Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
What is the nandini plan?..
Nice update..I loved Mr marlotha character
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its nyc...
Thanx for pm
Waiting for nxt part
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Originally posted by: divtan

u knw what abhi galti se main rpl karne waali thi nandini ko...as in Aleena, i thot ur nandini and i was gonna rpl...haa haa..kal xyzz jagah pe milenge...hahahahahahahaha
dekha...main kitni involve ho gayi story main :) :) :D :D :D

lovely update !! manik back into teasing mode and monster mode !!
manik monster malhotra !! :) :)
so fab5 will meet...yayyy
cabir bhi toh aa rha hai na :) :) :)
and thanks for such an early update :) :) :) :)
thank u Aleena :)



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Good one
Update soon
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
READ 2 IN A GO
DESPERATLY WAITING FOR NXT PART
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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Hi Friends

How are you all.I hope u all are fit and fine.Yaaro yeh chakar kya hai koi mujhe batao buddy requests daily basis pe a rahe haan but comment and like same chal rahe haan .




yeh kya ho raha hai... arey ... yeh kya ho raha hai.

So here is the next update.plz yaar agar acha lage to kanjoosi chor k comment kar diya karo(for all those jo comment nahi karte) and thank you (for those jo regular basis pe comment karte haan).

Sorry in Advance in case of error or mistakes

Part 10

After Dinner Nandini entered in her room and at same time she heard ringing tone of her mobile. She saw the Caller Id and with worried face she pressed Ok button

On other side it was Manik.

Manik: Hello

Nandini: Hello , Manik kya hoa tum thek to ho na ... iss time phone ...sub thek hai na.

Manik on other side smile on this care and said: saans to le lo yaar...hello k sath hi itne sare sawal.

Main thek hoon. Kuch nahi hoa mujhe ...aur sub thek hai yahan

Nandini with surprised voice: to phir tum ne is time phone kyo kiya?

Manik: Phone kyo kiya matlab... Main tumhe kabhi bhi kahen pe bhi phone kar sakta hoon aur thank you kaho apney AYIAPPA ko main to pahle ki tarhan tumhare ghar ane ki soch raha tha.

Nandini's eyes popped out on this and she immediately went towards window to see outside.

Manik : Ab aise khari hoe bahir kya dekh rahe ho?

(Manik in his room smile on this while imagining Nandini's condition)

Nandini looked here and there and then asked: Manik tum kahan ho?

Manik with love filled voice : Tumhare dil mein.

Nandini shyly smile on this .

Manik: I am missing you. Main abhi tumhare ghar a raha hoon.

Nandini : No! Stop right there. Tum yahan nahi a sakte abhi.

Manik like a irritated kid: KYooo

Nandini after a lot of thinking: wo...wo... haan... Wo navya yahan hai is liye.

Manik : awww jhootiii Navya wahan nahi hai.

Nandini again looked in all sides and then said : tumhe kaise pata k navya yahan nahi hai.

Manik : kyok main apni Nandu ko khud se bhi zyada janta hoon.

Nandini smile on this and said : Acha Manik raat bht ho gayi hai ab tumhe so jana chaheye.

Manik didn't want to end this call (but ab kya Karen Nandini ne kaha hai to manna to pare ga na manic babu ko)

Manik: Ok tum so jao.

Nandini: Manik tumhe bhi sona chaheye . subha sub se milna bhi to hai aur kal to tumhe rest ka time nahi mile ga so abhi rest kar lo plzzz mere liye.

Manik smile on this plead and said: Ok try karta hoon but sirf tumhare liye.

Nandini: Good night Manik

Manik: Good Night Nandini.

...

New Sun arises with new hope and new stories.

7.30Am

Nandini received a call from Manik

Nandini:Good Morning my Monster Manik.

Manik: Good Morning my Candy Nandu

Nandini asked in surprise: Candy?

Manik : yaaah! Candy ...! U r sweet like candy... so Candy nandu.

Nandini shook her head in disbelief and thought: kuch nahi ho sakta is larke ka.

Manik: Acha Nandu ! mere bare me baad me sochna abhi bahir driver khara tumhara intzar kar raha hai so jaldi karo.

Nandini: What! itni subha kyo?

Manik: Itni subha is liye kyok main chahta hoon tumhare sath breakfast karna so agar tum yahan nahi ayi to main abhi wahan tumhare ghar a raha hoon. And u know na Chachi apny is shone munde ko dekh k kitna khush ho jaen gi.

Nanini: Manikkk (with irritated voice) tum aisa kuch nahi karo gey samjhe!

Manik : aye aye Caption! Bus phir tum jaldi se yahan a jao.

Nandini: ok a rahi hoon.

Nandini told Chachi that she was in hurry so Breakfast wo College mein kar le gi and aaney mein bhi late ho jae gi.

Nandini reached in new Malhotra Mansion and said Good Morning to Malhotra Duo

Mr Malhotra:Good Morning to u too dear.Ao Nasta karo.

Nandini sat on 1 seat for breakfast.

Both Malhotras saw her balloon like face.

Mr Malhotra then asked : Kya hoa kisi pe gusa ho?

Nandini immediately changed her facial expression and said : Nahi to uncle ... aaisa... Aaisa kuch nahi hai.(while saying this she looked at Manik with accusing eyes and Manik gave a smile to her)

Mr Malhotra noticed this special talk and smile on these kids.

After Breakfast Mr Malhotra: Ok Kids Mujhe yahan Office ka visit bhi karna hai,aur 1,2 important kam bhi haan so see u at evening . I hope tum logon ka reunion bht ache se ho and Mr Malhotra Left from there.

On his way to outside he received some papers and then called his lawyer and said thanks to him.

Now at breakfast Table

Nandini with her phoola hoa moun: Kya zarorat thi yeh karne ki?

Manik with innocent face: What... Kya kah rahe ho... Main ne kya kiya?

Nandini now with full irritated voice: Ahhh ! Manik You na ... Tum ... tum

Manik: (making fun of her)Words nahi mil rahe chalo main help kar deta hoon ...( He held her hand and kissed on her fingers while saying this) Main na pagal hoon ... wo bhi tumhare liye.

Nandini forgets all her anger and irritation on this love.After sometime she said : Manik I think main ab chalti hoon ...sub wahan pohnchne wale hoon gey...tum na jab main tumhe msg karo tab a jana. And then prayed to her ayiappa

Ayiappa plz ajj sub kuch thek kar dena ... Is kharos k wo 3 kharoos dost maan jaen plz plz plz ayiappa.

Manik saw her and smile on her prayer and then said: Acha suno Nandini Main ne mady ko bhi bol diya hai wo kuch time k baad wahan a jae ga.

Nandini patted on her forehead: Aiyaappa main kasie bhool gayi yeh .

She then turned towards Manik and in joy and excitement hugged him and then gave a kiss on his cheeks and said : U r too good Thank you thank you thankyou .

In xyzzz Place

All arrived at that place on given time and with the passage of time all gets impatient.

Mukti: Yaar yeh larki kahan rah gayi. Hamein yahan bulaya aur khud Gaib ho gayi hai.

Aliya: I hope wo thek ho.

Navya in her own style: Hay mata rani plz hamari nandu ki raksha karna .

Aryaman and Dhruv saw Nandini coming in their direction and said at once: Wo! A gayi

Nandini reached near them and hugged them and then said : Sorry guys main thori late ho gayi wo traffic you know na.

Aliya : Its Ok Nandini yeh to sub k sath hota hai.

Mukti : Yah !Its Ok ab bato kya hoa ? kal wo msg dekh k to hum sub pareshan ho gaye the sub thek hai na.

Navya: Han Nandu bol na!sub thek hai na.

Nandini: guys relax !Mujhe Bolne to do.

Actually na wo I need your help... tum sub ki madad chaheye.I know k yeh tum logon k liye difficult ho ga specially Mukti,aliya aur dhruv k liye.But plz is time I really need your help .

All said: Haan to bolo na kya help chaheye.

Nandini self thinking: Ab maza aye ga

Nandini with innocent face: wo guys I want you to sing ( at this nandini stopped)

Mukti Aliya and Dhruv with guilty eyes saw towards each other and then indicated each other with their expression that "IT is The Time".

They moved from their places and hugged nandini and then said one by one: I am sorry Nandini for what I did in last days with you.

Nandini broke that hug and saw their faces in surprise.

Mukti: Nandini sorry yaar sub se zyada wired behavior to mera raha hai tumhare sath last days mein. Tum ... Tum hum sub ko Manik ki tarahan ikatha rakhna chahti thi .tum chahti thi k Manik aur Cabir k baad bhi Hamara yeh Group ,un ka yeh dream osi tarhan zinda rahe jaise Manik aur cabir k time pe tha.

Hum ... Hum logon ne tumhe pahle bhi ghalat samjha jab Manik yahan tha aur ab bhi. Plz hamein maaf kar do.

Aliya : ya Mukti is right we now understand k Fab5 hi hamari family ,hamari pahchan hai.hum kitni bhi koshish kyo na kar leen Fab 5 ko khud se alag nahi kar paen ge.

Dhruv: aur sub se bari baat yeh k hum ne Manik k baad tumhara sath, tumhara khyal os tarhan nahi rakha jis tarhan rakhna chaye tha.Jab jab tum ne hum se kuch manga siwae anson k ya insult k hum ne tumhe kuch nahi diya.Agar ajj buddy yahan hota na to hum se bht naraz hota.

NOW 3 of them said in union : Plz Nandini apney in Friends ko maaf kar do plz.

Nandini with teary eyes hugged them and said: Guys plz bus karo ... koi tum se naraz nhi tha aur na hi ho ga.

Navya to break this emotional scene said arey wah : Un sub ko hug mil raha hai to hum dono ka kya! Kyo aryaman

Nandu and Fab 3 Smile on this and said : Tum bhi a jao roka kis ne hai.

And after this there was a big group hug .



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Edited by cute-aly - 6 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
sweet. but too short. cliffhanger pe chod diya. 😡 continue soon. Thanks for pm.
Edited by unishaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hawww di..
Gandi baat beech mein rok diya..
I wanted to see manik's dassu entry..
Koi baat nahi next update mein hi sahi..
Update was superb..
Aur pics ke sath aur bhi zyada..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaawww
Manik is back to being the teaser he is !!
So much he trbls and teases nandu...bt shoo cute!!
I loved the cute manan moments :) :) :) :)
But wapas Aleena ne cliffhanger situation kar di :/
Fab5 union hote hote chapter end kiya !!
Anyway , itni jaldi u r giving sooo many updates toh sab maaf !
Masst update Aloo :)
Keep writing !
Waiting to know what happens next...
I hope actual serial mein Teri idea se inspiration le !!
Aur jaldi hi manik ko laaye !
God bless u !
Thank u for the update :) :) :) :)

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