FF:Pyaar,Ishq aur Mohabbat upd8 12/12Pt13 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thankx. love it. u rock.
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Hey all, thanks Khusi and the rest 4 posting comments. Here's da latest.
Part 4
(In the morning)
Aroush: (yawn)
(Telephone rings)
Aroush: Hello.
Dhara: Hello Aroush.
Aroush: Dhara tum. Kya baat hain itne sube, kyon phone kiya.
Dhara: Aise hi. Actually Aroush I was wondering whether you could take us to the market today, You know I gotta buy a lot of stuff for the house and Amber needs to buy more clothes. As usual!
Aroush: (Giggles) Teke, what time.
Dhara: Abhi.
Aroush: Okay give me 20 minutes and I'll be there.
Dhara: Teke.
Amber: Hello Aroush please yaar return the CD that I leant you.
Aroush: Oh yah! I'm so sorry I forgot. I'll just come and bring it. Right now, give me time to freshen up. Bye.
Amber: Bye.

(She leaves the phone to one side but does not hang up)
Dhara: Arey! He hang up!
Amber: What do you think? Arey you love him so much.
(Aroush is listening to all this)
Dhara: Yes.
(She picks up the phone for nothing and says Hello)
Aroush: I love you too. ( He hangs up )
Dhara: (Stunned expression) Oh my god!
Amber: Kya hua di?
Dhara: Um... Kuch nahin. Chalo woh abhi aati hi honge.
(Honk Honk)
Amber: That must be Aroush.


Aroush: Hi Amber. Hi Dhara.
Amber & Dhara: Hi Aroush.
Aroush: Chalein, I called up Akshat and asked him to come lekin he's coming with Sonia.
Amber: Great!
Aroush: Sorry what?
Amber: Nothing. Chaliyein.
Aroush: Do you wanna sit in the front seat it's long enough for the three of us.
Dhara: Nahin hun dhono backseat mein fit hoge. It=s okay.
Aroush: No probs. Chalo.

(They arrive at the market and meet Akshat and Sonia)
Amber: Waha dekho itna accha choodiyaan.
Dhara: Hanh, waha chaltein hein.
Sonia: I'm going to get something. Bye Akshat.
Akshat: Lekin mein bhi… forget it.
Aroush: Hahaha!
Akshat: It's not funny yaar.
Aroush: You're so crazy about her what about Amber?
Akshat: What about Amber?
Aroush: You know… pyaar vyaar and all that stuff.
Akshat: Nahin yaar. I like Amber but as a friend.
Aroush: Just as a friend. Nothing serious?
Akshat: Yes nothing serious. Come let's follow them.
Aroush: Chal.

Amber: Yeh choodiyaan itna accha hain.
Dhara: I know. You like them don't you.
Amber: Yah.
Dhara: Okay I'll take them.
Amber: Thank you di.
Dhara: You're welcome.
Amber: Wow!
Akshat: That's very pretty
Dhara: Arey ye bhi accha hein. How much?
Seller: 500 rupees only.
Dhara: Oh yeh tho bahut ho gayi. Chalein guys.
Aroush: Yah chalo.

(They go into a sari shop and Amber is busy with Akshat looking at the saris.)
Aroush: Hi Dhara.
Dhara: Hi.
Aroush: Woh actually maine dekha kit um who chooriyaan pasanth thi tho maine dekha ki tumhare paas aur paisa nahin that ho maine socha kyun mein aap ke liye kharidoon.
Dhara: Thanks Aroush lekin mein yeh nahin leh sakta,
Aroush: Kyon? Accha samajh gayi… you don't take me to be your friend na?
Dhara: It's not like that.
Aroush: Then except it as a gift na?
Dhara: Teke.
(Aroush and Dhara locked eyes and they were just about to lock lips but…)
Amber: I'm finished.
Aroush: Accha… Chalo phir.
Akshat: Sonia kaha hein. Mein usse phone karta hoon. Sonia tum kaha par ho?
Sonia: Ghar pe. I'm at home.
Akshat: What kyon, kab, kaise. Accha bye.
Aroush: Kya hua who ghar par hi hein na?
Akshat: Yah par ussne mujhe kuch nahin bataiya.
Aroush: Don't worry yaar sab teek ho jayega okay. Now cheer up.
Akshat: Chalo guru-ji.


Song: Yeh Dosti Film: Sholay hahahaha!!!

That was it peeps. Catch more tomorrow! Hope you'll enjoyed it. Plz post comments!!!
From:
Chevarra 😊




Edited by Chevi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plz use da Thank You button if u appreciate my work. I work Day and night on dia as I have alot school work so I hope its not too boring?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No1 likes my work anymore 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
thankx. i love it.
khusi❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I like it..😊
Edited by naema - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry guyz 4 taking long. Upd8 will cum tomorrow!
Pakka Promise!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
omigoshh!
cant wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey here's more! Sorry for upd8ing so l8 bt typed as fast as I cud.

Note: I will only upd8 wen I've got enuff replies so reply fast!

Part 5


Akshat: So are we done now or is there something else that is left to buy?
Amber: I think we're finished. Hehna Dhara?
Dhara: Of course.
Aroush: Tho chalo mein drop kar dehti hoon tum dhono.
Akshat: And I'll head off to Sonia's house. Bye!
Amber: Bye.
(As soon as he looked away she quickly made a monkey face and then blew a kiss when he was not looking)
(Amber is still waving although Akshat is no where to be seen)
Aroush: Amber woh chale gaye so lets go.
Amber: Chal.
James: Amber Dhara tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?
Dhara: Arey! James.
James: Ya.
Aroush: Hi James. You got a lift na?
James: Nahin I will walk back.
Aroush: No that doesn't make sense. Come I'll drop you.
James: Teke.

(Just then they saw Akshat running back)
Aroush: Arey! Kya hua?
Akshat: Sonia took my car and went home so I need a lift.
Aroush: Ya no prob.
Akshat: Thanks but one request. I want to drive your car. Please!
James: I will sit in the front. I want to change the music.
Aroush: Ok fine.

So Amber, Dhara and Aroush had to sit in the backseat. Aroush got in the car at the end side and then Dhara got in but when Amber was getting in, Amber pushed Dhara and Dhara then fell on Aroush's chest. Dhara could hear his heart beating. Amber jus ignored and asked James to turn up the volume..

In the mean time, Aroush put his hands around Dhara (she was still on his chest)and hugged her tightly and then he kissed her on her forehead and then she looked up and into his eyes. She quickly got up and started blushing. Aroush was also blushing.

Aroush then made her feel comfortable by putting his hand around her and whispering in her ear the three magical words: I LOVE YOU. She was elated at the sound of that. She looked at him and replied: I LOVE YOU TOO. Aroush then made big eyes as she turned his head and kissed him on the cheek!!! He blushed!

They both smiled at each other. Just then the car stopped and it was time for Amber and Dhara to get off.

Dhara: Bye Aroush. Bye Akshat. Bye James.
All: Bye!
Amber: Bye Akshat.
(It was too late he had left speeding down a slippery road)
(Amber was sad)
(Dhara was excited)

(At night)
(Aroush felt he needed to meet Dhara so he decided to climb to there window and finally he got there and found Amber asleep and Dhara staring at the ceiling)
Aroush: (whispering) Dhara.
Dhara: Aroush. Sssshh Amber jag jayegi.
Aroush: Sorry to trouble you lekin I couldn't stop myself.
(Dhara tried to get up and eventually got up without Amber waking)
Dhara: Aroush tum bhi. Accha batao what you want to say.
Aroush: I.. I... Mein... Mein.
Dhara: What.
Aroush: (swallows) I love you.
Dhara: (blushes) I love you too.

Aroush is hesitant but eventually he puts his arm around her and hugs her. Dhara breaks into tears. He then puts his lips forward and kisses the tears one by one.

Aroush: I think I should go now. Its very late.
(He gets up to leave and she hold his hand)
Dhara: Matt jao please. Its only 11 o' clock and Amber utt thi hein subah 7 o' clock. Please stay with me until 6 o' clock.
Aroush: Teke.

She makes space for him on the bed by moving up a bit and then she rests her head on his and he picks up her hand and kisses it. They then stare at each other for a long time.
(Flashbacks of how they met)
Song: Ankhon Mein Teri Ajab Si & ;nbs p; Film: Om Shanti Om

Preview: Does Aroush get caught by Amber?
Wait and c tomorrow!

From:
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Edited by Chevi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww....thats sooo sweet!! 😳
im sorta confused though...lol in the car they said i love u n everything and no one hearddd??? 😳
lol...awesomee part though...loved the scenes!!!
cont soon! 😊

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