SWALAK FF ' MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO ❤️ CHAP 7,8 UPDTD

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@willina

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

hey piku...glad to see laksh finally realising dat smthngz fishy...but he still trusts ragini...
hope he realises his love dat will always win over his hate...awaiting d meet at bari...

keep up d awesome updates...
loved it
your loyal reader
😳

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@jhanvibella

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: willina
hey piku...glad to see laksh finally realising dat smthngz fishy...but he still trusts ragini...
hope he realises his love dat will always win over his hate...awaiting d meet at bari...

keep up d awesome updates...
loved it
your loyal reader
😳

awww thank u billu 🤗

will update as soon my exams get over 😃😃

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@Starry_Love

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Finally Unresed and sorry for being late dear!🤗

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@jhanvibella

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: etoile_lumiere
RES! 😛
Unres! Sorry for being super late love!😳

Hun what a start off to an FF and I have finally read it all.
Love the turn-moil of both Laksh and Swara, their yearning for each
other.

Oh the anguish of Laksh, his turnmoil of not being able to let Swwara
go..His feelings pouring out...He in-fact being this guy who is thinking
of this as being a nightmare...Wanting it to be over almost...This made
me teary eyed..😭

Swara quietly watching on Laksh...both broken...It was like a so close yet so far moment for me..😭😳

Also love the fact that Laksh is starting to raise his eye brows in relation to Ragini...Finally hitting the nails in the right direction...

Btw loved the read so far! Love how you've portrayed their turn-moil and their yearning for each other...Their mixed emotions...coming out in the open...It's like their expressions speak louder than words.