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NAUC TSC Episode 359

By Niya(scene 1,3) and Annie(scene 2,4)

Scene 1

Viraj's house

Viraj was in his room writing something in his diary when Vasundara came inside with some hot oil

Vasundara : Viraj , hum aapko disturb toh nahi kar rahe na ?

Viraj hurriedly closed his diary and kept it aside

Viraj : Nahi Maa.. aisa kuch nahi hai.. aapko kuch chaiye tha ?

Vasundara sat on the chair and kept the oil on the side table and replied

Vasundara : Jee , hume aapka thoda sa time chahiye tha

Viraj smiled and sat next to the chair on the floor and caught her hand

Viraj : Humara toh pura time aapka hi hai Maa...

Vasundara : Theek hai toh aaj hum aapko ek aisa sa oil massage denge

She said and made him turn .. Viraj giggled and said

Viraj : Maa kya kar rahe hai... hum abhi hum abhi bacche nahi hai ...

Vasundara : Jante hai Viraj, par hum jo samay aapko aapke bachpan main nahi de paye the vo abh dena chahte hai ...

She smiled but had tears in her eyes.. Viraj also felt little emotional but he tried hiding his emotions..

Viraj : Theek hai Maa , banaye hume bachpan ki tarah champu

Vasundara took some oil in her hand and started applying it in Viraj's hair...

Vasundara : Kaisa lag raha hai Viraj ?

Viraj : Bohut sukkun mil raha hai ...

Vasundara smiled and again turned to take some oil when she saw the diary on the side table

She looked at it and then at Viraj ..

Vasundara : Viraj .. humare jane ke baad aapke life main kya hua tha ? Humara matlab ki aapki life main aisa koi toh hoga jisne aapko humare jaane ke baad sambhala hoga ?

Viraj became when he recalled his past but had a smile on his face as soon as he remembered about Kaira ... he turned to Vasundara and started narrating some of his childhood incidents with Kaira after she left him and both of them laughed at his silly antics

Viraj : Bohut achi thi vo , kabhi hume akela nahi mehsus hone diya unhone , janti hai Maa appke jane ke baad sirf vo hi thi jinhe humari sach main fikar thi , Bua Ji ka sach aur Nisha ki begunahi bhi unhi ne humare saamne saabit kit hi...

Vasundara didn't fail to notice that sadness and guilt in his voice when he spoke the later part but she also notice the spark in his eyes when he was talking about their childhood times

She thought that there is something that Viraj is hiding , maybe his feelings for Kaira , she was about ask him more about Kaira but she noticed that he was looking very tired so she said him to take some rest and went to her room

Scene 2

On the road

Kabir covered the distance with a lot of efforts until they reached kulu.

Kabir: nishaaa...

Nisha: kya hua kabir...she said yawning.

Kabir: ab main aur car nahi chala sakta...main bht thak gaya...he said stopping the car at a side and got out followed by Nisha

Nisha: aaee kabirr...matlab kya hain nahi chala sakta...dekh kabirr...abhi bas aadha ghanta aur...phir hum hotel phnch jaayenge...phir tujhe jitna aaraam karna hain tu kar liyo..main bhi tujhe disturb nai karungi.

Kabir: nisha...tu samajh kyun nahi rahi yaaar...mere body ke har bone mein aise dard ho raha hain maano...kisine janmo janmo ka badla nikaalo ho mujhe maar maar ke...!!!

Nisha giggled. But really felt bad for him. Somewhere, it was due to her wishes, which kabir was trying to complete.

Nisha: dekhh kabir...main jaanti hun ki tujhe kaise lag raha hain...lekin kabir...raat ke 10 baj rahe hain and humaara yahan yu highway par rukna bilkul safe nahi hain. News mein bhi sunaa na recently kya kya ho raha hain aaj kal yahan..!! tune wo b..bbhoot ke baare mein sunaa nahi kya...? Jo yahan kullu ...aur manali ke beechme g..ggh..umti hain...she satmmered due to fear.

Kabir: nishaa...tujhe kahin darr to nahi lag raha na..??kabir tried to control his laughter, which would burst out any time.

Nisha: naa...na..nahii too..mujhe kyun lagega darr...lagega...

A mischievous idea played in kabir's mind. His face turned pale, he felt as if he saw something horrible, fear was clearly visible on his face...

Kabir: nn...nnisshhaaa...t..eerrre peechee...woo...woo...bb..bbhh...ooo..''pointing towards nisha

Nisha: k..kk..abiirr..kk..yaaa bol raha hain...kaun hain..mere peeche...??!!

Kabir: nishaa...wo woo...bhoot...nishaaa...bhoot...bhoot...bhoot...''he started shouting in horror.

Nisha just did not even dare to turn around to see who it was...she just ran to kabir...as fast as she could and hugged him tight...making herself safe in his arms.

Kabir started laughing...hard...but he was hugging her tight...he tried to tell her that he was joking...but kabir realised that he went a little overboard in his k ness, as she was so frightened, a little, sorry , not a llittle , a lott..., that, she was not ready to leave him, her clutch on him was really very very tight, fear was evident on her face... He loosened her grip and cupped her face, her eyes were still closed.

Kabir: nishuu...dekh naa...aankhen khol,...kuch bhi nahi hain...dekh...main mazaak kar raha tha nisha...i am sorry...

Nisha slowly opened her eyes to see kabir smiling but yet guilty

Nisha: kabirr...tu sachch bol raha hain na...kuch bhi nhi hain na mere peeche..??

Kabir: sachchi nisha...main to bas mazaak kar raha tha...I am really sorry...

Nisha started hitting hi with all her strength.

Kabir: ouchh nisha...lag raha hain yaar...main sachchi bol raha hun...chahe to peeche mud ke dekhle..kuch nahi hain...wahaan...dekh na...and he tried and turned nisha around...while nisha slowly turned around still closing her eyes..she slowly opened her eyes...as she opened them completely, she so no one infront of her, but as she turned around to blast kabir, she felt someone coming towards her... she turned again to see who it was, she was a middle aged lady, must be 2-3 years elder than nibir...

As she walked towards them...they felt hot blood run rapidly within their veins as their bodies became cold due to fear...

Scene 3

Sukku's room

Sukku was sitting in his room practicing his scenes for the next day when his phone beeped .. he smiled seeing the caller id .. he picked the call but before he could say anything the person on the other side started blabbering

"Hie... kaise ho ? Maine disturb toh nahi kiya na ? Kya chal raha hai ? Bhai aur Bhabhi kahan hai kab se dono ke phones try kar rahi hun not reachable aa rahe hai ? Sab theek toh hai na ??"

Sukku : Arey Alisha shaant.. ek saans main kitne sawal puch liye ...

He said and started to laugh while Alisha frowned on the other hand

Alisa : Abh hasna bandh karo aur sawalon ke jawab do

Sukku : Theek hai baba .. pehle sawal ka answer tumne mujhe bilkul disturb nahi kiya , dusre ka main apne scene ki practice khatam kar raha tha aur teesre ka answer yeh hai ki tumhare Bhai aur Bhabhi Manali gaye hai chuttiyon ke liye aaj hi via road ja rahe hai shayaad issliye phones not reachable aa rahe honge ...

As soon as he told about NiBir he had to distance his phone from his hear because Alisha had started screaming in excitement and joy

Alisha : Wow... That's so great .. Kitna romantic hai yeh.. main toh unhe surprise karne ka soch rahi but mujhe hi surprise mil gaya ..

Sukku giggled at her cuteness but became curious when he heard about surprise

Sukku : Kaisa surprise ?

Alisha (bit her tounge ) : Erm ..kuch nahi main baad main phone karti hun abhi mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

Saying so she cut the call before Sukku could ask any further question

Alisha's monologue : Baccch gai warna sara surprise kharab ho jata .. chalo abh Bhai Bhabhi toh hai nahi.. Sukku ko hi surprise de dungi.. she smiled widely

Scene 4

On the road

Kabir clutched Nisha's hand and spoke

Kabir: nn...iishaa...lagta hain tu..nee sachh hi bola thaa...yy..ahha...to sachchi mein b..b.b..bhoot hain.

A lady clad in a white dress, was coming towards them, with a rushing speed...

Nisha:k..k...abirrr...tu bhaagne ko taiyyar hain..??

Kabir: neki aur pooch pooch...main to bhaagne mein sabse first aata hun...chal ready...1...2...3...GO...!!

They held each others hands and started running as if they had wheels in their feet...as they ran... that lady shouted...

Lady: excusee mee...hello...aap log bhaag kyun rahe hain...???

Kabir : (to nisha): nisha ye bhoot to bolti bhi hain...

Nisha: haan...ek minute rukk..!!ye to sachchi mein bolti hain...aur iski awaaz bilkul bhi bhoot jaisi nahi hain..!!

They stopped at their spot, as the lady came running towards them,

Lady: excusee me...aap log bhaag kyun rahe the..???

The lady had been looking different all the while as first of all, she clad white, which is the signature mark of all the spirits, then her face looked all damaged, it really wasn't, it looked like that due to her make up worth a kilogram , of different colors, dissolved in her sweat, damaging all her look. The third mark nibir were searching for was, a spirit's twisted legs or no legs., they both started to look at her feet.the lady could not understand their reaction towards her, while kabir and nisha laughed at each other.

Kabir: (to nisha) : nishuuu...she is not..!!

Nisha: ( to kabir) : yes...she isn't..thank god..!!

Lady: excusee me...what are you saying..??i am not able to understand it..!! she tried showing her fluency in english.

Kabir: yahin..ki you are not a Ghho...nothing..!! you want anything from us..??

Lady: you look like a gentle man...how cute..!!

Nisha: what ..do you want..??

Lady: yeahh...yeahh...first of all I need some water...and then..can you help us reach the hotel...The Stardust...??

Kabir: ohh...what a coincidence...we are staying in the same too..and we will definitely help you...but what do we have to do..??

Lady: waisee...my name is sheena...n yours...?? And who is she ..your sister..??

Nisha: excusee me...what did you say...I am not his sister...I am his legally wedded wife...and that too two times. I am nisha kabir rathore..??? anything else..??

Kabir laughed at her inwards...she was jealous...as well as in a blasting mood...

Sheena: ohh...no no...it's completely fine...enough...was just asking...but it is not at all beleivable that such a handsome and youngman could be married...and his choice would be so...

Nisha: excusee me...what..??

Kabir trying to stop her.

Sheena: ohh..nothingg..!!

Nisha told kabir to bring a bottle of water from the car, as she told him that she would be talking to her in the while...kabir went to the car and brought a bottle full of cold water, which instead of drinking, she used it to wash her dreary face.

As she was busy flirting with kabir and making nisha jealous, a man came runing towards her.

Man: babyy...babyy...main gaadi ko dhakka maar ke le aaya...ab bataao na kya karna hain..?? he said pointing towards another car which stood behind nibir's car.

Sheena: to main kya karun agar tumne car yahan tak dhakka maar diya to..?? waise bhi tum ho hi waste..ekk kaam nahi hota dhang se tusme..!!

Nibir who were noticing them, asked in betweem.

Kabir: excusee me...do you want any help from us..??

Before the man could say anything, sheena interrupted in between.

Sheena: ohh...why not...waise aap meri kya help karenge..?? she said touching kabir's hand making nisha's state ridiculous...

Kabir freeing his hand from her touch, went and stood at the other side of nisha...sheena looked at nisha with jealousy...as nisha smiled.



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NAUC TSC EPISODE 360

By Mansi (scene 1,3) and Annie (Scene 2,4)

Scene 1

Dolly's room

Dolly has just returned from office when saurav entered.

Saurav - dolly dekh ye...

He couldn't complete his words as he saw her sitting with her head down.

Saurav - dolly tu thik h na... kya hua tjhe... nimboo pani lau... weakness feel ho rhi h kya?

He fired her with questions when she looked at him lovingly.

Dolly - saurav... itti fikar kyu karta h yaar

Saurav - to fikr nhi karu to ur kya karu... tu khud hi apna khayal nhi rkhti... to mjhe to rkhna hi padega...

Saurav turned to fill a glass of water and when he faced her back.. the sight was enough to scare him.

Dolly - ( flaring with anger)

Achha matlab kya h tera... ki mai irresponsible hu... dhyaan nhi rkh sakti apna...

Saurav - (monologue ) kya hogya ise achanak. (To dolly) yaar mai to bus...

Dolly - ( crying by now) ha ha tu to kya... tu to yhi bol ki mai kitti careless hu... bus sab ko meri carelessness dikhayi deti h... tu bhi yhi bol..

She started crying loudly whereas saurav was clueless as to what happened to her.

Saurav - dolly I m sorry uaar mai to bus ese hi bol rha tha... mjhe teri fikr ho rhi thi na..

He said kneeling in front of her and taking her face in his palm.

Dolly's mood switched again.

Dolly - awww... sauro kitta sweet h tu yaar

She said pulling his cheeks leaving him perplexed. He wondered what has gotten into her.

Scene 2

On the road

The Man shaked his hands with kabir, and introduced himself as Rishant, he was a simple looking guy, who cared a lot for his wife , as it was clearly visible through his talks and behaviour.

Rishant: hello kabir... actually hum yahan...manali mein ghumne aaye the...and bas aadhe ghante pehle car kharab ho gayi...and we are , I meant me and our driver are , pushing it since the., he said in a complete humorous style.

Kabir: ohhkk...to main aapki car dekh sakta hun...ekk baar...maybe I can do something...!!

Nisha: even I can try that...!!

Rishant: are you suree you both would be able to do that..??

Kabir: offco...before he could complete his word , sheena interrupted again.

Sheena: ohh..thankyou so much kabirr...you are so good..!!

Nisha: atyant flirtatious . she mumbled in kabir's ears. While kabir giggled.

Kabir nodded and went towards their car, and opened the cover of the engine. A white Smoke arised from the engine as he opened it.he coughed as he inhaled the smoke.

Kabir: actually..engine garam ho gaya hain...baarish ho rahi thi na...maybe that's why...kuch nahi bas do minute mein theek ho jaayega.

Sheena: you seem so knowledgeful about cars.

Kabir said nisha to bring a bottle of water, but before she could go, sheena handed him the bottle in her hand.

He praised him more and more leaving nibir and rishant, irritated.

After a few minutes, kabir made the engine fit and fine again, and nibir bid them from there...sheena was not ready to leave the place ...but however her husband took her with him after a lot of pleadings. They left the place.

Nisha: husshh...peecha choota...bhootni ka..!!

Kabir giggled.

Kabir: nisha aise mat bol...phir dikh gayi to tu darr jaaygi..!!

Nisha: aree haan...main bhool gayi hum ek hi hotel mein to rukee hain...!!

And this time both giggled and side higged each other.they left the place to reach their hotel, as it was already 11:30, they both were hungry , as they did not have their dinner, nisha grabbed a packet of chips from her bag and fed it to kabir and she herself to ate it.

they, after sometime reached their hotel, and checked-in,the receptionist's hand shivered while she gave them the keys. She immediately called te manager and dicussed something about it and nibir went direct to their room, they odered some food from the room service, they freshened up, had their dinner, and cuddled in each other's arms, and slept peacefully. That night they did not notice anything, the light of their room kept going on and off the whole night after 12 o clock. While the staff members noticed that spooky thing once again.

Scene 3

Gangwal House

Vimla - are rupan...

She ran towards the gas and turned it's knob down.

Vimla - kha khoi hui h rupan... abhi dhoodh ubal k bikhar jata saara... dhyaan kha h tera...

Rupan - sorry didi... bus vo yuhi dhyaan nhi rha...

Vimla - kya baat h rupan bta na...

Rupan - kuch nhi didi... bus kirti ki chinta hoti rehti h mjhe...

Vimla - offo rupan... kitti baar to tjhe sabne samjhaya h... fir bhi tu...

Rupan - janti hu didi... par kya karu... fikr to hoti hi h na apni bachhi ki... ur upar se aaj kal mood bhi sahi nhi rehta h uska... pta nhi uske office m esa kya ho rha h...

Vimla - rupan apni kirti par bharosa rkh... kuch galat nhi hoga uske saath... bhot samajhdaar h vo...

Rupan - bus meri bachhi k sath sab achha ho...

Scene 4

Hotel in Manali

Next morning,

Nisha and kabir woke up in each other's arms, it was a new morning right now.. first, nisha woke up...and tried waking kabir up

Nisha: kabiree uth ...subah ho gayi...almost 10 baj gayee...

Kabir: nishaa...sonee de na...ekk to tune kal mujhe poore 12 hours car chalwayi...aur uske baad ab mujhe sone bhi nahi de rahi...kal ke driving ke baad agar main do-teen din tak bhi sotaa rahun na...to phir bhi kam pad jaayega..!!

Nisha: aaaeee...kabir...uth warna main jaa rahi hun akele ghumne...!!

Kabir: mere bina...very bad wifey...tu bhi sojaa...hum baadme jaayenge...he pulled towards her making him land on him...and hugged her tightly...

Nisha: oyyee kabirr chod mujhee...chodd..!

Kabir: nishaa sonee dee mujhe...aur bola na maine tu bhi soja..!!

Nisha: kabirr...tu phir shuru ho gaya..!!

Kabir: tune hi to kal bola...ki tu k kabir ko bht miss karti hain..??

Nisha: haan lekin...she lost the battle and rested her head on his chest, and her hand around his waist.

Kabir: nishaa...

Nisha: hmm...

Kabir: aaj kahan jaana hain tujhe ghumne..??

Nisha: jahan tu le jaaye...

Kabir: ghumne keliye to bht jagah hain...tu bol tujhe kaha jaana hain..!!

Nisha: kabir...trekking pe chale..??

Kabir: nisha...trekking ...sachchmein...tu kal ke journey ke baad thaki nahi..???

Nisha: kabir...hummyahan ghumne aaye hain...aaraam karne nahi...!!

Kabir: tu ye bol na ki...yahan jaana hain...wahaan jaana hain...lekin trekking hI kyun...??

Nisha:kabirrr...pleasee na...pleaseee..!!

Kabir:achcha...chall okay..we'll go...!!

Nisha: aww..thankyou kabiraaa...Kabir smiled... And they slept for some more time...

and after sometime, they woke up, called their families and informed them about their safe arrival.

They both freshened up and went to have their breakfast in the restaurant ..they had some light breakfast...but to their bad luck sheena followed them to trekking, and rishant followed her unwantedly.

Rishant told kabir that they were staying in the room beside theirs. Nisha blamed her bad luck. She grabbed kabir's hand. And started walking towards their car...when sheena caught his other hand, and pulled him towards her, nisha burned in jealousy, while kabir tried freeing his hand and rishant tried to control her behaviour.

Sheena: aaj main aur rishant bhi aaphi ke car mein aayenge...kyunki waise bhi hum ek hi jagah jaayenge...to alag alag cars mein jaane ka kya matlab.

Nisha: offcourse ,"' sarcastically.

While kabir giggled at her reaction.

While kabir drove the car sheena sat beside him instead of nisha...which fumed the fire to another level.

Sheenaa...you are so gone now...!!"'thought nisha.

Nisha and rishant sat in the backseat, as nisha and kabir looking at each other through the mirror, and rishant looking at sheena, while sheena busy in trimming her nails.

Kabira gave a flying kiss to nisha through the rearview mirror, leaving nisha bluhing.

After a drive of about 15 minutes,, they reached the trekking spot. They took their trekking equipments and started their trek.

Kabir and nisha took some important instructions from the instructor, and started their trek together holding their hands. They trekked in the midst of the forest mountains...kabir , nisha, sheena and rishant were trekking...sheena was trying to get closer to kabir..while nisha tried to make her aside...when another mischeivous idea played in kabir's mind , the four of them were walking , when kabir lowered his speed and signalled nisha to do so too.as sheena and rishant went a little ahead, kabir pulled nisha with him...and they hid behind a tree, sheena stopped there itself and looked for kabir, who was nowhere to be found.


A/N- dear readers,

sorry for the inconvinience of not sending pm these days but the writers are busy with their studies/jobs/personal lives respectively thus its become a little difficult to send pm regularly pls forgive us and try to understand.

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NAUC TSC EPISODE 361

By Annie(Scene 1,3) and Niya (Scene 2)

Scene 1

Manali

Kabir and nisha hid behind a tree...and waited for Sheena to go away, as they went a little forward, Kabir pulled Nisha into his embrace, while Nisha tried protesting,

Nisha: Kabir...kya karr raha hain tu...?? Chod na mujhe...!! Hum yahan trekking karne aaye hain...romance nahi.

Kabir: haan Nishaa...jab dono kaam ekk saath ho rahe hain to isme kya buraayi hain...time waste nahi hoga na...multi tasking naam ki bhi koyi cheez hoti hain.

Nisha: tu apna multi tasking apne pass rakhkh...aur abhi chal trekking karne..!!

Kabir: Nishuu...trekking to hum zindagi bhar kar sakte hain...abhi hi kyun..!!

Nisha: Kabirr..tera dialogue galat hain...!!

Kabir: haan...haan...jo bhi hain...Nishaa...kya problem hain tujhe..??

He pulled her more closer towards himself. He was about to kiss her, when nisha pushed him away playfully and ran away from there.

Kabir: Nishaaa...theek hain phir ...jaa...jahan jaana hain...

Nisha stood there teasing him, when from nowhere , Sheena popped up there again, searching for kabir.

She came and held his hand, and started pulling him with her, Kabir felt this as a chance to tease Nisha., he too held her hand even more tighter, and walked with her, and as usual, Rishant couln't say anything , as he was a shy kind of a person, and he feared to hurt his wife.

Nisha...frowned at Sheena and Kabir, Kabir teased Nisha by showing his tongue,

Nisha ( monologue) : aaj mil trekking ke baad...baat kiya na to dekh liyoo...main tujhse baat hi nahi karne waali.

Saying that she kept following them.

After the trek, they met again at the initial spot, where Nisha for even once did not look at Kabir, she just stood opposite to Kabir at a distance while Kabir laughed,

Nisha (monologue) : maine isko bola ki mujhe wo purana waala k Kabiraa wapas chahiye...ye to double k ban gaya..!!

Afternoon,

After the trek, everyone was too tired...they went to a restaurant first, had their lunch , and left for Rohtang pass, it was a beautiful place, a hill station, where you could meet clouds so live, they reached there in sometime, in their car, they reached the place,cold wind blew, as the reached the place, they walked some distance , clouds passed through them, the beauty of those white snowy mountains as clearly visible , nisha touched the snow, and felt it's cold beauty, kabir noticed this and smiled.

"So beautiful it is...!!''mumbled nisha.

"Not more than you..!!" mumbled kabir

And when Nisha saw him, he started seeing here and there, as if he wasn't noticing her.

They walked further, just to assemble the serene beauty in front of their naked eyes. Nisha saw some beautiful baby rabbits near a tree, and walked towards them, she slowly picked a rabbit up in her hands, and caressed it's beautiful soft and white hair.

"You are so beautiful'' said she to the rabbit.

Kabir clicked the picture on his camera. As Nisha heard the click of the camera, she turned to see Kabir standing there, taking some pictures of the beautiful serene white hills covered with snow.

She was about to go to him, when Sheenaa came again in between interrupting.

Nisha: ye Kabirr ka bachcha...mujhe pareshaan karne keliye kuch bhi karta hain...maine ab jab socha tha ki isko maaf kardu...isne phirse wahi kiya...k kahinka...!!

Kabir understood what she was blabbering as he shouted

"Main k tu...tu mere se bhi badi j nisha..!!'' shouted kabir.

She set the baby rabbit free...on the ground...and followed them again, it was alost evening now, as they were too tired now, and a museum was left in today's qouta...they visited the place too, and it took them about three hours to complete seeing it.

Scene 2

Sets of Sukku's film

The next day when Sukku reached the sets of his shoot Tina came to him and starting flirting with him as usual making him feel uncomfortable

Tina : Suketu tmhe kya lagta hai aaj ke scenes kaise honge ?

Sukku (irritated) : Vo toh shot dete time pata chalega ki scenes kaise hue hai ...

Tina : Oh... sunna hai ki aaj ek dance sequence bhi hoga.. shayaad hum saath main dance kare...

As soon as Sukku heard the word dance he started getting memories of Alisha and his dance and a small smile played on his lips but Tina thought that he is happy thinking that they both would dance together , she tried getting close to him but the AD came to them and told that the director is calling everyone to meet the choreographer...

When they went inside the studio they saw that Ajay was trying to flirt with the choreographer but she didn't seem to pay heed to him ,thus he was having a frustrated expressions on his face while the choreographer was listing to the director when he explained her about the scene and she was showing him some steps and asking his approval ...

Sukku felt that he is very familiar to the steps of the choreographer it seemed like she was planning the steps keeping him in mind and somewhere he was feeling that she is Alisha but he didn't want to keep high hopes as he hadn't seen her face yet as they kept taking steps towards the choreographer his heart beats started increasing and Tina was feeling jealous of the choreographer already seeing her perfect moves ...

Director : Suketu and Tina , Meet Alisha your dance choreographer

Alisha turned and took look at Sukku and found him with a dumbstruck expressions she started giggling and others too looked weirdly at Sukku

Sukku composed himself , Tina looked at Alisha and gave her a whatever look making Alisha little confused

Director : Alisha I want you train them very well and since we have just one day to shoot it lets start it now itself

Ajay : Ofcourse , come Alisha lets start he said in his usual tone with attitude but it lasted just for a minute as the director broke his dreams of dancing with Alisha into pieces

Director : Erm Ajay , yeh Suketu ka dance sequence shot karne aai hai tumhare liye koi aur hai jo thode der main aa raha hai

Ajay : What do you mean ?

Director : I mean ki tum iss dance sequence ka part nahi ho.. yeh Suketu ka dream dance sequence hai so if you want you can leave or practice for the next scene , I am sorry...

Ajay cut him angrily and spoke

Ajay : What do you mean by sorry ?? Jab mera koi scene hai hi nahi toh mujhe bulaya hi kyun.. idiot

Saying so he went out of the studio shooting daggers at Sukku but Sukku was least bothered because he was lost in his own world he didn't know if it was a dream or a reality but he came to know the difference when he heard Alisha's voice and only then he realised that she was standing right infront of him with a smirk and little mischief in her eyes

Alisha : Mr. Suketu Gangwal... kya aap apne dance sequence ki shoot ke liye ready hai ?

She asked in an extra sweet voice making him confuse but when he realised that she did this just to tease him he frowned

Sukku : Bilkul apne Bhai ki tarah hai tu K ...

Both of them started laughing and hugged eachother while Tina stood there with her mouth wide open .. Sukku didn't even talk properly to her and here Alisha was hugging him ..

Alisha : Achi baat hai na ... Bhai yahan nahi hai toh koi toh hona chahiye na tumhe praise karne ke liye ... she shrugged her shoulders and stressed at the word praise

Sukku : Vo toh theek hai.. waise mujhe kal raat hi idea lag gaya tha ki tum aane wali ho.. bata deti toh lene aajata ...

Alisha : Come on Sukku main bacchi nahi hun ... au agar main tumhe bula leti toh tumhara vo Million dollar wala shocked expression miss kar deti main right ?

She said and placed her hands on her hips .. she knew that he was concerned about her safety but she really wanted to see his reaction when he sees her all of a sudden ...

Hearing Alisha call him Sukku Tina fumed more, she remembered how Sukku told her not to call him Sukku as only his close ones can him that, every passing moment was making her more irritated , she finally gave up and spoke

Tina : Tum dono ek dusre ko jante ho ?

Sukku : Haan yeh mere Jiju ki behan aur meri achi dost hai

Tina : Oh...

Alisha : Oh hello... Main yahan tumhare Jiju ki behan ya tumhari achi dost banke nahi aai hun .. main yahan tumhari dance choreographer banke aai hun.. abh chalo bohut baatien hogai... dance pe dhyaan de ... ?

Sukku : Haan haan... chaliye dance kare... yehi baaki tha... abh tumhare isharon pe naachna padega

Alisha : You have no option.. chalo abh dance karte hai.. kafi time baad tumhare saath dance karne ka mauka mila hai...

Alisha caught his hand and took him leaving a bewildered Tina behind them

Scene 3

NiBir's room in Manali

It was around 8 'o'' clock when they reached back their hotel, and rested for sometime in the lobby , they ordered some coffee there itself, and after finishing it, they went straight to the restaurant, had their dinner and marched off to their rooms without talking to each other, Sheena would have followed Kabir here too, but she was tired, Kabir felt thankful to her for being tired .

After a tiring day, Nisha and Kabir dozed off on either side of the bed without looking at each other, today they did not cuddle in each other...as Nisha and Kabir had to show that they both were angry .

Sleep evaded them tonight, as they were not used to sleep without cuddling into each other, kabir looked at nisha and then turned to other side and tried sleeping , he was successful, as he went into a deep sleep, it wouldn't have been possible If he wasn't tired... nisha turned and looked towards him...he was sleeping like a small kid.

Nisha (monologue): dekhoo , merese ladayi karke kaise so raha hain...kumbhkaran kahinka...aree naa naa...ye kumbhkaran thodi hi na hain...iska to level aur strategy dono hi kuch aur hain..!!

Nisha turned to her side and tried sleeping...But due to bad luck, sleep wasn't there for her today.

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NAUC TSC EPISODE 362

By Annie(Scene 1,3) and Niya (Scene 2)

Scene 1

NiBir's room in Manali

Nisha turned to her side and tried sleeping... But due to bad luck , sleep wasn't there for her today

Slowly after some hours, when the clock struck exactly two...

She closed her eyes and tried to sleep, when she felt that the blanket which she and Kabir had on was slowly going down...as if someone was pulling it... She doubted Kabir if he was doing that in his sleep, Nisha pulled the blanket on herself again and closed her eyes but after a few seconds again the blanket was going away from her slowly..Nisha turned around to see Kabir, he made some movements, when that thing stopped , the blanket stopped there itself

Nisha: (monologue) : achcha to iss Kabir ke bachche ko bhi neend nahi aayi...jo ye mujhe pareshaan karne ki koshish kar raha hain..

(to Kabir): Kabirr...mujhe pata hain tu jaga hua hain...to mujhe preshaan mat kar samjhaa...warna maarungi main tujhe..!!

She tried shaking Kabir, but Kabir just mumbled in his sleep...

Kabir: (in sleepy voice) : kya kar rahi hain Nishaa...mujhe neend aa rahi hain..sone de mujhe...and he kept his hand on her cheek and patted it and went into deep sleep again.

Nisha got irritated and again turned around to sleep, when she felt the same thing happen again, she got irritated now and kicked Kabir off the bed, Kabir's sleep evaded as he fell on the floor... He switched on the lights and shouted...

Kabir( in sleepy voice) : aaaeee Nishaa...tujhe mujhpe gussa aata hain to din mein kyun nahi nikalti...yu raat ko kyun laat maarti hain...ya phir sapne mein apne scooty ko kick maar rahi thi kya..??

Nisha: tu aisi harkatee karega...aur upar se itna drama karegaa..to main tujhe kick to maarungi hi na..!!

Kabir: Nishaa...ab mere shaanti se sonee se bhi tujhe problem hone lagi kya..??? shanti se sotee hue log tujhe achche nahi lagte,..??

Kabir caught his head which got hurt as his head hit the side table...

Kabir: Nishaa...bed se kyun tu mujhe chhat se hi kyun nahi dhakka maar deti...ekk hi baar mein meri haddiyon ka powder ho jaayega...ye tu installements mein kyun todhti hain..??

Nisha: Oyee theek se baat kar samjha...warna main tere haddiyon ka churaa abhi kardungi..!!

Kabir: haan...waise aadha to tu karr hi chuki hain...baaki bhi kar hi de..!!!

Nisha fumed as Kabir mocked her...

They were busy in their usual fights...when they heard some noises, rather some loud noises, as those of someone fighting...they became silent as they heard those noises, Kabir who was sitting on the floor till now came and sat beside Nisha, he held her hand... the noise was increasing with every passing second...

Scene 2

Sets of Sukku's film

Alisha and Sukku were busy dancing and Alisha tried her best to choose such steps that made Sukku's dance simple yet perfect for his dream sequence ... After they were almost done with the dance sequence they decided to take a break , the director came to them and praised them

Director : Alisha , you have done a marvellous job and Suketu you are too good.. tum sirf achi acting hi nahi , acha dance bhi kar lete ho ... I am glad ki main tumhe yeh break de raha hun...

Alisha : Thank you Sir, main toh sirf apna kaam kar rahi hun, Vo toh Sukku I mean Suketu hi hai jiski mehnat ke wajah se apko yeh itna acha laga , agar yeh ache se steps nahi seekhta tho shayaad yeh dance itna acha nahi hota...

Director : Tum dono shayaad ek dusre ko jante ho ? Am I right ?

Alisha : You are right Sir , Jis dance competition ko jente ke wajah se mujhe as a choreographer kaam karne ka mauka mila uss competition main Sukku hi mera partner tha , meri jeet ka 50% credit isse bhi jata hai , uss samay bhi issne mera bohut acha saath diya tha and yeh meri Bhabhi ke Bhai hai so we are a family too...

She said and looked at Sukku with a genuine smile while he kept admiring her ... she was indeed like Kabir who never took the credit whenever he did something...

Director : That's great shayaad issliye tumhae itni asaani se yeh sequence almost ready kar diya hai .. anyways you continue your job and main jake final shot ke preparations dekh leta hun .. God bless you both

Once the director left Sukku and Alisha went to the makeup room to have lunch ...

Alisha : Toh aaj kya hai khane main ? Bohut din hogaye ghar ka khana kahye ...

Alisha pouted and made a cute face which made Sukku giggle

Sukku : Shayaad Maa ko bhi pata tha ki tum aane wali ho... issliye aaj tumhara favourite Moong Daal ka halwa bheja hai..

Alisha took it from him excitedly and started taking the aroma of the halwa...

Alisha : Hayee.. kitni achi khushboo hai... chalo abh jaldi kahan kahte hai...

They both started eating and talking about their jobs and lives ...

Alisha : I wish Bhai aur Bhabhi bhi hota yahan.. I miss them so much ...

Sukku : Koi baat nahi jab vo wapas aa jayenge tum bhi aajana.. ek aur dance sequence shoot kar lenge.. waise tum ghar aa rahi ho na sab se milne ?

Alisha : Na.. I don't think its possible... main sham tak tumhara sequence shoot karke yahin se airport jaungi .. raat ki flight se wapas ja rahi hun..

Sukku : Arey itna jaldi kyun ? Kam se kam ek aur din toh rukh jao na

Alisha : Maan toh mera bhi hai but ek competition hai , Special children school ke bache hai ,so unka dance choreograph karna hai

Sukku : Theek hai abh kaam hai toh jana hi padega..

Alisha : Maine toh socha tha ki Bhai Bhabhi ko bhi yahin bula lungi.. main aaj jahan bhi hun un dono ke wajah se hun.. na Bhai mujhe iss tarah train karte na main select hoti.. I owe this job to him .. and Jis tarah Bhabhi ne mujhe support kiya hai shayaad hi koi aur karta.. Mujhe puri family ka pyaar diya hai un dono ne

Her eyes were teary when she expressed her love for Nisha and Kabir, Sukku kept quite and listened to her ... once Alisha had spoken her heart out she looked at Sukku and realised that he was just adoring her , this made her blush a little , she looked here and there and tried to change the topic

Alisha : Chalo , abh dance khatam kar de ? Tumhare final shoot ke baad main nikal jaungi...

Sukku nodded and both went to choreograph the remaining sequence and after one rehearsal they went for a final shot which turned out to be really good , everyone praised both of them and then it was time for the packup

Both of them had mixed feelings they were happy that they met after so long but at the same time both were sad as they couldn't spend more time with eachother...

Sukku bought his bike and accelerated it while smirking at Alisha...

Sukku : Kya kehti ho ? Airport tak ek ride ho jaye ?

Alisha just nodded her head excitedly and sat on the bike holding his shoulders tightly ...

The ride was not silent , both of them kept teasing eachother and also talking about Nisha and Kabir once they reached the airport both became little sad again

Sukku : Pohunch gaye ...

Alisha : Haan.. abh wapas jane ka time aagaya... I miss staying here so much ...

Sukku : Hmm... koi baat nahi ek baar apna job ka tenure pura karlo phir wapas aajana ...

Alisha : Bilkul ... phir main Bhai ke saath Academy join kar lungi ..

Sukku : Haan and shayaad tab tak mera bhi kuch na kuch toh ho hi jayega...

Alisha : Aryey shayaad kyun... tum pakka tab tak ek bade star ban jaoge...

Sukku : Iss bharose ke liye thanks ... aur ...

Before he could complete his sentence Alisha's flight was announced and the passengers were asked to cross the security check ...

Alisha : Tum kuch keh rahe the na ?

Sukku : Nahi .. baad main bata dunga , phir kabhi, abhi jao tumhari flight announce ho gai hai..

Alisha was not ready to go without listening to him but Sukku managed to send her inside , she turned and waved a bye with a sad smile and Sukku did the same...

Sukku : Aur main koshish karunga ki tumhare iss bhorse ko tutne na dun...

He sighed and drove back home trying to figure out how and why did Alisha trust him so much

Scene 3

NiBir's room in Manali

Kabir and Nisha thought that someone was fighting in the room beside them, the voices were of a woman and a man.. they were shouting at each other

They figured out that the couple was fighting and their fight was some what like this...

Woman: tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko..?? jo humeshaa aise karte rehte ho mere sath.

Man: main nahi tum kya samajhti ho apne aap ko...tumne na aaj tak mujhe kabhi samjha aur na kabhi aage samjhogi..!!

Woman: haan daalo na daalo...tumhaare life mein jitni bhi buraaiyan ho na...sabka blame mujh par hi daalo...aur wo ladki...uska bhi blame mujh par hi to nahi daaloge na..??

Man: maine tumse kitni baar bola hain ki..uss ladki ko beechme mat laaya karoo..tumhe samajhmein nahi aata kya ki hum sirf acche dost hain..

Woman: achche dost...yu market mein haath pakadkar nahi ghuma karte Yuvi...

Man: lekinn Riya...wo main nahi tha...tumhe samajh mein kyun nahi aata...wo Ravi tha...uska husband...

Woman: mujhe Ravi mein aur tumhaare mein farak achche se pata hai Yuvi...tum mujhe samjhaane ki koshish mat kiya karoo..

Man: bas...chupp ekk dum chup...humesha shak,... shak... shak...aur ladayi...Riya agar tumhe yaad ho to hum yahan ghumne aaye the..main tumhaare saath time bitaana chahta tha...tumse pyaar karne ki kitni badi sazaa mili mujhe...meri sabse badi galti ho tum..

Woman: lekin wo ...

Before she could speak any further, there was a thrashing sound, rather a slapping sound... after which there were other.. sounds...of someone shouting and the banging of the door... And after that..there were sounds of someone laughing...then someone crying...and some weird voices..Nisha and Kabir were confused. ...This continued for some hours...till the clock struck six in the morning.

Those voices were there for about...a few hours ...they tried to ignore it...but as they tried to sleep...the noise increased more...Kabir got fed up of that and he opened the door of his room...and went and stood infornt of the other room's door from where the noises were coming

He banged the door of that room...but no one opened it...he went back to his room...Nisha who was tensed hearing all that...looked at Kabir with questioning eyes...while Kabir just came near her held her hand in his and blinked his eyes in assurance.

He just made her sleep and caressed her hair...there were no more sounds...Kabir thought that he would talk to the manager tomorrow about this issue...after sometime Kabir too slept...putting his hand around Nisha protecting her in his embrace ...

Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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NAUC TSC EPISODE 363

By Mansi (scene 1) and Annie (Scene 2)

Scene - 1

Gangwal House

Since it was a Sunday all the cousins (except sukku) were sitting in Kirti's room when saurav entered.

Saurav - abe kya yha baithe ho... chalo na kuch masti krte h..

Dolly - kya karna h...

Saurav - chalo terrace p chalte h... vha koi game hi khel lenge...

All of them agreed and the paltan marched towards the terrace. As they were about to enter, umesh saw sukku sitting at the edge and smiling looking at nowhere.

All of them smirked seeing him and eyed each other.

Sukku was all lost in alisha's thought when he heard.

Saurav - ( singing) kuch to hua h kuch ho gya h...

Kirti - do chaar din se lagta h ese...

Umesh - sab kuch alag h... sab kuch nya h.. (winking at sukku looked at them with a frown)

Sukku rolled his eyes at them but blushed a little which didn't go unnoticed by them . They looked at each other and grinned.

Dolly - ohho blushings n all sukku... meri bhabhi ka names kya h...

Sukku - dolly di kuch bhi ha..

Aman - oehoe... sukku k gaal to dekho tamatar ho gye h by god...

Saurav - pehla nasha pehla khumar... naya pyaar h nya intzaar...

All of them laughed and Sukku gave saurav a deadly look while he hide behind dolly faking fear.

Sukku - esa kuch nhi h... tm log khayali pullav bnana band karo...

Kirti - how blah sukku... shakal p likha k tu kisi "special" k baare m soch rha tha...

Umesh - ur kya... kha khoye hua tha ki hmare aane ka dhyaan bhi nhi tha...

Sukku - kya umesh bhaiya... mai to bus...

Jwalu - ohho sukku bro... btao na kaun si heroine pasand aae aapko...

Sukku - jwalu... ja jake padai kar... in sab ki baato me mat lag...

Cousins - ooo... are maan bhi le na... (singing )

Ki tjhe pyaar hua pyaar hua Allah miya...

They all bursted out laughing while sukku looked everywhere but at the bunch of grinning people over there.

Sukku knew they won't leave him till he will say something about it...

Sukku - ( sighing) yaar... mai kisi ur k nhi apni family k baare m soch rha tha...

Saurav - hone wali family??? Haww

Sukku - nhi... meri ye pyari si cute si wierd si king size family... yahi ki how lucky I m to have all of u... to support me whenever I need it... whether I say or not... u all understand me without the need of explaining myself... I don't need to pretend in front of u... I can be what I m when u all are around... it's just m damn lucky to have my family by my side of all up and downs... (thinking about alisha) warna is jahan me aise log bhi h... jinke pass koi nhi... jo apni khushi apna dukh apni nervousness apni excitement kisi se share nhi kar sakte... jo akele h... tanha h... mai manta hu ki vo bhot strong h... kisi se kam nhi... bilkul weak bhi nhi... but still at times she ammm... I mean they need someone to be there for them just to held their hand and blink their eyes giving the faith and assurance everybody needs.

Sukku turned towards them to find them staring at him with wide open mouths.

Sukku - what???

They didn't said anything and just hugged him tight all of them sharing a group hug.

Dolly - mjhe nhi pta tha sukku itta samajhdaar h...

Kirti - how blah dolly di... ro mat na pls...

Dolly - m not cryings... (getting hyper)

Saurav - (whispering) kirti... jyada mat bol warna pta nhi kab maarne ko tyar ho jae... aajkal pta nhi chalta iska...

Kirti - ( whispered back) mood swings...

Aman - achha chalo... neeche chalke pakode shakode khate h... bhot senti ho gye sab...

Everyone laughed and moved towards the door while sukku excused himself.

Umesh - (while leaving) sukku... kuch to jarur hua h...

He winked and left too leaving a smiling sukku behind...

Sukku - (scratching the back of his neck) kya hua h ye to mai bhi nhi janta umesh bhaiya... itne dost h mere fir bhi sabse jyada miss mai alisha ko hi kyu karta hu...

Scene 2

Manali

At around 11 AM..

Kabir wokeup and saw nisha sleeping and went to talk to the manager...leaving nisha there...sleeping.

Kabir went to the manager's cabin to talk to him..as he opened the door, the manager welcomed him inside and asked him to sit .kabir went and sat on the chairs placed before him..

Manager: yess sir...main aapki kaise help kar sakta hun..??

Kabir: mujhe aapse ekk zaroori baat karni thi...

Manager: ji kahiye na sir...any problem caused to you by our service..?

Kabir: noo..no...it is completely fine..your service is completely fine..it's about some disturbance caused by some guests in your hotel.

Manager: anything serious sir..??

Kabir: no nothing..as serious as that...but it's just that...the guests who are staying in the room beside our's were fighting yesterday...almost the whole night..they were shouting the whole night...we couldn't even sleep for a minute..and when I banged on their door...no one opened it..

Manager: ohh..i am really sorry for the diturbance sir, we will talk to those guests today itself and sort the matter out..!!

The manager picked the intercom up..and dialled the reception's number, a girl picked it up. Kabir started walking up to the door..

Manager: scarlett...jaldi se rahul ko bhejo...kuch guests...ka mamla hain..

Scarlett: sir...I will send him..par what's the room number..?

Manager: ohh yeah...room no..!! puch ke batata hun..!!

Manager called kabir who was about to leave the cabin.

Manager (to kabir) : sirr...aapka room number...aur wo guests ka..??

Kabir: ohh ...yeahh..sorry...mine is 202...and that room is 201...

The phone call receiver fell from the manager fell, as he heard room no.202...it was not noticed by kabir..as he already had left the place.

The manager came out of the trance as he heard some voices coming from the PCR.he picked it up again.

Scarlett: sirr..are you okay..?? what's the room number sir..??

Manager: room...no..202...he shivered while saying that.

Scarlett: r...rr..oo...mmm number 202...??she fumbled.

Manager: maine mana kiya tha naa...kisnee..uss room ko allot kardiya...??kisne usko website mein available kardiya...??you guys are mad or what..??agar unn logon ko abhi kuch hogaya to hum kya jawaab denge..??ya phir innke saath bhi wahi karenge jo tab kiya tha..??

Scarlett: sir ...w..wo...funds kam aa rahe the...to rahul ne kaha ki..uss room ko allot karde...aur humne viresh sir se bhi pucha tha..!!

Manager: iss hotel ka manager main hun ya rahul...abhi ke abhi bhejo usko mere cabin mein...aur viresh se puchne ka kya matlab...maana ki wo bhi manager hain yahan ka...lekin wo boss ka chamcha hain...aur uss ko unn sab cheezon ke baare mein pata bhi nahi hain jo yahan hua tha..!!

Scarlett: sorry sir...ma..main..abhi bhejti hun usko..!!

After sometime,

Rahul came to his cabin...there had been a quarrel between them...as rahul stormed out of the cabin in anger...and went straight towards nibir's room to see upon the matter...

A/N : The episode is not proof read so please ignore the errors

Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago

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