FF:Pyaar,Ishq aur Mohabbat upd8 12/12Pt13 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
i think i've said this soo many times...but awww its sooo cute 😳 😳
lol
if lata spots them...i hope she doesnt get mad!
cant wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Thanx 4 replies nxt part 2day!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
hey nice ff chevi ... ur ff realy rocks .. hope i can make my ff same like u ..............
will be waiting for ur part ...........

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Hey this is the next upd8.

Part 8

Aroush is still looking at Dhara and Amber says what are you waiting for and Aroush then hugs her. Dhara then outs her arms around his. Lata is still bargaining with the vendor! She then SPOTS Dhara and Aroush hugging. A lot of things are going on in her mind. She is thinking what if her daughter has taken a wrong step as Aroush has no parents and has no family background. She doesn't want to tell Dhara anything in the flea market so she decides to go home and wait for them to come back.

Amber and Dhara say bye to Aroush and Dhara is smiling broadly. Amber then whispers into Aroush's ears. Aroush then kisses Dhara on the cheek and leaves kicking and jumping out of excitement.

Amber and Dhara reach home.
Amber: We had lots of fun.
The both found Lata with her arms crossed and a frowning face.
Dhara: Kya hua ma?
Lata: When were you planning to tell me that you are having an affair with Aroush.
Amber: What?
Dhara: Ma how did you?
Lata: I know everything.
Amber: Everything.
Dhara: Its not an affair
Lata: You girls are so foolish. You don't know thee snares of this world and what its like to be heartbroken. I also kept you both as the apple of my eye but what I get in return is just bitterness.
Dhara: Lekin ma....
Lata: Nahin aaj tum faisla karoge ya mein ya Aroush?
Dhara: Mum how can I do this....
Lata: Why he's now become equal to me, your mother who brought you up.
Amber: Ma this is emotional blackmail and you are putting her in the spot. You can't do this.
Lata: No! She'll have to choose.
Dhara: Ma mein... (silence)
Lata: As far as I know you can't betray me. So I guess I've got your decision.

Dhara: Fine. Okay but is Aroush proves himself worthy then you have to give him a chance.
Lata; We'll see.

Dhara then breaks down. She can't control her tears anymore. Amber tries to pacify her yet remains unsuccessful. No one could stop Dhara from crying but Dhara will have to find a way to reach Aroush. She tried his mobile but it was not working. She then had to send it via Nilesh her friend.

She wrote:
Dear Aroush, sorry but for now we can't meet. I know you have been really kind to me and all but I'm sorry my mom doesn't believe that you are good enough for me and we should stop meeting. I said okay but I'm afraid you have to prove yourself worthy to her. I hope you will understand me.

Aroush: What? Nilesh who gave you this.
Nilesh: Dhara.
Aroush: Dhara, what problem does her mother have with me?
Nilesh: I don't know.
Aroush: I earn well and I've got a good job, what else does she need?
Nilesh: I think Lata aunties problem is that you don't have parents that's why.
Aroush: Maybe but that's no reason to make me forget Dhara. Nilesh I can't live without Dhara.
Nilesh: It does say you have to prove yourself.
Aroush: Kaise... Lata aunty nahin manega chahe mein aapne aap ko sabith karoon tho phir bhi Dhara kabhi meri nahin ho sakti.

He falls down to the ground and starts crying. Nilesh picks him up and hugs him and tells him: "We'll find a way."

That's all folks!!!!!!!!!
Happy Diwali from me 2 u!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey chevi .. nice part .... but sad 😭 hope aroush proves himself .. i cant see breaking couples anymore .... 😭 and why with dhara ... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Hey that was a very sad 😭 but a great part 😉
plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Chevi

Thanx 4 reply!!!!!!!

u r welcome .. but u didnt reply for me 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
Thanx 4 comments. Nxt part 2day, l8r.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Hi everyone, here's more!
Part 9
Aroush: Nilesh look I have to meet Dhara.
Nilesh: Par kaise?
Aroush: Idea! Nilesh go to Dhara now and tell her that I will meet her in the night in her bedroom.
Nilesh: Teke.

(Nilesh at Amber Dhara's house)
Nilesh: Hello Lata aunty.
Lata: Hi Nilesh
Nilesh: Hi Lata aunty, Amber Dhara hein.
Lata: Hanh woh apne kamre mein hein.
Nilesh: Accha. Thank you.
Lata: No problem.

Dhara: Nilesh kya hua.
Amber: Hanh Nilesh bolo kya baat hain.
Nilesh: Aroush said that he's gonna meet you today in your room at night.
Dhara: Teke tum jao.
Amber: Di kya tumhe bura laga kii tum Aroush ko mil nahin sakti?
Dhara: Bahut bura lagta... mein Aroush ko itna pyaar karti hoon kii shahid koi aisa kisi ko pyaar nahin karta. Hnah, lekin halaat ke vaje se mein usse mil nahin paa raha hoon.
Amber: Don't worry Dhara. Aaj raat tum usse mil sakti hoon.

(At night)
(Aroush climbs through the window)
Amber: Dhara, Aroush aa gaya.
Dhara: Aroush.
(Dhara quickly pulled Amber up and ran towards him and hugged him)
(Dhara started tearing)
Aroush: How are you Amber.
Amber: Mein teek hoon.
Aroush: Aur Dhara tum.
Dhara: Zinda hoon. Aur tum.
Aroush: I'm still breathing.

(She puts her hand over his lips and looks at him)
(They knock heads. He puts his hand around her waist)
(She puts her head down on his shoulder)
(Amber is watching them and is nearly in tears seeing how much Aroush loved Dhara)

He then drags his hand up her spine and pulls her closer. She then puts her arm around his head and he quickly kisses her on the lips and lets go. They are still close with their noses touching. Dhara moves forward and the kiss which was just a way of saying I love you grew intenser. Amber is now in tears. Dhara breaks off the kiss. They are still close enough, they could hear the wind blowing. The wind blew right in Dhara's face and her hair is now all over the place. Aroush then sets her hair in place and wipes away her tears and smiles at her. She looks up at him and smiles. She then hugs him again and Aroush says I've got to go, sorry! She breaks the hug and lets him go. He reaches the window and is trying to tie the rope knot. Dhara then quickly runs and gives him a kiss of love!!!!!!! He lets the rope go and enjoys his last moments and finally breaks it and leaves. Trust me it was the hardest thing he'd ever done and he was about to kick himself for breaking away!!!!!

(Asleep)
Amber dreams: Amber was married to Ranbir and they were living a happy life with their kid: Amran. She was happy and on top of the world. By that time she had gotten to be a singer and is now popular. Every music company is signing her up.

Dhara's dream: Dhara was happily married to Aroush. They had a boy which name was: Dhrush. She was a housewife and Aroush loved her to bits. She was a guitar player for Amber at concerts.
(Amber and Dhara are thinking, what are they doing? They are conjoined and they're dreaming about separate lives. They quit this dream and decide to let it go)

Aroush is feeling on top of the world. He finally kissed Dhara. He was soooooo happy!!! He then hurried outside and turned on the sprinklers in the garden and ran outside and started dancing about out of happiness. He was drenched but he didn't care. He then lay on the ground and started talking to the stars which he believed two were his parents. He told them he's in love madly with Dhara and cannot forget about her. He tells them to make everything alright for him as he really loves Dhara with all his heart and soul.

That's it folks!!!! Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!

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Chevarra
Edited by Chevi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
awwww the last part is sooo sweet!
i hope dhara doesnt break aroush's heart!!
i hope none of the couples break up...i hate when that happpens
grt part though... 😊

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