TWO POEMS ONE ON FUNNY GHOST AND THE OTHER ON THE COCKROACH SCENE.

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

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MISHAL UR ROCKING YAAR,I LOVE U BABY😳😳😳

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Vishva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Di you have once again nailed it😳😳

Loved it to the core 😉

I'm sure this us the best scene if the week 😳

Do keep writing more 😳😳

P.S Killer soggy Box 🤢🤢

Reporting from heaven Di 😆

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awida

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome poems Jenny.

I just love to watch ViDha through your eyes..your feelings always make me feel the same towards this amazing couple.

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AISHWARYA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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LOVELY POSTS JENNY U R ENHANCING UR SKILLS DAY BY DAY DEAR I ENJOYED TWO MPOEMS BUT THE SECOND ONE GAVE ME VIDHA FEELS😳

BTW WHAT DO U MEAN BY PETRIFICATION IN THIS CONTEXT AND WHEN IN THE SECOND POEM SECOND PARA SECOND LINE U HAVE WRITTEN MR TRIPATHI WHICH MEANS MISTER OR MISHAL RAHEJA😉

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pressu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome post dear👏

Very nice.😃

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Guruvishva
Di you have once again nailed it😳😳
Loved it to the core 😉
I'm sure this us the best scene if the week 😳
Do keep writing more 😳😳

P.S Killer soggy Box 🤢🤢
Reporting from heaven Di 😆

My dear Sweety ,love u loads dear,ur comments are too sweet like u my baby😳😳

🤗And I know killer siggy 😳😳 no one can escape😳😳 heaven's angel we are all the fans of our mighty angel😛😛

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: AISHU183
LOVELY POSTS JENNY U R ENHANCING UR SKILLS DAY BY DAY DEAR I ENJOYED TWO MPOEMS BUT THE SECOND ONE GAVE ME VIDHA FEELS😳
BTW WHAT DO U MEAN BY PETRIFICATION IN THIS CONTEXT AND WHEN IN THE SECOND POEM SECOND PARA SECOND LINE U HAVE WRITTEN MR TRIPATHI WHICH MEANS MISTER OR MISHAL RAHEJA😉

Di,thanks a lot for u r wonderful comments and I will explain u what I meant through that particular terms in this context,Di actually by the means of petrification,I was trying to explain the sudden fear he had in his eyes which made him unable to move,that is di first of all he was frightened &thought it was a ghost na,that is what I tried explaining.Then Di ,it is Mister not Mishal Raheja becz if I add MR then the line does make a complete sense,both phonological and lexical errors will patch up my line di.

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: awida
Awesome poems Jenny.
I just love to watch ViDha through your eyes..your feelings always make me feel the same towards this amazing couple.

Ohh thanks a lot Awida di,ur comments made me soo glad😳😳