FF:Pyaar,Ishq aur Mohabbat upd8 12/12Pt13

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FAN FICTION!!!

New FF: Pyaar, Ishq Aur Mohabbat.

Message: Plz tell me if it is too early to start a FF. Hope you like this. I will first describe the characters and then the story will follow. Hope you enjoy the character bit.

Dedicated to: All people on India Forums who are Amber Dhara fans.

Characters:

Amber: She is the beautiful one residing in Paanchgani. She lives with her conjoined sister Dhara, mom Lata and Nanu. She has a crush on Akshat. She loves failing in school and is very musical. She has lots more talents which will be discovered later. She has a spunky attitude. She loves film actors.

Dhara: She is the smart one. She is always obedient. She never lies. She helps her mom in the business regarding their bakery. She likes this guy called Aroush but keeps her distance as she knows he will never like her as she is conjoined. Dhara also lives with Amber, Nanu and Lata (mom).

Aroush: He is a businessman starting from the age of 21. He likes Dhara but cannot tell her. He is alone in life. It is just him and work. He is one of Akshat's friends. He is very handsome and most of the girls drool as he walks by. His business runs well and he respects his boss. (If Dhara does get a lover boy then I will change the name. But for now he's Aroush- hope you like the name)

Akshat: He is the cool dude. He likes Sonia but under circumstances he is left heartbroken. He is
older to Aroush, he is older by five months. He has a spunky attitude but is very irritated and is very straight-forward to people especially Amber and Dhara.

Lata (mom): She is very protective over Amber and Dhara. She does not like Akshat and Aroush as
she feels Amber is getting too close to Akshat and Dhara is getting a bit close to Aroush. She is the mummy-ji and owns a bakery.

Nanu: The Dada-ji of the family. He is always protects Amber and Dhara. If Amber or Dhara needs money he will arrange it for them. He always is happy for them whatever they do. If they need to go somewhere then he will make excuses for them to their mother. Overall he is the Savior.

Anuj: He is the villain. He always wants Amber and Dhara to go to Mumbai but unfortunately he doesn't succeed and he promises to get back soon.

Sonia: She is the college hottie and still is. She will do anything to go to Mumbai but no one offers her a chance. Poor Sonia! She is always jealous of Amber and Dhara as they are better at everything she tries to do from beauty to baking.

Friends: They are always supportive like Nilesh, DJ etc etc. They are the side cast which I will use in only a few instances. They are very happy, joyful and trustworthy. They are always on Amber and Dhara's side. They like going to the movies, hanging out and lazing around. They are supportive to the Dixit family as they help out sometimes in the bakery. You can always trust in them.

There are other cast which are other friends of Amber and Dhara. While we watch Amber Dhara if anyone else enters I will make part of the story especially if they are one of the main actors. Sorry for all spelling errors as I was quite rushed. Sorry if you didn't like the characters. This was completely my brain child, every bit of it. Hope I keep you guy entertained. I have joined recently on India Forums so plz post comments as I will like to read your views. Tell me whether to write in Hindi eg. Tumhara naam kya hain or in English in your comment.
Note: The posts I give will be small.
Plz and thanks in advance.
Love from:
Chevi

CONTENTS:

Page 1: Part 1 & 2

Page 3: Part 3 & 4

Page 4: Part 5

Page 5: Part 6 & 7

Page 6: Part 7 & 8

Page 7: Part 9

Page 8: Part 10

Page 9: Part 11 & 12

Hey guys here is Part 1. On week days I will post once in two days if I get the chance but on weekends I will post atleast one or two a day. Hope you enjoy this.

Part 1
(In the morning)
Mom: Dhara bheta utto.
Dhara: Sone dhena ma.
Mom: Aaj aapki exam hain.
Dhara: Mein bhool gayi. Sorry mom.
Amber: Unfortunately mein bhi bhool gayi. Chalo Dhara thayar ho kar aatein hein.
Dhara: Chalo.

(After they bathed. At the dinner table.)
Both A&D: Good Morning Nanu.
Nanu: Good Morning my Science geek and my super model.
Amber: Thanks Nanu.
Dhara: No thanks Nanu.
Nanu: Ab you must give your best in the exam.
Amber: Hanh, hanh karenge, no problem.
Dhara: Hum mandir jah rahi hein.
Amber: Yah, Yah.
Dhara: Oh no! Sirf dus minute bach gaye.
Amber: Chalo Chalo, fast.
Mom: Tum mandir nahin jah rahi.
Dhara: Sorry mom. Aggar dher hunhi tho humhe sirf 0 milega aur paper likne ka chance nahin milega.
Amber: Yes!
Dhara: Amber!
Amber: Sorry di. Chal.

(At school after exams)
Akshat: Hey Amber. Hey Dhara.
Both A&D: Hey Akshat.
Akshat: I was wondering ki it's after the exams so hum picture dekhne chale.
Amber: That sounds like a good idea.
Dhara: It's a bad idea! Humhe mandir jaana hein.
Aroush: Hey guys. What's up!
Akshat: Aroush dekho na voh humhare saath picture nahin chal rahi hein.
Aroush: Kya hua? Kya problem hain?
Dhara: Dekho humhe mandir jaana hain exams ke liye. Ab yeh tho gallath nahin.
Aroush: Lekin yeh bhi zurooori hain guys.
Amber: Nahin hain.
(Everyone speaks at the same time)
Akshat: Quiet. Koi solution hain.
Aroush: Chalo hum sab mandir par jatein hain aur phir movie dekhte hain.

(At the temple)
Akshat: Mein bahar wait karenge aur Sonia ko phone bhi karega.
Aroush: Teke mein Dhara aur Amber andar jayegi.
Dhara: Chalo.
Aroush: Chal.

Dhara: Hey Bhagwan, mujhe acchi marks dehna....
Amber: Hey bhagwan Hrithik Roshan ko yahaan bhejo.
Aroush: (Silently) Hey Bhagwan Dhara ko joh bhi chahiye usse dhilwado, whatever she wants.
(He turns around and sees Dhara with her eyes closed, he feels in love and he thinks she is the most beautiful girl in the world. Would she accept him?)
Song: Maula Mere Maula Film: Anwar

SWASTIK PICTURES

Catch more!!! Bye!!! Plz post comments!!!😛😛😛

Links to my running FF's:

Amber Dhara FF: Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat:

Link: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=752045&T PN=1

Teen Bahuraaniyan FF: Atoot Rishtein:

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/teen-bahuraniyaan/808061/new-ff-atoot-rishtein-part-1-pg-1

Kasam Se FF: Mauja Hi Mauja:

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/792101/ff-mauja-hi-mauja-upd8-12-12-pg10prt12

Kasam Se FF: Dus Kahaaniyan

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/795568/ff-dus-kahaaniyan-upd8-7-12-part4pg3

Banoo Mein Teri Dulhann FF: Fire and Ice:

Link: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=806850&T PN=1

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wth
i dint read the title properly and i was wondering who the heck is arushh lol 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol dear i love your ff, its a great kick off and its great to have an ff starting when the serial starts, great work and continue soon looking forward to reading more 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very cutee... unrealistic but cutee.. dont ask me why i said that but still..

continue sooon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Everyone here is the latest. I read your comments thanks. Watch out for next update.
Part 2

(They step out of the temple)
Akshat: Thank god you're done.
Sonia: Hi guys. You took so long.
Akshat: Hi Sonia.............
Aroush: Akki (Akshat) mu band kar. Aur chalein.
Akshat: Teke Aru (Aroush)chal.
Song: Hum bhi chalo tum bhi chalein, chaltein raahein zindagi.
Filmed on: Akshat and Sonia.

Amber: Kaun si picture dekhni hain?
Dhara: Salaam-E-Ishq dekhe.
Amber: Good idea.

(In the theater)
(Aroush and Dhara sit next to each other in the cinema)
(Dhara laughs at one of the funny parts)
(Aroush looks at her as she smiles, he wants to say something to her but she may misunderstand, so he just gets back to the movie)
(So the order, Aroush is looking at Dhara who's looking at the movie. Amber is looking at Akshat who's looking at Sonia and Sonia well she's looking at herself in the mirror.)
(Akshat is sharing popcorn with Amber and they both out their hands in. Amber is feeling light and in love.)
(After the movies)
Akshat: Sonia I think ki humhe chalna chahiye.
Sonia: Ya, come on.
Amber: Chalo.
Akshat: Nahin Amber maine apne car laya so I don't think there'll be space.
Dhara: No problem hum Aroush ke saath jayenge.
Aroush: Ya, no problem.
Sonia: Okay, Bye.
All: Bye.

(They stopped at the beach)
Aroush: Mein soch raha tha ki ice-cream anyone.
Amber: That sounds like a good idea.
Dhara: On me.
Aroush: You paid last time. Meri barri. Kaun si flavour chahti hain?
Amber: Mujhe chocolate chahiye.
Aroush and Dhara: One strawberry.
(They look at each other)
Amber: Wow! What a coincidence.
Aroush and Dhara: Serviettes.
Amber: Arey!
Aroush: Kya badi baat hain Amber. Chalo beacah par chalte hain.
Dhara: Chaliyein.

(Aroush takes his shirt out and runs into the water shouting)
(Amber and Dhara start laughing and they run in but just stand at the shore and let the water run up too their feet)
Aroush: Chalo chaltein hain.
(Amber slips on a stone and tilts to the side Aroush is on.)
(Aroush catches Dhara and stables their balance)
Dhara: Thanks. No problem.
(Their chains catch)
Aroush: Sorry mein.... Ek minute.
(He tries to untangle their neck chains while Dhara stares into his eyes and thinks will he ever accept me
while Amber is figuring out whether something is going on)
Amber: Rehne dho saari zindagi mein you'll be together so start from now.
Dhara: Shut up Amber! Sorry Aroush thora batamiese hain.
Aroush: No Problem. Chalo.

*Song: Ek Pyaar Ka Nagma *Film: Shor
*Filmed on: Aroush & Dhara and Amber imagining Akshat)

*****Thanks everyone for reading. Thanks for all comments. Hope you enjoyed this.
*****Plz post comments to whether you liked it.
*****Thanks.
From:
Chevi 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its nice... cute dhara-aroush parts but im waiting for aksshat parts.. i am fida over him.lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guyz tell me who will be suitable for Aroush's role give a cutie plz...lol 😆 😆 😆
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Chevi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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suitable role for Aroush will be Manoj Bohra or Karan Mehra


But you should choice Karan Mehra For Aroush role because he look very cute what u think about him.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I was thinking more Naman Shaw when he was first in Kasam Se without the beard, clean-shaven and smart and handsome. Wat do you guys think.
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Chevi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chevi

I was thinking more Naman Shaw when he was first in Kasam Se without the beard, clean-shaven and smart and handsome. Wat do you guys think.
From:
Chevi

whos naman shaw? i watch kasam se but don't know their real names. sry could u tell me?? btw like the parts, its nice

Edited by NYC_gurl_17 - 18 years ago

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