TWO POEMS ONE ON FUNNY GHOST AND THE OTHER ON THE COCKROACH SCENE.

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HI GUYS I AM BACK WITH MY POETIC SESSION THIS TIME I HAVE CHOOSEN TO COME UP WITH TWO POEMS AT A TIME HOPE U GUYS ,WILL ENJOY IT.
IN MY FIRST POEM,I AM GOING TO DEAL WITH THE EXPIERENCE OF THE FUNNY GHOST

THE FUNNY,DANCING GHOST RIDER.
He heard a noise,that challenged his poise,
His body's equilibrium shook to an extent and fear accumulated his voice,
The anklets spreading prophecies of phantom manners,
As if they are here to preach the divination manners,
His eyes exaggerated the sense of his petrification,
And he ran away when he saw the deadly avatar of the girl's personification,
A calm after a storm is what the girls would have thought,
But the chap was the one who had a sickle to break their thoughts,
Gothic fictions even they will fail for the ideas they created,
Because this chap's creative and instant ideas are ever going to be created,
Girls slumber was defeated by this skeleton,
This skeleton was unique,it had two wonderful legs,it was an irony for the regular skeletons,
Resident of Ashram flew utensils unto it,
The modern version ghost played football with it,
Their pressure was anticipated by the ghost,
As if it was a human blood's host,
It aim was not to suck blood,
But its ambition was on mocking satirically the rivalry's deed,
Can any of the ghost in this world ,ever do such phenomenal steps,
Which can even be included as the versatile dance comprising of elegant steps,
The pranksters on Land were born in the minds of these folks,
Which was into limelight when he cleared his disguise and addressed the folks,
The play organized the event of tit for tat,
Concluded with the hilarious movements of the ghost rider's fabulous fact,
A new stereotype was given to a ghost,
Which was entirely his own memory fact boost,
Vidhwas ashram haunted with only a funny ghost was evident through his facial gestures,
A skeleton,is he a ghost? No not all,
Just a single look at him ,It is fake will be promises of all,

His cute smile will prejudice that he is not a deadly ghost,
But a cute handsome pyaari ghost,
Viplav Tripathi u are a beauty personified and an exaggeration of handsome outlook,
Which makes u look hot even in the monster's look,
If ever in this world a child wants to hear the story of a ghost,
Mothers will reminisces this particular story of the funny handsome and a perfect dancing elegant ghost.

My second poem,I am going to deal with our favourite cockroach scene and the vague re -entry of Viplav.

THE COCKROACH AND HIS VAGUE ENTRY RESULTING IN A REVELATION OF TRUE LOVE.


Chaos is what his heart faces,
Catastrophe is what he predicts if he leaves the innocent girl's gesture faces,
Why on Land does he think about these issues?
After his mother came to resolve the issues.
His heart was missing beats and it's intensity was too high,
When he was asked to leave the Ashram,his happiness fly into the sky high,
Is that a turmoil that one could withstand with ?
No but it heart spoke to him saying that it was something which he can't cope with,
Then what is the remedy for this?
His heart opened its extreme voice but one couldn't hear anything and can ask what is this?
It was a whisper to our minds but a testimony to his brains,
He nodded to its voice and assigned his thoughts with the help of his brains,
An extraordinary smile made her vile,
The grinning was like an owl it was vile ,
It was the same funny ghost now on the branch of the tree,
Making promises that she should permit him until he will make this green tree as his home tree,
The feeling of belonging never leaves one,
Which makes him run to his previously stayed one,
She grabbs him by his shirt,
And he accepts it as a flirt.

The one who is well to do in his job is always interested in it,
That interest haunted Viplav Tripathi and he came close to their room which was unlit,
The lantern on one hand adding halloween effects,
He was entirely covered with white cloth which was measurably horror effects,
He embedded the fear of horror in her mind,
As she was awestruck by the fear created by the funny ghost and that irritated her mind,
The quality of being inconspicuous is blended in his nerves,
It was well portrayed by the encounter of the cockroach which kindled his nerves,
Is this the ghost who made folks stumble with his bows,
His screams made her pick up the creature from the extreme low,
His reinforcement of his own phobia for creatures made him now a human lizard,
He was sandwiched between the cockroach and the wall like a noisy lizard,
That hangs on the walls as it is nature,
His transformation made him quit his nature and capture the creatures nature,
She could sense his fear,
And she with the cockroach came near,
She played a game with it,
As an aftermath of games she played laughter started peeping from her lips which lit light and he was hit,
Her laughter gave him pleasure,he couldn't resist that laughter even in that gesture,
The fear in his mind flew away and made him to zoom her emotions by capturing his face with a cute gesture,
His constant looks at her made him think of the voice he heard,
He had nodded for it's call but asked it to justify it through a living deed,
But now he can't question it as it's statement can't even be accepted as fake even by his foe,
It was "She is ur mandatory without her you will become a man who is deadly " was the symbol which it gave him as a woe.




THE CUTE GHOST WITH A LANTERN IN HIS HAND.


GHOST OF CUTE LAND MAKING FUN OF CUTE GIRL.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jenny di...once again u left me speechless...😳😳
the scene was portrayed beautifully here...😳😳
gr8 job di...πŸ‘
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awesome jenny u excelled so much...
keep posting such beautiful poems...πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Wow dear this was amazingπŸ‘
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Jenni since when have you been writing poems? I'm Sure since childhood. I believe writing essays and compositions is easy but poems definitely call for great talent. Excellent command over words and thoughts.
And you're fabulous when it comes to poetry. Every time you leave me surprised with your works. I mean you write on situations that are unimaginable. Just tell me who could have thought of a poem on these comic scenes. But look at you, you did a brilliant job. Again I will say you're extremely talented. Great going dear.
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Originally posted by: rerose

HI GUYS I AM BACK WITH MY POETIC SESSION THIS TIME I HAVE CHOOSEN TO COME UP WITH TWO POEMS AT A TIME HOPE U GUYS ,WILL ENJOY IT.

IN MY FIRST POEM,I AM GOING TO DEAL WITH THE EXPIERENCE OF THE FUNNY GHOST

THE FUNNY,DANCING GHOST RIDER.
He heard a noise,that challenged his poise,
His body's equilibrium shook to an extent and fear accumulated his voice,
The anklets spreading prophecies of phantom manners,
As if they are here to preach the divination manners,
His eyes exaggerated the sense of his petrification,
And he ran away when he saw the deadly avatar of the girl's personification,
A calm after a storm is what the girls would have thought,
But the chap was the one who had a sickle to break their thoughts,
Gothic fictions even they will fail for the ideas they created,
Because this chap's creative and instant ideas are ever going to be created,
Girls slumber was defeated by this skeleton,
This skeleton was unique,it had two wonderful legs,it was an irony for the regular skeletons,
Resident of Ashram flew utensils unto it,
The modern version ghost played football with it,
Their pressure was anticipated by the ghost,
As if it was a human blood's host,
It aim was not to suck blood,
But its ambition was on mocking satirically the rivalry's deed,
Can any of the ghost in this world ,ever do a phenomenal steps,
Which can we be included as the versatile dance comprising elegant steps,
The pranksters on Land were born in the minds of these folks,
Which was into limelight when he cleared his disguise and addressed the folks,
The play organized the event of tit for tat,
Concluded with the hilarious movements of the ghost rider's fabulous fact,
A new stereotype was given to a ghost,
Which was entirely his own memory fact boost,
Vidhwas ashram haunted with only a funny ghost was evident through his facial gestures,
A skeleton,is he a ghost? No not all,
Just a single look at him ,It is fake will be promises of all,

His cute smile will prejudice that he is not a deadly ghost,
But a cute handsome pyaari ghost,
Viplav Tripathi u are a beauty personified and a exaggeration of handsome outlook,
Which makes u look hot even in the monster's look,
If ever in world a child wants to hear the story of a ghost,
Mothers will reminisces this particular story of the funny handsome and a perfect dancing elegant ghost.

My second poem,I am going to deal with our favourite cockroach scene and the vague re -entry of Viplav.

THE COCKROACH AND HIS VAGUE ENTRY RESULTING IN A REVELATION OF TRUE LOVE.


Chaos is what his heart faces,
Catastrophe is what he predicts if he leaves the innocent girl's gesture faces,
Why on Land does he think about these issues?
After his mother came to resolve the issues.
His heart was missing beats and it's intensity was too high,
When he was asked to leave the Ashram,his happiness fly into the sky high,
Is that a turmoil that one could withstand with ?
No but it heart spoke to him saying that it was something which he can't cope with,
Then what is the remedy for this?
His heart opened its extreme voice but one couldn't hear anything and can ask what is this?
It was a whisper to our minds but a testimony to his brains,
He nodded to its voice and assigned his thoughts with the help of his brains,
An extraordinary smile made her vile,
The grinning was like an owl it was vile ,
It was the same funny ghost now on the branch of the tree,
Making promises that she should permit him until he will make this green tree as his home tree,
The feeling of belonging never leaves one,
Which makes him run to his previously stayed one,
She grabbs him by his shirt,
And he accepts it as a flirt.

The one who is well to do in his job is always interested in it,
That interest haunted MR Tripathi and he came close to their room which was unlit,
The lantern on one hand adding halloween effects,
He was entirely covered with white cloth which was measurably horror effects,
He embedded the fear of horror in her mind,
As she was awestruck by the fear created by the funny ghost and that irritated her mind,
The quality of being inconspicuous is blended in his nerves,
It was well portrayed by the encounter of the cockroach which kindled his nerves,
Is this the ghost who made folks stumble with his bows,
His screams made her pick up the creature from the extreme low,
His reinforcement of his own phobia for creatures made him now a human lizard,
He was sandwiched between the cockroach and the wall like a noisy lizard,
That hangs on the walls as it is nature,
His transformation made him quit his nature and capture the creatures nature,
She could sense his fear,
And she with the cockroach came near,
She played a game with it,
As an aftermath of games she played laughter started peeping from her lips which lit light and he was hit,
Her laughter gave him pleasure,he couldn't resist that laughter even in that gesture,
The fear in his mind flew away and made him to zoom her emotions by capturing his face with a cute gesture,
His constant looks at her made him think of the voice he heard,
He had nodded for it's call but asked it to justify it through a living deed,
But now he can't question it as it's statement can't even be accepted as fake even by his foe,
It was "She is ur mandatory without her you will become a man who is deadly " was the symbol which it gave him as w


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Posted: 10 years ago
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well done jenny, fantastic read.. both the poems. They make an impact as we can visually relate to both scenarios.the diction and choice of words are amusing ,yet meaning full.. you have immortalized these endearing scenes in your profound pieces of work, jenny , you do this forum proud.. looking forward to more from you..
much love hammie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abshcool

jenny di...once again u left me speechless...😳😳

the scene was portrayed beautifully here...😳😳
gr8 job di...πŸ‘

Thank u soo much my dear Sweet shruthi😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Thank u soo much my dear Sweet shruthi😳😳


u r welcm di...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

awesome jenny u excelled so much...

keep posting such beautiful poems...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Ohh thanks a lot my dear Tarun😳😳

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