😃

And ur first drabble "Bitter" Is a so very good,loved it 👏

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Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Leen 🤗 Welcome to the forum 😳 I'm Preet btw 😊
The first drabble was really very very cute 😳 Swara is ziddi but Sanskar is even more ziddi than her 😆 Looking forward to read more drabbles from you 😃