OS Mini Series: Snapshots - The Dusk Before the Dawn ~ ArDhika - Page 3

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Thanks so much 😳

I do plan on writing more if time permits.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment 😃

And by the way your siggie is so distracting 😆 but in a good way just love that scene where Radhika tries to tuck Arjun into bed and he just turns over and hugs her refusing to let go 😳

Originally posted by: _deepshi_

A masterpiece it was...excellent writing...couldnt ask for more...👏

Please do write more😊

Originally posted by: lovv

hey iheartchai...

it was really good...

for one thing its entirely d opposite side of a coin which i hav expected..bt from ur intro i gt it though...

i thought Ardhika wnt take much time to settle in their life...including intimacy...bcz d two always attracted n all...

bt ur take shwon me, time z needed...i like dat...

i liked d first scene itself, arjun in kitchen seraching for ice cream/sweet...was good...n shows d change in their life...n u ended vth dat chocolate pudding only..nice...

and thank you so much, for renovating d great mehra house.lol..seriously yaar, they hav water sprinklers for fire, bt no inverter...n their funniture problem z secondary, their doors are really olden type...i hope u took a special note of it... n lights...too

i felt u are gng to patch up arjun-nandhu...really yaar nandhu done a good thing at d end, n she z alone,n as u said she loves her brother n he loves her too...just i wanted to see their patch up thro radhika...

i like this dialog "Just because she forgives doesn't mean she forgets"

i am hoping in another Os, we get to see Ardhika-nandhu as a happy family in d true sense...more than their past ...its a request though...

dat rana kaka letter, arjun's guilty feeling z good to see... (from d original, i think arjun knws nandhu has hand in dat mishup for sure...)

ROFL...

he watching saathiya n YRKKH vth maa...

i think it happends in true case also...

n ur dig at lound speaking n just bg wen maa works in kitchen was too good...i totally loved it...

nice OS...

Originally posted by: romi21

Loved it Awesome

Originally posted by: don girls

Fab is snap shot

Originally posted by: shreepatil.

amazing update dear. i just loved it.

Originally posted by: Josupra

Loved it. Fantastic OS.. Thanks for writing