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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Sukhi! This O.S is an early morning treat for me😊. I am lost for words👏

I don't know how to describe for your marvelous work. Speechless. But feedback toh banta hai.

First of all thanks for this beautiful O.S👍🏼

Let me start with the points which i loved most and are my favorite

Her biggest excuse was the truth, the truth that she had never fallen out of love with him, and she would do anything to keep him here by her side.. married to her for now and forever more.

This can't be explained better than this. Ragini and her biggest excuse *Never fallen out of love for her hubby* WOW👏

He cared through his eyes.. he loved through his eyes.. he pampered through his eyes, he questioned through his eyes, he played through his eyes.. and now she had those eyes in her life again.. and she would not let go. Never.

Nachiket and his eyes😉 I loved the way you have focused & stressed on N eyes.

R's appreciation for N eyes as they were R's strength and weakness😊

The song selection was so perfect as it is very apt for Neira and their love story😊

I can read this O.S over and over as it is very simple yet beautiful + very intriguing.

This O.S is certainly an eloquent masterpiece from the very best *That is You*😊

Thank you for sharing😳😃

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Lovely😳

RR's eyes are so beautiful and expressive

I am so glad you wrote something on that😳

This is a wonderful piece😳

I loved the excuse was 'Never fallen out of love' part😳

So true it is❤️

And I absolutely loved the ending where she searched his eyes for an answer and she couldn't figure out what it was saying It was beautiful

Thanks Sukhi for this lovely piece🤗

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@metoyou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Sukhi, my dear!

Told you nah I will be here 😊

You did it...matlab you couldn't resist it anymore. Finally you wrote about his eyes; the most expressive part of him.

The entire part of how you described the feeling(s) Ragini gets from his eyes is too beautiful. His eyes do speak volumes yet there remains a certain mysteriousness to it which attracts the opposite sex 😳

So many layers and dimensions of just a pair of eyes; touching, moving and very deep.

Love this bit!

Really unique and very well expressed! Loved it, saach me.

Thank you for showing her vulnerability with just a mere gaze of his.

Don't need to say to write more, because I know you will 😉

Me just waiting...

🤗

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Oh Sukhi... This is so beautiful, truly. It is late for me but thank you for these lovely words I will dream to. ❤️
Of course I will be back with more detail tomorrow but until then 🤗

Dear Sukhi,

So so so sorry for the late reply, the week got away from me 😔

First, thank you for the beautiful song, it was the first time I heard it and the thoughts behind it are so gorgeous.

Almost as gorgeous as this story. They say the eyes are the window to the soul and the way Ragini is so attuned to what his eyes show her (and only her)...I have no words. How her heart hangs on the emotions he expresses, and this:

Yes.. that was it for her.. the shadow of his gaze. It was everywhere. All the time. She would often act as if he was watching, even when she knew he was halfway around the world.

When she was struggling with her emotions, she would see him look at her with his soul in his eyes, asking her to confide, to let go.. to express.. and then she would try with the best possible substitute of him..

sometimes her mother, sometimes her best friend..sometimes her loneliness.

She knew of people who behaved like their parents were watching over them.

But no, she would behave like he, Nachiket was watching over her. It was only after meeting him that she felt the need to be a better human being. To make him proud of her, not as his wife, but as a person, a beautiful human being.

He has such an effect on her that the memory of him is enough for her act a certain way. 👏

Of course she does not trust herself to read them correctly anymore.

What a beautiful concept so flawlessly executed...thanks for this Sukhi ❤️

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Filza.

@Filza.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful Beautiful beautiful <3

I'm so happy you chose to focus on his eyes.. Yes, he expresses all his emotions for her best through his eyes & so naturally..
I loved how she feels lucky to have had to see his eyes so closely.

Last line is so Ragini..
She knows the answer that Of course its for her but her need for reassurance making her doubtful.

& i loved R's struggle with her own feelings & her longing.. How i wish we saw more of this in the show.

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