Manan ss [ LAFZ ][PROMO PAGE 144]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello ppl ...
so here I am with a new ss on manan ...it will be a short story which I will wrap up soon ...
some of you know me as a writer of BRUTAL LOVE ...
but many of you don't know me ...
so I am akanksha ...a die hard manan fan ...

and here you go with part 1 of LAFZ



PART 1



All the biggest celebrities and the biggest businessman of the country gathered in Mumbai for the biggest award function of music ...


the host called the biggest musician ...the great singer ...girls heartthrob manik manhotra for presenting the last award of the evening that is best lyrics award..


a man came on the stage looking insanely handsome ..dressed in plane white shirt and black denims ..
any girl can just die by his one look ...his deep brown eyes which can easily drown an ocean in it ..his hairs gelled up perfectly ..his perfect jaw line that do nothing just make him look more sexy .


he came on the stage and addressed ppl in a professional manner ...his voice full of attitude ...
by media he was known as the most arrogant celeb of industry yet his fans can go to any extent for him ...



the host asked him to announce the winner for the best lyrics ..he saw the name and smirked painfully controlling his emotions and said ..'so the award for best lyrics goes to ...the one and only nandini murty for the biggest hit of the year " lafz"
...

a beautiful lady dressed in a black saree with golden border perfectly draped around her petite body ..her look was doing nothing just making her look more ethereal came on the stage plastering a fake smile on her face .


she came on the stage and manik forwarded the award to her ..she smiled fakely taking the award ..

the host asked her to say the lyrics of lafz ..

she smiled on it and stepped towards the mike ..and started ..


kuch ankahe she lafz hn
to kuch ansune se lafz hn ...


kuch lafz khamoshi ban Bethe hn
to kisi or ke kuch lafz dil mein ghar kar Bethe hn


kuch lafz zubaan par reh gayen hn
to kisi or ke kuch lafz kanon mein goonz rhe hn



Kuch lafz zuban se bahar nikalne se katrate hn
to kisi or ke lafz andar hi andar kisi or ko kat rhe hn .


kuch lafz darte hn ki kisi ko chubh na jayen
To kisi or ke kuch lafz kahin dil mein chubh gaye hn


kuch lafz kisi ki zite zee MAUT ban gaye hn
to Kisi or ke kuch lafz kisi Ke ZEENE ka sahara (she said these lines looking directly in maniks eyes with so much of pain )


shayad is duniya mein lafz hi hn
Jo apna kam bakhoobi kar rhe hn ...



she completed and a lone tear fell down from her eyes ..but she quickly wiped it off and again plastered that fake smile on her face ..


manik was looking at her with immense pain in his eyes.. but still covering his face with that fake smile


but some ppl said it correct. ...your eyes they can never lie ..they will always show yo you the truth and reality
same was with them ..their eyes were speaking much more which "LAFZ" can never speak .


their eyelock was broken by the sound of loud claps


ppl stood up from their seats clapping ...the hall was full with the thundering of clapps ...

nandini gestured a thanku by bowing her head down ...
and just made her way out of the hall ..

media was running after her asking her questions but she just made her way out ??' mam ..how do you feel ..by getting award from the biggest singer of the country as well as your x- husband ??' one of the reporters asked ..

she didn't said anything but just covered her face face with smile in order to hide her pain ..


manik was also coming from different gate with many reported around him ..

reporters never asked him such personal questions as they know about the consequences ..

finally both came to the same path ..

their routes were different but their paths were same .

they were walking together just like strangers ..

from the back the biggest actor came and the media ran to him ..
leaving them alone ..


they were still walking towards their car ..acknowledging each other presence but still pretending that the other one doesn't even exist ...


they reached their cars ...their drivers opened the doors ..


manik was about to sit but stopped and said still holding the door not looking towards her ' Why did you did that nandini ??' he finally looked in her eyes in order to find answers


nandini stopped from sitting and smiled painfully listening him and said ' exactly manik why YOUUU did that ??'
she said painfully and sat in her car and left leaving a confused and baffled manik behind ...



pheww !!! guyz done ...
I hv lost it completely ...parson I hv exam of physics and I m writing this

and that poem was written by me ..so plz tell me kaisi lagi .
then only I will try further ...

anyways do tell me kaisa tha ??
criticism ...whose heartedly wlcm ..
do ...mein gale lagaungi ...


now bye ...tata
lots of love
akanksha


my ongoing ff BRUTAL LOVE..


part 2 page 7
part 3 page 12
part 4 page 20
Part 5 page 26
Part 6 page 35

part 7 page 48
part 8 page 57
part9 page68
part 10 page 80
part11 page 95
part 12 page 110
part 13 page 121
part 14 page 130
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anya21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
yupieee...
i am d 1st...
though i didn't strt reading ...
i like 2 comment 1st...
so comments 4r ur update will come later on...
vyshnavivaiga thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc start.
bw, "did what?"
cont soon dr.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear me friston new ss
the staory was simple aweseome
u pinned very perfectly abt there emtions
jst love the way of u r writing keep gng on
ya gng to u r poem was good keep dng the work even more better
continue soon
early waiting fr reading wt made them to be as strangers towards eachother
thnks fr pm
stay blessed
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princypriya

hey dear me friston new ss

the staory was simple aweseome
u pinned very perfectly abt there emtions
jst love the way of u r writing keep gng on
ya gng to u r poem was good keep dng the work even more better
continue soon
early waiting fr reading wt made them to be as strangers towards eachother
thnks fr pm
stay blessed
keep smiling


hey ..
glad you commented ..
I was like literally waiting for your comment ...
I was confused ...where did you go ??
as u didn't commented on BRUTAL LOVE from last two updates ...
are you OK dear ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anya21

yupieee...

i am d 1st...
though i didn't strt reading ...
i like 2 comment 1st...
so comments 4r ur update will come later on...


heheee
OK ...then read it n do tell me kaisa tha??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Painful yet great start.
Waiting for the story to unfold.
Good luck with the writing.
Thanks for the pm.
😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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its a nice start...
i loved it...
ex-husband?
y they got separated?
nd what they did ?
reveal soon...

Akanksha29100 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sws2

Painful yet great start.

Waiting for the story to unfold.
Good luck with the writing.
Thanks for the pm.
😊



thnx
Akanksha29100 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: anya21

its a nice start...

i loved it...
ex-husband?
y they got separated?
nd what they did ?
reveal soon...


hahah *evil laugh* just wait and watch dear;)

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