Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 84

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haan to is story k pyarey pyarey readers kon kon waiting list mein he abhi update k liye?
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Thanks to all of you for your lovely comments.Time for new update so here we go.

sorry in advance for mistakes



She turned towards Manik and said in her irritated voice: Tum ab betho yahan aur apna yeh apple khao main ja rahe hoon. And left from there.

Manik was enjoying this irritated kid Nandu . He also followed her with a wide grin.


Nandini came at back side of Mansion.

Or


Cabir was the 1st one who noticed them coming in their direction.



Nandini reached near them and saw Cabir,dhruv ,Mukti Aryaman and Aliya were in water enjoying their time.Navya was with abeer at 1 side.and on other side Maddy was sitting with Rishab on grass.


She came near Navya and said Hi to her and to all.


Cabir looked at Nandini face, irritation was fully written on her face and after that he looked at Manik whose face was full of naughtyness.


At that time Manik also came and said Hi to all.


Mukti: Arey wah! Bari jaldi friends yaad a gaye tujhe Manik


Manik: what?


Mukti with sarcastic tone: Samajh nahi aya dobara pochun?


Manik: huh (with unbelieveable look)


Cabir with a smirk tuant them indirectly:Arey Mukti! Kyo bechare Bachon ki class le rahe haan.Dekh na sirf raat me hi dono gaib hoe the na ! tu chill kar na ajj ki raat tak yeh dono yehin tere sath hi time guazaren gein.Ab Khush.


Mukti and others understand the tuant in Cabir's statement and started smiling and here Nandini turned her face on other side to hide her expression and Manik !He gave a lopsided smile on listening this teasing .


Now Mukti to continue this teasing session: Ya Right Cabir! Raat tak,, aur os k baad kya?

Cabir with most innocent face: Os k baad kya ! tu ne wo song suna hai?

Mukti:Kon sa

Cabir started to sing in funny voice: KOI NAHI HAI KAMRE MEIN... KYA HASEEN MILA HAI PAL...AJJ SHARARAT KARNE DO...KAM BAQI KAREN GEY KAL.


After listening this Mukti gave a high five to Cabir and all others starting laughing on this.


Manik after this teasing said in attitude: Ho gya tum logon ka?


Cabir and mukti with cute puppy face: Nahi


And now all started laughing out loud.


Mukti after some time:Manik a na tu bhi hamare sath enjoy kar.Bahir kya kar raha hai.


Manik after listening this offer removed his shirt and entered in water.


Nandini gave an angry glare to manik



which was noticed by other gang members and then she moved towards Rishab.

She hugged him and then asked him is he alright? ...He with a lil difficulty said in broken words Main...Th..ek...Hoon.


Nandini was overwhelemed after listening this so she hugged him again.


Manik eyes were fixed on Nandini


Cabir came near Manik and asked in murmur: So Bro kya hoa Tapman ajj phir se garam hai.


Manik with a smile shrugged his shoulder.


Cabir again asked: Kuch hoa kya?


Manik shook in no


Cabir again: To kuch kiya kya?


Now Manik with a smirk shook his head and said: Kuch nahi thora sa gusa hai but thek ho jae ga and wink at him.



Cabir after this called Nandini and said: Arey tum bhi ao na .Wahan kya kar rahe ho?


Nandini: No Cabir! Main yahan thek hoon tum apney dost k sath enjoy karo.


Manik again smile on this and bite his lower lip and others looked at Manik in surprise.


Cabir in funny way: Temperature kafi barh raha hai... kuch karna pare ga.


Now Nandini moved again towards Navya and stand at bank of that lake. Cabir looked at Navya and Navya at same time looked at him.Cabir indicated her something and Navya after understanding what he want gave a node to him.Manik noticed this eye talk between Cavya.


She came behind Nandini and saw that she was engrossed in something so taking a chance she pushed her in water with her thumka.Nandini didn't know what had happened with her. She felt a push from backside and in fear of fall she called Manik's Name a lil loud


Nandini: Manikkk


Manik saw this drama and now worried for Nandini so he moved in water towards Nandini and catched her in his arms.



Nandini's eyes were closed due to fear.Manik 1st gave a disappointed look to Cabir and then Navya.Then he asked nandini in concerned voice: Tum thek ho?


Nandini with her tightly closed eyes shook in No and then tightened her grip on Manik.


Manik while holding Nandini in his arms started moving towards low water area and then made Nandini stand in Water.



Nandini in fear said: Manik No


Manik: Nandini open your eyes and look at me 1st.


Nandini slowly opened her eyes and looked at Manik whose face was full of concern for her.


Manik now said: Trust me tumhe kuch nahi ho ga.! Main hoon na yahan.


Nandini totally forgot about her anger and again tightened her grip around his arm after listening these assuring words and then nodded like a kid


She then said:You know na mujhe swimming nahi ati plz mujhe chorna nahi! Plz


Manik put her wet strands behind her ear and said in assuring voice:Kabhi nahi. ! Trust me on this NEVER EVER .



Nandini after listening this hugged him.They Both were so much engrossed in each other.And their romance was broke by Mukti's voice who clicked their pic and said : How romantic guys.Truly made for each other.


Manik smile on this compliment.


Here Aliya also hugged dhruv in emotions.



Cabir also came outside of water and went towards Navya and then hugged her.



Navya got a shock when Cabir came in her direction and hugged her.


Mukti now in surprise saw these 3 pairs and then complained to them like a lil kid: Not fair guys ?


Manik: What not fair?


Mukti splashed water towards dhruliya and Cavya in irritation and said: Main ne Manik and nandini k liye "How romantic" k words kya use kiye tum log sub k sub romance karna shuru ho gaye.


Mukti: Pahle tum dono (pointed to Manan)then yeh Dhruv and Aliya aur ab Cabir bhi Navya k pass chala gya. Tum sub log romance karo gey to main yahan kya karon gi.Aur Cabir tu ... tu yahan acha bhala pani mein tha tu wahan kya karne gya.(Mady looked at Mukti on this complain)



Cabir with innocent voice: Arey yeh sub apney apney partner ko hug kar rahe the to main ne socha main bhi chance le leta hoon.


All gang members smile on this.


At that time Aryaman came in Mukti's Direction and said: Its Ok Mukti! Main hoon na. tum apney is friend ko hug kar lo.


Mukti hugged him and said in dramatic voice: Ya right and thanks Aryaman lagta hai ab aise hi kam chalana pare ga coz dost to dost rahe nahi ab.sub hi apni apni Girlfriends ko pyare ho gaye haan.


Cabir after listening this said to Manik: Arey yaar Manik is k liye bhi koi Larka dhondo jis ko yeh pyari ho jae ,,,,,nahi to yeh hamesha Romance k kabab me haddi bani rahe gi.


Manik now tuant Cabir : like seriously Cabir!tu yeh kah raha hai,,,,,, Jaise tu to Navya k sath set hone k baad Kabab me haddi nahi banta.


On this Mukti gave a high five to Manik.

Dhruv: But seriously Buddy! Hamarey group mein hum sub k pairs ban gaye bus Mukti hi Baqi hai so seriously sochna pare ga kuch.


Cabir now in teasing voice: But is Pagal aur Jungli kisam ki larki ko bhugte ga kon?


Maddy was listening all this with keen interest and a smile was there on his face.


Aryaman now said: Ya right Bro! Iss k liye to koi isi ki type ka hona chaheye Khonkhar types u know.


Now Mukti said in irritated voice: O hellow merey liye jo bhi hoga na ose main khud dhond loon gi tum apni apni Gfs pe dehan do and after this she walked out from water in anger and after drying herself and after wearing gown moved towards Mansion.


But Cabir ran after her and grab her hand and drag her towards gang members.and started singing a song while twirling her her around.

Cabir

Heer toh badi sad (hai oye!)
Aajkal very mad (hai ji!)
Heer toh badi sad (hai oye!)
Aajkal very mad (hai ji!)

He then called Member s of Fab 5.And now Fab 4 started teasing her with different dance moves ,They held her hand in terns and twirled her in circles.Nandini, Navya ,Aryaman ,Rishab and Maddy were watching all this teasing session of Fab 5 with similing face.

Dhruv (he pinched her cheeks like a kid)


Na khaati-peeti (hai oye!)
Rona-dhona mushkil (hai ji!)
Pyar ki loo mein itni jal gayi (hoye hoye..)
Loo mein jaana mushqil hai (hoye!)
Loo mein jaana mushqil hai (hoye!)

Manik(he placed her arm on her shoulder and then cupped her face )

Heer ki haalat
Kasam Rab ki (hoye!)
Kasam Rab ki (hoye!)
Kasam Rab ki.. (hoye!)
Aajkal very bad hai ji (hai oye!)
Heer to badi sad hai jee (hai ji!)

All male members of Fab 5

Aajkal very mad hai ji (hai oye!)
Heer toh badi sad hai ji (hai ji!)

(tang dang dang...)


Cabir

Ho.. ishq hai maachis, dil hai diesel
Dono changey dooram door
Kaante baante aankh aankh ko
Sapne kar gaye chooram choor (hoye..)
Haay baji padi band Heer ki
Ab iss band pe naache kaun
Hui bolti band band si
kayi dino se hai wo maun

Log kahein ki sanki ho gayi
Haay ya wo utter mad hai (aaye hai!)
Heer toh badi sad hai (hai ji!)
Heer toh badi sad hai ji (hai oye!)
Aajkal very bad hai ji.. (hai ji!)

Dhruv

Ho.. mann mridang baje bedhang
Udaa hai rang bechare ka
Luk muk upar pressure cooker
Hua dimaag kunware ka (hoye..)
Haay tel lagaye nayi zindagi
So so ke din kaante wo
Waqt ke munh pe gussa karke
Maarti rehti chaante wo
Fiqr mein ab toh uska dad hai


MANIK

Haay mom bhi badi sad hai (hai oye!)
Heer to very mad hai (hai ji!)
Aaj kal very bad hai (hai oye!)
She is toh not glad hai (hai ji!)

Na khaati-peeti
Rona-dhona mushkil (hai ji!)
Pyar ki loo mein itni jal gayi (hoye hoye..)
Loo mein jaana mushqil hai (hoye!)
Loo mein jaana mushqil hai (hoye!)

All others

Heer ki haalat
Kasam Rab ki (hoye!)
Kasam Rab ki (hoye!)
Kasam Rab ki.. (hoye!)
Aajkal very bad hai ji (haay oye!)
Heer to badi sad hai ji (hai ji!)
Aaj kal very mad hai ji (haay oye!)
Heer to badi sad hai ji (haay ji!).

After the song Mukti pushed all of them and ran from there.AndFab 4 and others started laughing on this situation.


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awesome. interesting. cute. funny. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aleena di...
Awesome updates...
Read 3 chapters in a go...
Sorry for late comment...
As I was busy wid my studies...
N Harshad wale scene ko soch soch lar hasi aa ri hii mujhe...
N loved manan somance in the last chapter...
Okay...
Babyee...
Cya...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

LOADS OF LOVE,
GARIMA
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

haan to is story k pyarey pyarey readers kon kon waiting list mein he abhi update k liye?

Mujhe chahiyee... Mai wait kar ri hu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
manan were too cute...
Cavya r true cupid..😳
their hugs were soo cute...
song was nice...ssad for mukti...
luved it...
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
update is very cool
evil twins always tease manan
mukti jealous of couples ayoo
only she is single in fab 5
manan are too cute they won't
leave a chance to romance
thanx for the update
because I was waiting for the update
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeshhh !!!
Read the wholeee story in onee gooo
Its damn amzing yaar
Maddy started likin Mukti
Aha! Dats nyc
Loved d cute angry scenes of Manan

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat an amazing update...
This is out of the world...
Dis gud nd owsm...

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