TWO POEMS ONE ON FUNNY GHOST AND THE OTHER ON THE COCKROACH SCENE. - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nandita123

Omg...the poem was so beautiful. Reading it for the second time. Hats off to you. Will be waiting for such beautiful poem.

Wow loved your poems, Jenny! You're so talented 👏

Originally posted by: --SudhaS--

Wow loved your poems, Jenny! You're so talented 👏

jenny i think my words are again finished to describe how perfectly you put the whole situation in your poem😳 its lovely, beautiful at the same time such magical effect on me that i just lost in here😳😳
Mothers will reminisces this particular story of the funny handsome and a perfect dancing elegant ghost"
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Originally posted by: rukiaa

jenny i think my words are again finished to describe how perfectly you put the whole situation in your poem😳 its lovely, beautiful at the same time such magical effect on me that i just lost in here😳😳

"His cute smile will prejudice that he is not a deadly ghost,

But a cute handsome pyaari ghost,

Viplav Tripathi u are a beauty personified and an exaggeration of handsome outlook,

Which makes u look hot even in the monster's look,

If ever in this world a child wants to hear the story of a ghost,

Mothers will reminisces this particular story of the funny handsome and a perfect dancing elegant ghost"
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wow..

Thanks a lot Nikkisha dear😳😳