AsYa OS: Bol Na Halke Halke - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Monica,

I know I'm extremely late in replying but what to do, I just signed in today n saw ur pm waiting in my inbox.

Uff your os made me reminisce the golden period. This one particular part was just so beautiful. You've done an amazing job, like you always do. Just loved it.

You've portrayed Zoe's inner feelings, her monologue, how drastically she changed herself so that she blended in the Khan household and not belittled again by Mr. Khan so well. Her silent realisation of love and sudden outburst at Asad and him feeling burdened and hurt on seeing her not being herself was so so nice. The way he broke the chain of hesitation and probed her for an answer and then claimed her was perfecto!

Loved it all.

Love you too..



Thanks hun! Just a warm up before I continue MJ and that start that new story :) glad you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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God that was beautiful :') šŸ¤—
-Fari
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: daydream.

God that was beautiful :') šŸ¤—

-Fari


Hello šŸ˜›šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Fantastic Os Dear

Asya..phuppi..tamatar..Whaooo How amazing thr lil family is!!

bolNa halke šŸ‘

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