SWALAK FF ' MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO ❤️ CHAP 7,8 UPDTD

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This ff is about SWARA AND LAKSH of swaragini serial.
the part of ff where it has been written is after swara and sanskaar re-enter the house after beingg kicked out by ragini. This one deals with the part where laksh will come to know the truth and how he will react. The ending will have abt whether swara and laksh will unite together or not. The story will move forward in the point of view of swara, laksh and sanskaar.

swara and laksh (swalak) s my fav couple and love them to the core. i am not a great writer but hope u guys like it.

This is purely fictional and entirely my pov.



p.s credit to all the siggies makers of whose i have made of use in my ff 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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SWALAK ❤️
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CHAP 1&2 - PG1
CHAP 3&4- PG2
chap 5&6 -PG 2
CHAP 7 - PG 2
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PART - 1

The sequence starts from where swara will be accepted into MM after ragini tries to expose her fake marriage. They accept swara and sanskaar into the house as there are no proofs for ragini's sentence.


LAKSH'S THOUGHTS:

Laksh is neither able to console himself nor control his anger which has been erupting inside him ever since he has known abt swara and sanskaar marriage. How much ever he tried himself to accept the truth that he has married someone else and not swara, the thought daggered his heart like a spear and breaking the broken heart into even more pieces. He was angry on both swara and sanskaar. He just couldn't understand how swara could do this to him. She clearly stated in the video which she had sent to him on that unfortunate day that she liked her freedom more than anything and that was the reason why she didn't want to become the daughter-in-law of this household. But now she has married a person none other than his brother. This totally made no sense. He was becoming blind with anger such that he didn't want to listen to anything that she would tell him. Even though he spouts words to hurt her, he never means anything from his heart. It is just that he is not able to accept her betrayal.

Tears rolled down his eyes. He couldn't stop himself from laughing at his situation. He never thought there would be a day like this in his life. He didn't know whether he will be able to trust anyone else in his life anymore. He was so clueless that he didn't know when he would be mentally prepared for moving ahead in his life forgetting swara's betrayal or may be never. He felt sorry for ragini. He married her because of his anger because he felt that he was responsible for all the bad turns in her life. He wanted to save her life and in the process he has killed himself from within. He would definitely give her all the respect he has to give her as a wife but not sure whether he will ever give her a place in his heart. That place was always for the one he loved from the bottom of his heart. But she had betrayed him. The pain was so deep that he couldn't forget swara just like that, or move in his life like swara has moved on with his brother. He was using ragini to take his anger out on swara. Even during his fight with sanskaar, he couldn't mouth out the fact that he was fighting because he couldn't see her with his brother and instead he had lied abt sanskaar talking bad abt ragini. He was right now pathetic. He saw himself in the mirror.

"kya yaar, lucky, lagta hai mein abhi lucky nahi hoon. Sab kuch ulta ho gaya hai meri Zindagi mein. Meri pyaar ne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Aur mein, apni Zindagi mein aage bhi nahi chal paa raha hoon ya peeche bhi hat paa raha hoon."

The moonlight made its way into the room. This distracted his attention

So he and swara will be in the same house again but in a different way. When he saw her, his blood boiled. His eyes followed her and only her no matter who was with him. He was right now in the state where he couldn't live the life he had to choose or accept the truth which everyone are asking him to accept or just escape from this very place so that he could be free from all the emotional turmoil he is in due to seeing swara with his brother. He vehemently hoped that she would go from this house but not.

He gazed at the moon. There was time when he gazed at the moon whenever he was reminded of her. He would see her face in moon. Now also it was the same for him. But he hated it. he in frustration turned swiftly which resulted in the fall of the flower pot in his balcony. He pacified after it fell as he saw ragini sleeping inside the room. He went inside the room. The clock stuck one. Still he was unable to sleep. This has been the norm for the past many days. He has become the sleepless ghost. No matter how much ever he tried to sleep he couldn't, in the end he would doze out of tiredness for an hour or two. Today his headache was eating his head due to sleeplessness. He took out the sleeping pills from his packet. He held the tab in his hand. He could sense ragini ruffling in her sleep. He didn't want her to know that he was taking tablet to sleep. He didn't want to hurt her. So he went out of the room noiselessly and went down the stairs to the kitchen. He sat down on the dining table and slipped the tab down his throat. He sat there for a few minutes and before he could know he fell asleep under the tab's influence. He slumped in the table he was sitting.

***

Sanskaar's room:

Sanskaar and swara are in a conversation.

Sans: "swara, we have to be careful hereafter, so that we don't get caught by ragini anymore."

Swara: "haan sanskaar. Par mujhe pata nahi, mein aage kya karoon. I didn't think we would get exposed by ragini instead of the reverse. Anyway thank god, everything is all right now."

Sans: "we have to achieve what we want to as soon as possible, because this ragini might do something or else to expose us again. So it's better we plan fast to bring her truth out."

Swara nodded her head. The day's incidents were flashing inside her mind.

Her parents had been so much disappointed with her. Their words were still echoing inside her ears. She had told the truth but with no proof. No one was ready to believe her.

Somi: "swara, don't go in the wrong path for justice. I hope u r not lying to me. I don't want ragini's marriage to be broken because of u. whatever has happened has happened. Just leave it."

Shekhar: "u will never redeem swara. U r the reason why your parents are separated today. I don't want to hear anymore accusations abt ragini from u. Don't try to create havoc in ragini's life. I will never forgive u if anything happens like that."

She was so immersed in her thoughts.

Sanskaar was asking swara something but she was not responding. He could sense that she was affected by the whole drama which had happened today. He had done all he could when she was about get out of the house. He wanted to help her all he could. He couldn't see her suffer. After all he was also one of the reasons, why she is in this state. He was just staring at her. The rattling of the windows shook their attentions back to ground. Swara just smiled at him and turned towards the bed.

Swara: "sanskaar, we have to start our plan tom, so that ragini's truth will get exposed as soon as possible. I don't want to lie for a long time. I wish this ends soon." And stifled her cough.

She coughed a little.

Sanskaar searched for the water jug but to his dismay it was empty. He offered to go down to the kitchen to fetch water.

Swara: "no problem sanskaar. I will go and get water. U must be very tired. Go to sleep and I will be back after some time" and walked towards the exit of the room with the jug.

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Part-2

SWARA'S MINDVOICE:

She wanted to unite her parents at all costs. She couldn't bear to see them separated because of ragini's deeds. She would unite them and had to. That was the only reason why she was living such a big lie. It didn't matter if she would have to suffer during the process. Her only goal right now was to unite her parents. As she walked into the corridor, she could see the lights were on in the kitchen and someone was sitting in the dining table. She was puzzled as of who would be awake at this time as it was 1'oclock in the morning. She came down the stairs. She figured out that it was none other than laksh. She stopped in her tracks. She didn't want to run into him at this time. Her heart started beating fast and she saw him falling asleep on the table. She couldn't stop her tears. She could sense how much laksh was suffering by this whole matter, for him to fall asleep on the dining table at this time and not in his room. She never wanted to hurt anyone through her fake marriage but she was hurting laksh. She was standing behind the pillar so that laksh wouldn't notice her till he fell asleep totally.

Bgm: judaai...

She was feeling the same pain he was feeling. She understood his pain of betrayal as she also suffered that becoz of ragini but she couldn't do anything for it. She had dreamt abt entering this house as his wife but right now both of their lives have been turned upside down. She somewhat felt that she was the reason for his life being like this. So she wanted to disappear out of here after she would sort out her parents' relationship so that he would move ahead in his life with ragini. She wanted him to move on so that he would be happy. But... and her tears were flowing uncontrollably. She can't go back to his life even if she wanted. He was someone else husband now and that someone was none other than her sister. She can never do the same what ragini did.

She realized that she couldn't stand there forever. She had come down to take water. She saw that laksh had drifted into deep sleep. She went past him and filled the jug with water. When she turned to leave she could see a smile on his face. Her heart stopped for a moment seeing his face. He was someone whom she had loved more than she could ever imagine, and still loves him. Even though everything happened so fast, she had been in so much love with him, which she never expressed to him. Anyways, there wouldn't be any more chances to express her love to him.

She moved closer to him and found a tablet cover near him. She took it and guessed it what it might be. She was aching a lot more. She couldn't take it. And when she saw his face she could see tear on the edge of his eye and the same time a smile, his charming one (which she always had loved to see on him), on his face. The helplessness of the situation was getting to her. She couldn't comfort him even if she wanted to. She thought it would be better she left the place. Cauz she was on guard of her feelings so that no one would ever try to figure out what she was exactly feeling. If someone would see her now, they would figure out that she is still in love with him, by her face itself.

She found that laksh might be feeling cold and brought a blanket from her room and covered him with that. No matter what, she couldn't stop herself from caring for him. When she turned to leave, laksh caught her hand. Her heart stopped for a moment. But when she saw that he was asleep she let out a sigh of relief. Even in his sleep he was holding her hand unknowingly.

"chandariya jheeni re jheeni

chandariya jheeni re jheeni

aakhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni

yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni..."

She took her hand out of his grasp with tears in her eyes, remembering their old good days.

***

Sanskaar couldn't see swara inside the room. He was concerned abt her. It had been a long time that she went down. He decided to check on her. When he came out of the room, he searched if she was near the room anywhere. But he couldn't see her. At that time the lights of the kitchen caught his eyes. He could see someone standing there. After his eyes got adjusted to the darkness, he could figure out that it was swara hovering over something. When she moved, he could see that she had been covering the blanket over laksh. He could feel that swara still loved laksh as before. He looked upon both of them.

Ragini had come out of her room in search of laksh and saw swara and laksh together down in the kitchen. She felt anger and helplessness at the same time. She was determined to send swara out of the house as soon as possible. She didn't want laksh's and her marriage to be in trouble. She couldn't afford to lose him again. He was hers and will be always. For that, she would do anything. She couldn't even stand the sight of swara near laksh.

Sanskaar and ragini were looking upon swara and laksh from upstairs.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES! 😛
Unres! Sorry for being super late love!😳

Hun what a start off to an FF and I have finally read it all.
Love the turn-moil of both Laksh and Swara, their yearning for each
other.

Oh the anguish of Laksh, his turnmoil of not being able to let Swwara
go..His feelings pouring out...He in-fact being this guy who is thinking
of this as being a nightmare...Wanting it to be over almost...This made
me teary eyed..😭

Swara quietly watching on Laksh...both broken...It was like a so close yet so far moment for me..😭😳

Also love the fact that Laksh is starting to raise his eye brows in relation to Ragini...Finally hitting the nails in the right direction...

Btw loved the read so far! Love how you've portrayed their turn-moil and their yearning for each other...Their mixed emotions...coming out in the open...It's like their expressions speak louder than words.


Edited by etoile_lumiere - 9 years ago
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if anyone has confusion abt the characters or the original story line pls feel to ask me 😃😃
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Originally posted by: etoile_lumiere

RES! 😛

Finally its here! 😳


yup! 😃😳
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Part-3

Ragini was burning with jealously that she couldn't sleep anymore. She had done all the things that one shouldn't do, but still it was of no use. Laksh was still in love with swara, no matter how much ever she tried to create misunderstanding between them. The only way she could be with laksh till the end was by removing swara from her path. This way laksh will never learn the truth and will remain with her till the end. She was just tossing around in the bed. All her dreams came crashing the previous day in the room. She couldn't take her relationship to the next level. But still she had chance. The one thing she had to do was try to stop swara from exposing the truth. She was confident that swara would never be able to find any proof against her. This gave her some relief. Moreover she was laksh's wife now and no one can separate her from him even after the truth gets exposed. She had achieved her goal of becoming laksh's life partner. With this thought she tried to sleep.

Sanskaar pretended to be asleep when swara came into the room. She lied down in the bed and after a while he could hear sniffling sound. He guessed that she must be crying again. He couldn't do anything. He was feeling so helpless. He wanted to reach out to her and console her but swara would not allow that. Even though they both had become friends she never tried to share her feelings with him and always had a protective layer over her heart which he couldn't break. The only thing he could do right now to bring back the smile on her face was by helping her to expose ragini's truth and finally unite her parents. He wanted to do that so badly.

***

Morning:

Laksh woke up with a start. He dint know when he had fallen asleep on the dining table. Thank god, the elders had gone to some temple, or else there would have been a great hungama in the morn, if anyone had seen him sleeping there. He sensed a blanket around him. He was puzzled of who would have done that and came to a conclusion that ragini would have done that and dismissed that thought.

Swara came out with wet hair from bathroom. She was drying her hair and sanskaar woke up from his sleep and the saw her with the dryer. He couldn't take his eyes off her. He was just staring at her. At this time, swara noticed him that he was awake.

Swara: "tum utt gayi... let me go and bring tea for u" and left the room.

Before he could utter his response she left the room.

Sanskaar: "she never waits for my response." and tossed around in the couch again. He thought "hmmm she was looking beautiful" and tried to get rid of it as it was affecting him.

All of them except swara, ragini, sanskaar and laksh had gone to the temple.

Swara went into the kitchen. She had kind of learnt to make proper tea by now. She took the cup with her and when she came out of the kitchen she ran into ragini. She didn't want to talk to her anymore. But ragini was standing in her way.

Ragz: "I have told u numerous times swara, don't try to break my relationship with laksh. You ll never succeed in it."

Swara: "ragini, sach mein, do u have any partial amnesia or any selective hearing impairment??"

Ragini gave her a "kyun" look.

Swara: "becoz, I guess, i have told u numerous time that I am least bothered abt u and your relationship with laksh. I am here just to reunite my parents and to expose your truth. I hope u heard it this time. Don't bother me again with same dialogues. please" and rolled her eyes, just to irritate ragini.

And swara left the place. Ragini went blank at swara's response and was literally fuming.

After swara left the kitchen, she was preoccupied with thoughts and as she was absent minded she bumped into laksh when turning around in the corridor and the tea poured over both of them. She swiftly took her hand to wipe off the tea from his hand and shirt and for a moment both forgot everything and he was concerned abt whether she had got any burn becoz of it.

Laksh: "shona, shouldn't u have been more careful?"

Swara: "sorry laksh, I just..." only at this time both realized their words and moved away from each other. They didn't even meet each other's eyes and left the place to their respective rooms.

Swara entered the room empty handed, to Sanskaar's surprise.

Sansk: "u went down to bring tea right?? Kya tum, Meri taraf se meri chai pi liya?" with a teasing smile. Only after a minute he noticed her face. "What happened? Are u alright?" noticing her dress with tea stains, with a start.

Swara: "am okay sanskaar. It just happened by accident."

Sansk: "u didn't get burnt rgt? If so, show me, I ll put some ointment for u" and grabbed her hand to see.

Swara: "it's okay sanskaar. I am okay. I didn't get burnt. Okay."

After a moment, S: "Go and get ready. Is it not getting late for u to go to office? Papa, dad and adarsh bhaiyaa sab mandhir gayi hai, so I guess it would be better if u would go to office today." With a tone which sounded like reprimanding him.

Sansk: "hmmm fine then. Okay swara madam. Even before u said it, I was also thinking the same thing."

He got ready to go to office. Both laksh and sanskaar left for the office.

After finishing all works, ragini returned to her room and found laksh's shirt with the tea stain in the tub. She could imagine what could have happened. She started crying. She took her phone and dialed her dadi's number.

It would take another day for the family members to arrive home, so ragini and swara handled the affairs of home. The regular watchman was not feeling well so he had arranged for a proxy in place of him. Since the khakha has been working at their house for years, they trusted him. Laksh and sanskaar reached home at 6pm.

Ragini was already manipulating in her mind as of how to send swara out of the house.

Laksh and sanskaar went to their rooms to freshen up. The door bell rang.

Swara went to open the door. She was thinking abt who it might be cauz everyone would return only by tom and was damn surprised when she saw who it was. It was omi.

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Part-4

Omi had been out of town during laksh's marriage.

O: "hi swara." With a big smile when he saw sindoor and mangalsutra on her.

Swara was speechless for a moment.

Omi waved his hand before her.

O: "oye forgot me uh??" with a tease in his voice.

S: "nothing like that omi. Come inside. Didn't u call laksh?"

O: "that's the problem yaar. I have been trying to reach him since yesterday. He is not picking my call, that's y I came here in person."

After a moment's consideration "hmmm when he has a wife, he loves so much near him, how would he pick up my call" and winked at her.

Swara started to feel awkward as she could sense that omi had misunderstood everything and didn't know abt what had happened during marriage.

S: "omi, you know... I guess ... what actually happened was..." she was struggling for the right words.

O: "arey yaar, you don't have to explain me anything. We both are friends from before na. And lucky is my best buddy. I clearly know how much he loves u so I can understand why he wouldn't attend my call. Now you are my buddy's wife. So officially meri "bhabhi". Don't worry I will not tease you much." And laughed whole heartedly. He went on talking without allowing her to speak.

Omi continued.

O: "swara, you know what, you are indebted to me."

S: "like what omi?" she was confused by this.

O: "cauz I am the reason you are having lucky as your better half."

Swara still looked confused.

O: "okay okay I will explain. Remember the day when u asked lucky to return to his home and closed his eyes to remember his best moments. He saw u in his mind. and the best part is after u left when he said this to me, I was the one who made him realize that he was in love with u." and smiled happily recalling the happy moments of his dear friend.

Swara was starting to get emotional. She couldn't speak a word as the scene started flashing in her mind. He went on.

O: "I even started chanting palat and after some disbelief lucky also joined me to see whether u too loved him or not. Oh my, those moments were so much fun. Now do you understand why you are indebted to me." he was clearly in an excitement after relieving past memories, so he mistook swara's silence.

Swara just smiled at him.

o: "swara, can u call lucky down? I want to talk to him yaar. It's been so many days and he might be even angry on me for not attending his much awaited wedding."

Ragini heard all. She couldn't hold her anger anymore. She went before omi to say that she was laksh's wife. Fortunately, omi spoke before she could.

O: "oh hey, swara is this not your sister? did she also get married?" with a moment confusion.

Omi never had a great opinion of ragini, as according to him, ragini was someone whom his friend never wanted to marry.

Before ragini opened her mouth laksh came there. He saw omi and realized the confusion.

L: "omi chal mere saath"

O: "lucky, I was waiting for u. why didn't u attend my call?"

Laksh started dragging himself along with omi to the outside of the house.

O: "lucky arey wait yaar let me Atleast say bye to swara. Swara, no sorry, bhabhi bye" gleefully waved his hand at her. With that laksh dragged him totally out of the house.

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