OS Mini Series: Snapshots - The Dusk Before the Dawn ~ ArDhika

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: esprit_00
Loved it!!

In fact I think I'll end my FF so it actually leads into this scenario :)

Wow, seriously?! I don't know what to say 😳

Thanks so much for commenting. I need to head over to your FF and leave a comment 😆

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: RainbowPearls
Such a beautiful story! Loved it

Thank you so much for commenting! So glad you enjoyed the One Shot 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sweets101
Really really liked it. Fantastic writing

Thanks so much 😳 So happy you enjoyed the one shot.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Midhula3110
Again grace.. Dis is jus splendid.. U beautifully explained how ardhika relationship matured in dis two years.. 😳 write more n plzzz do update ur dheere dheere story.. Waiting 😊

Yes, I do need to update my Dheere Dheere one

Thanks so much for leaving a comment! Means a lot and so happy you enjoyed the one shot 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ardhikian
Can't even begin to describe how incredible it was
I'm so happy you guys are writing
Let's not let anyone take our Ardhika away
As long as they're here and in our hearts, they're alive
Thank you, dear
Please write more soon

So true...Ardhika lives on in our hearts and through these FF/SS/OS

Thanks for commenting and encouraging the writers to write 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mmzmahi
loved it :) 😆..your writing is wonderful 😳

Thanks so much for commenting! So glad you enjoyed it.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: krithi12
superb story loved it a lot

Thanks so much for commenting! So glad you enjoyed the one shot 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Huma-
another incredible OS.👏. Beautifully written
You are a genius ..plz do Write More

Thanks so much 😳

I do plan on writing more if time permits.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment 😃

And by the way your siggie is so distracting 😆 but in a good way just love that scene where Radhika tries to tuck Arjun into bed and he just turns over and hugs her refusing to let go 😳

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Deepshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

A masterpiece it was...excellent writing...couldnt ask for more...👏

Please do write more😊

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lovv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

hey iheartchai...

it was really good...

for one thing its entirely d opposite side of a coin which i hav expected..bt from ur intro i gt it though...

i thought Ardhika wnt take much time to settle in their life...including intimacy...bcz d two always attracted n all...

bt ur take shwon me, time z needed...i like dat...

i liked d first scene itself, arjun in kitchen seraching for ice cream/sweet...was good...n shows d change in their life...n u ended vth dat chocolate pudding only..nice...

and thank you so much, for renovating d great mehra house.lol..seriously yaar, they hav water sprinklers for fire, bt no inverter...n their funniture problem z secondary, their doors are really olden type...i hope u took a special note of it... n lights...too

i felt u are gng to patch up arjun-nandhu...really yaar nandhu done a good thing at d end, n she z alone,n as u said she loves her brother n he loves her too...just i wanted to see their patch up thro radhika...

i like this dialog "Just because she forgives doesn't mean she forgets"

i am hoping in another Os, we get to see Ardhika-nandhu as a happy family in d true sense...more than their past ...its a request though...

dat rana kaka letter, arjun's guilty feeling z good to see... (from d original, i think arjun knws nandhu has hand in dat mishup for sure...)

ROFL...

he watching saathiya n YRKKH vth maa...

i think it happends in true case also...

n ur dig at lound speaking n just bg wen maa works in kitchen was too good...i totally loved it...

nice OS...

Edited by lovv - 9 years ago