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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nice update
Loved it
But I really want to know what happened between manan
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Nice update

Loved it
But I really want to know what happened between manan
Update the next part soon


thnx :)
will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
it was nice update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.and next time also pm me before update the story. Thankyou dear. Tack care of yourself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was nice update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.and next time also pm me before update the story. Thankyou dear. Tack care of yourself.


ty dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
nice start n awesome poem ...manan married n separated too ...offf misunderstanding
hope soon it will be resolved ...n best of luck for ur exams ...
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimnana

nice start n awesome poem ...manan married n separated too ...offf misunderstanding

hope soon it will be resolved ...n best of luck for ur exams ...
ty for pm


thnk u sweety
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
hola ppl ...

sab badiya ??

ok ..so finally examsss khatamm ...huh !! finally ..

so here I am with part 2 of LAFZ ...



PART 2



Manik reached his house ..thinking that few years there was someone who wait for him. at the dinner table ...but now there is no one ...there is no one who will call him when he will get late ...
there is no one who will keep on asking continuously whether he had his food or not. ...there is NO ONE ..



he entered the house and directly made his way upstairs to his room but was stopped by nyonica's voice 'beta ...when did you came ?? ' she asked showing concern . 'just abhi ma 'manik replied without turning back . 'did you have your food ??' nyonika asked again. .this time manik didn't replied anything and just made his way to his room leaving a fuming nyonica .



'manik ...wo ladki ...that bloody commoner ko mene tumhari zindagi se nikal diya ...fir bi she still effects you ...u hv changed ..she bloody changed you ...tum mere slave manik nhi rhe ...jab se wo gyi h ..u even started questioning me ...even you started interfering in business ...I made her way out so ..u ll not get connected to anyone except me ...but she ...jate jate bi ...she gave you some senses ...that bloody girl knew everything about me ...but I can't let her tell you everything ...isliye mene use tumhari zindagi se nikal fenka ...'nyonika said to herself and let out an evil smirk .


nandini was sitting in her balcony holding the award in her hand .tears were flowing from her eyes but still there was a fake smile on her face ...'manik said why did I did that ?? hnnn ...why did I did that ...I did that because you never trusted me ...i did that because i never expected that from you ...I did that kyunki ..



mere kahe hue lafz bi tumne ansune kar diye

mere lafz sunke bi tumne unhe ansuna kar diya

isliye mere lafz khamosh ho gaye ..

kyunki tumne unhe khamosh hone ke liye mazboor kar diya ...
'


she said these lines to herself with so much of pain ...


u forced me to leave you manik ...that day I was going to accept my love for you ...but nyonika ...what she .did. ..u questioned me ?? ...how can you do that ...?? and you are asking why I did that ?? she said and let out a sarcastic laugh her tears were flowing continuously ...and she got lost in her thoughts ...



meanwhile in maniks room ...he was also sitting in the balcony gazing the stars 'kyun nandini ?? kyun chod diya mujhe ?? u promised me u will never leave me ?? but you left ...why you broke my trust nandini ?? why what was my fault ?? I loved you ..I trusted you ..I loved you from my soul ..but you ...
when I married you ..you knew that I loved you from when I saw you at first in the orphanage ...



that smile of your made me fall in love with you ..

that innocence of your made me fall in love with you .

that simplicity of yours made me fall in love with you..



we got married ..you told me you need time ..I gave you ...
but then why did you cheated ...why ???
he in anger threw the flowerpot which was near him ..and shouted WHY??

'tumne ek bar kaha ki manik ye sab jhoot h ...poori duniya kuch bi kehti ...mujhe farak nhi parta...
par tumne kuch kaha to hota ...



tumare ankahe lafz bi sunne chahe mene ...

tumhari khamoshi mein bi wajah dhoondi ...

or aaj bi dhoond rha hn ..

dhoondte dhoondte thak gya hn ...

par aaj bi wo lafz ankahe or khamosh hn ..'



he said helplessly to himself and let his tears flow



...his thoughts were broken by the buzzing of his cell phone ..
he composed himself and picked up the phone ..it was his managers call ..'hello ??' he said .'sir your next song has been finalized ..its " lafz " ..actually sir there is going to be a series for song lafz as it was a big hit ...sir its under D - Vesta company ..and sir plz reach studio @11:00 am " manager said .manik just said a ' hmm' and hung up the call ..and said ..




'kyun nandini kyun humari rahen bar bar mile jaati ??

'kyun hum alad raston par chalte chalte ek hi raste par aajate hn ??
kyun ??


phewww !!! done ...nyonika chudeil ..hehe

yar guyz ye jyada sad to ni ho rha ??

is it getting boring ??
kaisa laga zaroor batana ?? plz do drop your comment ...

and for pm plz buddy and eki bari msg krdena that you want pm ...
and silent readers kya kahun mein ??

BRUTAL LOVE WILL TRY TO UPDATE TODAY .. .
but plz comment ...



now bye
tc care
spread love
#akanksha


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
nice update...plz cont soon
hope they will soon clear their misunderstanding
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice update...plz cont soon

hope they will soon clear their misunderstanding


thnkuu shoo much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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meri pataka bohot khubsurat thi thori si sad thi par koi baat ni tujhpar puri trust hain tu humari manan ko thori na alag rahegi jyada din o tak so chill...uss churail ka please kuch kar...woh humesha humare brain paka ti hain...uss churail ne jaroor manan ke bich aag lagai hain...apne bete ko koi slave bana kar rakhta hain bhala uff yeh churail nyonika hi kar sakti hain...churail kahiki hihihi...ab iss churail ya ka raaz manik ko bata aur manan ko ek kar ...

loved the update meri jaan...big wala thanks for pm and lovely update...teri poem bohot nice thi meri jaan...continue soon...love u bohot bohot jyada...tc of urself...how was ur physics xam ??? with lots of love and hugs meri jaan 😊😊😊😊😊

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