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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello friends Here is prologue...if i get good response will continue then...
this is short one

prologue :

Uncle Uncle Aap "Ishan" ho naa A boy says to ishan ...

ishan nods in reply ...

Boy gives him a letter...He about to ask that boy who told him to deliver this letter to him (ishan) ..but that boy runs away and Ishan looks around and then he opens the letter ...A smile appears on his face which disappear in a second when he started reading the poem

Chand lamhe bache hain tere mere saath ke,

Mumkin hai ke bichar jaayen bina mulakat ke,

Kahan aansuon ki ye saugaat hogi,

Naye log honge nayee baat hogi.

Main har haal me muskurati rahoongi,

Gar tumhari mohabbat mere saath hogi.

Chiragon ko mehfooz rakhna aankho main,

Badi dur tak andheri raat hogi.

Musafir hoon main bhi, Musafir ho tum bhi

Phir kahin, kisi mod par mulaqat hogi...

(credit : original writer )

He folds the letter and keeps in his Blazer's b**st pocket...and murmurs

Mulakaat hogi...jarur hogi


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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
I am first 😃 Wow preeto wonderful start šŸ‘ the poetry iz beautiful šŸ‘ and now you have started this superb story so complete it soon 😔 love it šŸ‘šŸ¼ update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Wow...the poetry was amazing...do keep writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the poem..Nice start..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all,
Welcome to the forum.
Lovely start. Poem is nice.
Waiting for the next update. Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi Aman
do continue
i would love to read
by the way, Amazing lines ā¤ļø
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very impressive Prologue dear..

Loved the poem..

Please continue writing and if possible PM me whenever you update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx so much will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Preeto didi šŸ˜› please update na😭😭😭 we are waiting😔😔😔

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