FF: Dus Kahaaniyan upd8 7/12 part4pg3

Dus Kahaniyaan

Yeh kahaani teen ladkon ka hein. Ek ka naam tha Jai, bechara kissi ladki ko usse dekhe tho woh ladki on the spot pyaar ho jata hein Jai se. Jai ko pyaar nahin hua lekin kismat is kahaani ko palat jayega ya nahin tum yeh samajh lo kii ab humari heroine ke baari hein, Bani, sweet, sundar si ladki, Goa mein rehti hein. Uske baap guzaar gaya tho voh ab Mumbai mein rehte hein, St. James college mein. Ab direct entry maar ke Sahil iss picture mein bhi hein, yeh Jai ka bhilkool opposite hein, ladki usse kabhi patt thi hi nahin aur voh kabhi single nahin rehti kabhi na kabhi woh jhut bolte aur ladki by chance patt gayi. Theesra ladka tho tum samajh lo bahut badmaash aur bahut nakhre waale, Ranvir, iss story ka hero ya villain. So to find out all that, read my new FF: Dus Kahaaniyan

For those who didn't understand already then here is a character bit in English.

Jai – The hero of the story. Jai is single and hard working. He works in a small card shop run by himself. Jai does part time studying. Jai is very out-going and loves all his friends. He loves to socialize and to make friends all the time. He does very well in university He still dreams about his fairy which he believes is going to come into his life soon. For now, he wants to remain single. Does he?

Bani – The heroine of this story. The girl next door type of girl. What can be said about her, she is very sweet and simple which no guy would like to go out on a date with. She is studying to become a doctor in life and is very ambitious. She is a very traditional and her thinking is of the olden (should I say golden) times. She loves to be on her own and she stays in a hostel called St. James College. How does she meet up with Jai? Find out!

Ranvir – He is either the villain or the hero. For now he's the hero! He is one and only hottie. He is absolutely fida over Bani, he is completely madly in love with her. But she is just not interested in him. For what reason? Find out!

Sahil – He is the dumb idiot who can do anything for a girl to go out with him. There's just one problem, no one wants to go out with him!!!! He has a huge problem at that. He works alongside Jai in the same card shop and earns a substancial amount of salary and by chance if he gets a girl he blows it on her so he's practically left with nothing to pay the landlord. Is his problems ever going to get solved and will he ever be serious in life?

Rano – She lives in Sahil and Jai's neighbourhood and is madly in love with Sahil. Does Sahil spot her in the crowd of one thousand hot girls? Find out!

Rashi – She is a girl from abroad who lives in the same hostel as Bani. She is Bani's close personal friend and they have alot in common. The first day Rashi saw Ranvir she was impressed by his looks and everything he did. Does Ranvir and Rashi come together? Find out!

Nachiket – Well he is the most confused person in life. He does not know what he wants and often he makes mistakes at some turn in his life and has to suffer consequences. He love Purva alot but dosn't want to get into a relationship with Purva. Does destiny solve this problem?

Purva – She is in love with Jai. She loves his every antic and everything he does. However destiny has something stored for Purva which could change her life forever.

Daksh – Roadside Romeo! He has just been heart broken by his beloved Anamika but still is living silently in suffering. He believes one day Anamika will return to him and give him a big hug and for this reason he is still alive. Is there anyone to make his heart start beating again?

Piya – Pomfret waali. She is the bomb in the village. She has a fisherwoman's acsent and is very poor and has a difficult time in live with allher problems. She wants to get married and live life but her past haunts her! What is in store for Piya, will she be happy?

To find out all of this and what is in store in each persons life do read my FF: Dus Kahaaniyan!

From:
Chevarra

Links to my running FF's:

Amber Dhara FF: Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat:

Link: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=752045&T PN=1

Teen Bahuraaniyan FF: Atoot Rishtein:

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/teen-bahuraniyaan/808061/new-ff-atoot-rishtein-part-1-pg-1

Kasam Se FF: Mauja Hi Mauja:

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/792101/ff-mauja-hi-mauja-upd8-12-12-pg10prt12

Kasam Se FF: Dus Kahaaniyan

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/795568/ff-dus-kahaaniyan-upd8-7-12-part4pg3

Banoo Mein Teri Dulhann FF: Fire and Ice:

Link: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=806850&T PN=1

great characters sketch


it sound like its gonna be a great ff

soo post part 1 asap

Dammy

Hey thanks for all comments!

Part 1

So the story kicks off about ten different people. Jai-Bani, Ranvir-Rashi, Sahil-Rano, Nachiket-Purva, Daksh-Piya.
Does it end up like this?
Well this is the most interesting story you have ever heard about ten people trying to live their lives according to their way and suffering in a quiet corner.
Trying to find happiness everywhere they roam. Does it stay like that?
Is this story like others which have a happy ending or is it one of those stories which don't have an ending, you decide.
Ten people leading lives happily will there be an end to all smiles and will tears befall from their beautiful, shimmering eyes and dark clouds befall their path?
Will everyone learn the real meaning of life and cherish the moments in them?
Will everyone get the opportunity to fulfill their dreams?
If I'm boring you, SORRY!!!!!! Anyway back to the story!!!
Jai was as usual in his card shop sorting out all of his cards. He was very frantic when he sets up his cards as he doesn't want to make one mistake. Sahil comes in late, AS USUAL!

Jai: You are late again!

Sahil: But I'm always late, aren't I? (Grinning)

Jai: Whatever but please help me sort out these cards, there's so much to do!

Sahil: Oh!

Jai: Now what happened?

Sahil: Actually, I was thinking if I could go early today?

Jai: At what time are you planning to go?

Sahil: Approximately at 9:00am.

Jai: What, it's already 8:30am.

Sahil: I know but cut me some slack.

Jai: What are you even getting paid for?

Sahil: I'm not, I don't have a single penny on me right now.

Jai: Arey, we just got paid two days ago!

Sahil: I know but...

Jai: Oh god! You mean another girl!

Sahil: Not just any other girl but a real item.

Jai: Don't you say this everytime.

Sahil: Erm... no it's genuine.

Jai: Genuine my foot!

Sahil: Well, okay maybe I've said it once or twice.

Jai looked at Sahil sternly

Sahil: Okay maybe all the time. Now, will you stop staring.

Jai: Wow! I'm like a truth guru!

Sahil: Can I please go?

Jai: And what do I tell boss this time?

Sahil: My dog died.

Jai: You don't have a dog.

Sahil: Are you on my side or are you on our bosses side?

Jai: I'm not on anyone's side. Fine, you may go!

Sahil: I love you Jai. You're so kind!

Jai: Wait! What's her name?

Sahil: Julie.

Jai: She seems interesting.

Sahil: Ya, but she's only mine.

Jai: For how many days?

Sahil: Two days.

Jai: What did you tell this girl this time?

Sahil: What do you mean?

Jai: You know what I mean.

Sahil: Oh, call me Abhishek Bachchan's close personal

friend.

Jai: Oh ya and I'm Madonna!

Sahil: Well this chick was the easiest chick ever!

Jai: Well she must've been easy, I mean look at you.

Sahil: Yes, look at me! Wait! Did you mean that in a bad way?

Jai: Kind of! I think you missed that part!

Sahil: What's the time?

Jai: Now would be 9:00am.

Sahil: Oh no! Julie will kill me! Can I take a card?

Jai: But why?

Sahil: Please, can I take a card!

Jai: Whatever, just take it and leave.

Sahil: Thanks, pay for it.

Sahil skidded out the doorway of Cardies-Best cards here!
Jai: I must pay for this! Life stinks. Something really stinks!

It was Ranvir smoking, waiting for Bani to arrive.

Jai: Poor guy, he waits here everyday but for what!

Bani: Excuse me.

Jai: Good morning ma'am, tell me what can I do for you?

Bani: Morning, I'm wondering if you have a happy anniversary card.

Jai: There is alot on the shelf ma'am.

Bani: I know that but can you show me the best one.

Jai: Everyone of them are good.

Bani: I know that but which one to you seems good.

Jai: Follow me we will go there.

Bani: Thanks.

Jai: I think this one!

Jai showed her a bright card with gold and silver designs on it and in big bold letters ,HAPPY ANNIVERSARY.

Bani: Thanks so much for your help.

Ranvir was standing there like an idiot still waiting for Bani, looking at his watch now and again.

He saw Jai and Bani talking to each other again!!!!

He ran towards Jai....

That was it!

Thanks for comments everyone!!!!

Chevarra

hi chevi highly impressed by ur character intro

cant wait for ur f completion

do that for us soon

love ur work chevi

Great part Chevi 👏

aww bless jai and sahil are sooo funny 😆

loved part 1

and ctn soon

Thanx 4 your comments Brinda, Dammy and every1 else who read. Part 2 will cum l8r! So do check it out l8r!

Hey everyone thanks for all your comments!

Part 2

Ranvir rushed towards Jai and pushed him away.

Jai fell down flat on the floor.

Bani was extremely shocked.

Bani: Who are you and why did you do that?

Ranvir: You don't know me!

Jai: Please ma'am you two don't get into an argument!

Bani: Are you okay…

She read his name tag.

Bani: Jai.

Jai: I'm okay.

Ranvir then walked away out of anger.

Bani helped Jai get up.

Jai: Are you okay ma'am?

Bani: Why wouldn't I be okay. Look, I'm really sorry!

Jai: But ma'am it's not your fault! I'm also sorry for the way he behaved.

Bani: Anyways, I'm Bani.

Jai: Hi, I'm Jai, Jai Walia.

Bani: Oh, so you work here?

Jai: Yes, I work here. Ow!

Bani: Jai!

Bani stared at the scab and other parts that were turning blue.

Bani: Oh my god! It's turning blue.

Jai: Duh! When an 80 kg man jumps on you and pushes you to the ground what do you expect.

Bani laughed.

Bani: You're really funny!

Jai: Friends?

Bani: Friends!

They shook hands.

Jai: Well do keep coming!

Bani: Of course, you also keep in touch!

She handed him, her card which had her address, phone number and e-mail address.

Jai: Thanks! I will e-mail you today.

Bani: Of course, anytime!

Sahil: Hi Jai, who's this?

Jai: You're back! Oh, this is Bani.

Sahil: Hi, I'm Sahil.

Bani: Hi Sahil.

Sahil: Jai, why are you bleeding?

Jai: Oh that was an accident.

Sahil: Silly Jai.

Bani: I should be leaving now, Rashi will be waiting for me.

Jai: Rashi?

Bani: She's my friend.

Sahil: Really, how old?

Jai: Sahil, not a good time!

Sahil: Sorry!

Bani: Okay then, bye.

Jai: Bye. Phir milenge.

Bani: Zuroor.

Purva: Hi Jai.

Jai: Hi Purva.

Purva: You want to go out for a cup of coffee?

Jai: Sorry Purva, I'm a bit busy right now.

Purva: Who was your friend you were talking to?

Jai: Her name is Bani and we just met today. She is very beautiful.

Purva: Oh, okay. Well, bye for now.

Jai: See you!

Sahil: You like her don't you?

Jai: No, actually she's just…

Sahil: Just my good friend. I know.

Jai: Shut up man! Oh ya I hope you remember its Dammy's anniversary today so we need to go later.

Sahil: Ya, thanks for reminding me! Dammy is so sweet, I can't miss that!

That's it!!!!!!

From:

Chevarra

great parts and character sketch Chevi! 👏 👏 👏
i like the characteristics of all the characters 😳 especially Jai's, bani's and Pia's.
Good work 👍🏼
please continue soon 😊

😆 😆 😆
great part chevi 👏 👏

ohh wats up wit ranvir
he attacked jai 😆 😆

and aww bless bani was worried about jai's being hurt

Dammy's aniversary ?
ohh 😆 😆

Loved dis part hun

ctn soon

Gr8 part Chevs,
Cant wait 4 next part!!!!!!
Dammy in it! Who Dammy?
From:
Aveer Kapoor