Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 88

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Uff nandu ka gussa...
Manik bhi na... itna tang kar raha tha usse
Cabir teasing manan lol...
Oops navya n cabir ka isharo isharo mei planning n then nandu ko pani mei dhakka mar diya
Hero ne bcha liya na usse...
How romantic...
Sab apne apne partners saath
maddy ko mukti pasand hai kya???
Heer badi sad for mukti...heehe
Too good
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Cabir sahi kha tumne ab mukti ke liue bhi dhoondho kisi ko...awesome song...
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

all the couples were just too adorable...

thanks for using the pics...

i think maddy is developing some soft corner for mukti...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... Tooo cute update... Nandini ka gussaaa toh kab ka Chala gays.. Haha.. All thanks to navya n cabir.. And cabir mukti ka teasing session toh masth tha.. And loved the song.. Awesome update dear.. Thanks for pm.. Take care.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.
All the couples were very cute.
Cabir & Mukti are really funny man.
Always ready to tease.
Mukti & Maddy going to be the next couple right?
Nice.
Thanks for update & pm.
Continue soon. 😊
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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Hi. Thank you very very very much for your kind words, love and appreciation.Haan to bhi baat karte haan update ki... I know k app sub sirf aur srf our dear Manan k updates chahte ho but yaar story mein baqi characters bhi haan na so Manan ki story k line pe lane k liye baqi track bhi sahi karne parte haan.

so sorry in advance to those who only want Manan stuff.

and sorry for mistakes.





After the song Mukti pushed all of them and ran from there.AndFab 4 and others started laughing on this situation.


Mukti ran from there to Mansion and then to her room changed her dress and then moved outside of that Mansion.


She was remembering her time with abhi and her eyes started to shed tears .



She was in trance and she didn't know in which direction she was moving.


Maddy also after some time left from there and came in Mansion.

Maddy's POV


Mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hai k is larki k sath koi problem hai.yeh larki mujhe wo jungle billi nahi lagi jo har waqt apney Panje garne k liye tyar rahti hai.God knows kya problem hai is k sath.But kya mujhe ja k ose dekhna chaheye k wo thek hai ya nahi,,un huh main kyo jaon os k peechey,,Os jungle billi k,,


Heart voice: lykin aik dafa sirf aik dafa yeh dekh le ja k k wo thek hai.


Maddy left towards her room to check her but found only empty room there.


Maddy's POV


Arey ab yeh kahan gayi,, yahan hi to aye thi na,,Kahein kuch... Uh huh,,Jaldi se dhond beta.


And he threaded his hair with his fingers and started searching her in whole mansion but alas! He didn't found her in whole mansion.


Now he became worried about her safety.In frustration he again threaded his hairs and then he ran outside of thatMansion in search on Mukti.


In Lake Area


Nandini: Guys I think kuch zyada ho gya,, I think Mukti Naraz ho k yahan se gayi hai.


Cabir with confused expression asked: Aisa kya really?


Manik placed his hand on her shoulder in friendly manner and said: Don't worry Nandini! Agar jo kuch tum kah rahe ho wo hai bhi to bhi hum sub haan na,, mana leen gey apni os jhalli dost ko.


Dhruv: Ya Nandini don't worry hum sambhal leen gey.


Aliya: I know guys! But I don't know mujhe aisa kyo laga jaise Hum sub ko aise dekh k Mukti ko Abhi ki yaad ayi and I am now afraid k kahen wo phir se depress na ho jae.


Cabir starting biting his nail and said: Arey yaar Darao to nahi


Now Manik came in Cabir's Direction and placed his hand on his shoulders and said in assuring voice: Don't worry Cabir aisa kuch nahi hoga,, and in case agar aisa kuch hoa bhi to hum sub haan na.


On Road


Mukti was crying and remembering her time with Abhi.


She didnt even know in her crying session where she was going.


On other side Maddy was searching for her like a mad person and then he finally saw her walking in the Mid of Road.


Maddy saw a car was coming towards her but she didn't pay any attension on it .He ran in her direction and started calling her name.But Mukti was in very vulnerable condition.She felt very lonely at this moment.


The car about to hit her as she was walking in the middle of the road but on exact moment a hand grabbed her wrist and pulled her in opposite direction.Now they both fall on the road and both were in shock.


Maddy was the 1st to recover from this shock. He immediately straightened himself and then looked at mukti who also straightened herself up.


Maddy: Hay you ! You jungle billi ,Marney ka irada tha kya?


Mukti was startled on hearing this voice .She looked at his face with her teary eyes for sometime and then she didn't know Y but she hugged him in her emotional state.


Maddy was so much shocked on receiving this hug from Mukti but on remembering her her emotional state he didn't break this hug.


After sometime he called her with a lil hesitation:M u k t i


And Mukti's this emotional trance broke after listening her name. She immediately broke that hug and then looked at his face with surprise and asked: Tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?


After asking this question she got up and removed her tears from her face and then said in irritated voice: Jao yahan se.


Maddy after listening this "Jao yahan se "grab her hand in anger and then drag her into nearby Park.


In Park


He released her hand and asked: Now tell me kya tha wo ? (he pointed towards road)


Mukti didn't like this interrogation so she said in irritated voice: Who are you to question me haan?


Maddy sighed deeply and then said in a lil attitude: Ok ! Tou main abhi tumhare friends ko phone kar k tumhare iss stunt k bare mein bata deta hoon then wo khud tum se poch lein gey.


Mukti with angry voice: Tum mujhe Blackmail kar rahe ho?


Maddy with a smirk: Black or White jo samjhna hai samjho


Mukti's POV


Agr iss ne Manik ya Nandini ko bata diya to sub pareshan ho jaein gey aur itney dino k baad to sub itney khush hoe haan ... Nahi nahi mujhe is Namoney ko rokna hi hoga.


Now Mukti said with irritation: Tum kisi ko kuch nahi batao gey! Samjhe?


Maddy only gave a smile on this (like I knew it)


Mukti looked a smile on his face so she said: Aur apni is smile ko na apney pass rakho mujhe dikhane ki zarorat nahi hai.


His smile deepened after listening this.


Mukti: Waise tum yahan kya kar rahe the? ( with raised eyebrow and doubtful voice ) she asked again: Mujhe follow kar rahe thay?


Maddy with a lil acting: Pagal ho kya ?


Now mukti folded her hands on chest and asked: then what are u doing here?


Maddy now to cover his Act said: Wo tumhari os veena...I mean Nandini ne kaha tha k ja k tumhe dekhon.

Mukti again in doubtful voice: Nandini ney?

Maddy: Haan.

Fab 4 and Gang


All others Returned from lake area and started searching for Mukti but they didn't forund her in whole Mansion.


All are now worried for Mukti.


Nandini :Mujhe Mukti k liye ab dar lag raha hai wo purey ghar mein kahen nahi hai.


Aaliya: Ya right! I am also worried for her! Pata nahi kahan gayi hai?


Navya: Hey Mata Rani plz Mukti jahan bhi ho thek ho.


Manik in worried voice: Main Guards se poch k ata hoon k unhon ne Mukti ko dekha kya?


Navya : Haan aur hum os ka number try karte haan itni der mein.

Others nodded with worried faces.


In Park


Mukti's phone started ringing and on seeing Navya's Numbershe felt a lil nervous. She didn't attend that call.


Navya again tried and here Mukti's phone again started ringing.She gathered all her courage and then press Ok button.



Navya: Hello ! Hello Mukti.(cabir took navya's phone from her hand and put her phone on speaker)


Mukti: (After controlling her voice)Haan Navya.


Navy: (cabir indicated her to continue) Mukti kahan ho tum? Hum ne sara ghar dekh liya but tum hamein nahi mili.Kahan ho? Tum thek tou ho na?


Maddy was watching at Mukti's face.


Mukti: Arey Mujhe kya hoa hai! I am fine wo kuch kam tha to Falt pe ayi hoon.


Navya with surprise: Flat pe wo bhi akeli? Tumhe yaad hai na Manik ne kaha tha k uncle k orders haan k hum mein se koi bhi akela bahir nahi jae ga.Tum ... Tum wahein ruku main abhi cabir ya Manik ko wahan bhejti hoon.


Mukti now with lil anger: Navya don't act like a kid yaar,, Main Bachi nahi hoon ,, Akeley apna khyal rakh sakti hoon.Aur waise bhi Nandini ne bodyguard ki duty k liye os maddy ko merey peechey bheja hoa hai na


Now after listening this all gang members Including Nandini as well as Maddy was shocked.


Nandini thought: Main ne kab? Aur yeh maddy mukti k sath?


Others thought: Maddy and Mukti aik sath aur Nandini ne kab bheja Maddy ko?


Maddy's Thought: Pagal Jungli billi yeh kya kah diya ?


Cabir indicated Navya to said come back soon .


Navya: Ok Maddy agar tumhare sath hai to thek hai.Hum sub bht pareshan ho gaye thay but ab thek hai.Ok But plz jaldi wapis ana .


Mukti :Ok thek hai and cut that call and takes long breath.


Maddy holded her by her shoulder at same time and said in irritated voice: Tum ne yeh kyo bola k main tumhare sath hoon?


Mukti now in surprise: What? Kyo bola matlab? Tum ne hi to kaha na k Nandini ne tumhe bheja then?

Maddy: forget it and he turned him in other direction and threaded his hair in frustration.


Now Mukti's C.I.D mind started working.


Mukti's Thoughts


Yeh aise kyo behave kar raha hai...Abhi isi ne bola na k isey Nandini ne bheja to phir? Iss k aise behavior se mujhe aise kyo laga jaise yeh mujh se jhoot bol raha hai? But mujh se jhoot... Jhoot kyon boley ga yeh?...But Nandini... wo to os time Manik k sath busy thi na tou wo isey kaise bhej sakti hai?


Her thinking process was broke by Maddy's voice.


Maddy: Ab agar tumhara yeh stunt karney ka shouk pura ho gya ho to wapis chalein.


Mukti: Tum jao mujhe abhi flat jana hai.


Maddy shook his head and murmered: Unbelievable.


Now he in irritated voice: Tum abhi kahein nahi ja rahe seedhey seedhey wapis chalo


Mukti: tum ne jana hai to jao main nahi a rahe.


Maddy: Ok! Then main ja k sub ko tumhare is stunt k bare mein bata doon ga?


Mukti with same attitude: Ok then main bhi ja k Navya ko bata doon gi k tumhe Nandini ne nahi bheja that um mera peecha karte yahan aye thay


Maddy got a shock on listening this: What?


Mukti without saying anything left from there.


From outside they hire a taxi and reached in their flat.


Mukti opened that door and then searched something from cupboard .In this process accidently a pic fall on the floor and maddy picked it up and saw that Mukti with someone in that pic.


Maddy with surprise asked: Oh so this was the reason for your that stunt.


Mukti on listening that words turned and snached that pic from his hand and said in anger: How dare you to touch Abhi's pic haan?

Maddy: hmmm to Abhi naam hai iss ka? To kahan hai tumhara yeh Abhi?


Mukti again started crying and said in broken voice: Bht dore chala gya hai ... Nahi hai... Nahi hai ab iss dunya main.


Maddy's facial expression changed in gulit and then he said with hesitation: I am sorry.


And after listening this Mukti sat on the floor and started crying uncontrollably remembering Abhi.


Maddy saw her in this state with sad face .After some time he sat on the floor near her and placed his hand on her shoulder to console her and in reflex she hugged him and said in her emotional state : I don't know y but today I feel very lonely .Ajj aise sub ko ikathey dekh k abhi bht yaad a raha hai.


Maddy patted her head to console her and she continued with her talking: Sub haan yahan merey sarey friends but phir bhi ajj aisa lag raha hai main aise hi akeli hoon jaise Mom Dad se alag hone k time pet hi.


Now maddy started to console her and said: Tou kya hoa Tumhare sub friends k hote tum akeli kaise ? Aura b main bhi to hoon?


Mukti broke the hug and looked at him with surprise and asked: Tum?


Maddy with a soft smile: Haan Main! Dekho hum dono na kafi similar se haan


Mukti gave a confused look to him


Maddy now with wide smile started counting on his fingres: Number 1 nature wise ! Tum bhi aggressive main bhi but for friends kuch bhi karney k liye har time tyar.


Number 2: Family wise! Tumhari bhi apni family k sath nahi banti meri bhi


Number 3: Habbits bhi hamari aik jaisi hi haan


Now he asked with a smirk: To kyu na ho jae?


Mukti with extreme surprise: What?


Now maddy while making fun of her: Shadi k liye nahi poch raha ?


Mukti's eyes pooped out after listeing this so she said: Kya kaha?


Maddy: Kya kaha ! Arey dosti k liye pocha hai is mein itna pareshan hone wali kon si baat hai.and he extended his hand.


Mukti : Dosti wo bhi tum se?


Maddy now his on trade mark style with irritated voice: Haan kyo! Mujh mein kante lage haan kya jo itna heran ho raho ho?


Mukti on hearing this started smiling and then she hold his hand and accept his offer.





Hmmm to jnb i think iss thread ka yeh last update hoga.so plz jaldi jaldi thread khatam karo.and thank you once again kahan 1st update dete hoe main doubful thi k may be kisi ko pasand na aye but thanks to paarsa for her motivation yeh safar yahan tak pohancha.1st thread finish hone pe a gya.







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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Mukti's outcome was necessary...
Maddy and muku hmm...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chapter dear👏
Edited by analji - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayee... Awesome update...
We got a new couple MadhTi...

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