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simmi

@-simmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

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That was too good i love it!!

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Loved it!!!

Magnificent one...

Liked how everything fell in place imperfectly perfect!

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PEARLPOO

@PEARLPOO

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Lovely os

agar hosaketho cntnue karo...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

You have to write some more parts to this...!!!

Though this feels perfectly complete yet there is a bit of wanting for more...!!!!

Glad to see you back!!!

Please do write another part if not 3-4?

Aashka

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: asyafreva
You have to write some more parts to this...!!!

Though this feels perfectly complete yet there is a bit of wanting for more...!!!!

Glad to see you back!!!

Please do write another part if not 3-4?

Aashka

Haha if inspiration strikes I'll certainly post another part! 😉

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Can we get more please... Pretty please.,...

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This was an endearing read.

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

OMG this was incredible romantic. So lovely , Beautifully written, please do keep on writing, great work.. I miss Asya, old memories taaza hoyee.. Thanks for this lovely write up..😳

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Baby

@shami9

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

please continiu this story. i love this very good start.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Hey Monica,

I know I'm extremely late in replying but what to do, I just signed in today n saw ur pm waiting in my inbox.

Uff your os made me reminisce the golden period. This one particular part was just so beautiful. You've done an amazing job, like you always do. Just loved it.

You've portrayed Zoe's inner feelings, her monologue, how drastically she changed herself so that she blended in the Khan household and not belittled again by Mr. Khan so well. Her silent realisation of love and sudden outburst at Asad and him feeling burdened and hurt on seeing her not being herself was so so nice. The way he broke the chain of hesitation and probed her for an answer and then claimed her was perfecto!

Loved it all.

Love you too..