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Posted: 9 years ago
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They saw our day




The hands ,
strong and callous
the roughnes
from which you drive me
holding me ,
your fingers , tighnting around me
gripping me
until i am below
under you
Until
i can feel your heat
your warmth and much more
And
when we are here
here in this ...Moment!
consumed in this passion
listen i say ...
instead
i hear
the beat of your heart
but
you ...
you...
ohh dear
you listen ,
silently
noiselessly
only you ...
until you can hear them
the anguish whispers
my whimpers
trembling hands and doorstep darknesss
you cluctch so hard
fearing, losing me in them ...
they are so big ...
so enormous
you say ...!
inturn i tremble ,
I fear
because i know
i perceive
that you have seen them
the beast
the brute ...
the utlimate hollow of human self ...
i try to hide
but
you...
you ...oh my dear
you shouldn't have done that..
you shouldnt have seen that...
seen them
but now ...
you have seen
felt ...
THEM!
frighting me
alarming me
because
my dear ...
ohh my love
what can i say
because,I know ...
Seeing them
showing them to you
exposing you to them ...
is never partial
you have seen them
it means
they have seen you ...
belicve me, they have ...
Those bruts have seen you...US !




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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Beautiful and heart-touching! 👏
How have you been Sai? :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful and a heart warming poem 👏👏
Thanks for this emotional flow that i felt in this poetry ! Loves Sai ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome.,, ⭐️👏
Sai... great wordings.. ! Very intense feelings put in n very well versed.. ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Sai ❤️🤗
Winsome poetry with grace! Lovable, adorable thoughts 👏 Loved it!

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