Manan dark ss-MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI promo pg144 thread2 pg1 18nov.

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Manan Dark SS

MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI

Prologue


Nandini P.O.V.

I m nandini manik mahlotra n my life is normal like other marriage life romance n loving n caring husband n i think it is not normal it amazing but after the worst incident happen with me one day n it changes my whole life from heaven to hell i separated from my sweet family mY world best hubby...i didn't even know how many nights days month or i say years have been passed without him in pain or a say extreme torture but i have an hope one day will come when i m with him n my life became normal...

Manik P.O.V

2 yr has been passed but there is no news of nandini.. she is my wife not my wife she is my everything even now also.. i m living for her only.. i have try my best n now also i m trying to find her but all efforts r going vein there is not even one clue about her i got in these 2 yr.. i always live in her memory n i have an hope one day will come we will together again...

Wht happen to her how their life changes if u wana know so stay connect with the story it will reveal slowly wht happened.. with nandini guyz it is dark ss so u have to bear darkness of the story n hope u guyz like this IF WANT MORE PART THAN PLZ PLZ DO COMMENT.. I M WAITING FOR YR RESPONSE N IT SMALL PROLOGUE N THE PART WILL MORE MORE BIGGER THAN THIS IF I GET THE RESPONSE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looking very interesting.
Please continue
Soon. ..
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what happen to manan..
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awesome start...
loving the mystery can't wait to find out more...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Yes I
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nandini kaha chali gyi.. aur
manik ko bhi nhi pata...
very interesting story
plz.. continue... with more osm.. parts...
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ASA POSSIBLY POST THE PART...
LOVE U FOR WRITING THIS INTERESTING STORY
LOVe u mehak..
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It's quite
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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI

Part : 1

One man is lying on king size bed holding one photo n sun raises are falling on him but he didn't care about dat n his r eyes swallowed due to constant crying whole night in memory of her wife nandini.. n yeah the man is Manik Mahlotra than his room door open by someone n he immidiatly got up on bed n see his mom nyonika Mahlotra is there wid breakfast

"Gud.. mrng.. my.. son " neyonika said lovingly by putting breakfast on side table

"Gud mrng.. "manik said weakly n neyonika immidiatly came to know manik is not f9
N she sit beside him "manik.. beta.. kyo tum apna aap ko dukh de rhai ho.. aise dukhi rhaine se kya hoga.. main yeh nhi bol ki tum ushai bhul jao but jb nandini will be back toh ushai acha lgega.. "neyonika said by cubing his face n manik immidaitly hug her tightly n he start crying in her arm n says "why.. mom... why this happen where is she gone.. main ushai protect nhi kr paya.. it's all my fault.. "
"No.. my child.. don't blame yrself.. yeh sb bagwan ki mrzi thi.. "neyinika said to console him

Than again the door open n manik's best frnd n manager of the Mahlotra company comes n seeing manik condition he stop at the door n ask to neyonika in gesture that is he okay n neyonika nodded in no

"Cabir.. today u have to manange the all meetings"neyonika said as he thought manik is not in condition to do anything

"No... cabir.. u go down i m just coming "manik said leaving from neyonika n get up..

"Dekh... manik.. today u r not in condition to do anything so u rest na.. "cabir said putting hand on his shoulder

"Maine kha na i m f9 so.. "by saying this ran toward the bathroom n bang the door n both neyonika n cabir give sad look to eachother

Manik is one of the rich business man n he is famous singer to.. n always keep himself busy in work so dat nandini memory can't able to haunt her but her memory never leaves him alone n by seeing anything n going he always feels her presence n his everynight goes while crying in her memory n the day... also goes same..

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Cabir was telling the schedule of today meetings manik asual lost in his thought they were setting backseat of car going to Mahlotra company manik is looking out of window n car is stopped at red light n manik see some girls r eating ice cream at ice cream stall n manik rested his head on back n close her eyes start thinking about his part when he see nandini first time

...Flashback...

Some girls r standing at ice cream stall n one car is stop at red light n from that a man is seeing them n a smile came his face when one beautiful girl nandini her open hair coming in her eyes n she showing her ice cream to other girls n than her ice cream fallen down n she brust in to laugh with other girls
N that man die on her cutness n the car leaves that place but his mind n heart remain there n whole day n that he think about her...
At night manik changing his position n when he close his eye again n again her cutei face flashes in his eye

Manik P.O.V.

When i can't get rid over her aisa kya tha ush main.. manik.. u don't get that she is so cute n her long hair coming to her is increasing her more beauty n she looking so hot in red knee length dress n her smile.. n when she laugh.. i felt that my heart came outside...

"Adorable..." i murmured while thiking about her..pta nhi kyo but.. i have fallen in love with her suna love at first hota but socha nhi tha ki aisa kabhi mere sth bhi hoga aur aisi feeling ati yeah fir yeh just attraction tha i m so confused than after sometime i drifted into sleep

...Flashback End...

Manik have a smile on face about thing her n he came out of thought continuous calling of cabir asking cabir asking him to come out of car as they were reach their destination n manik shouts "nandini.. "

"Manik.. maine tujhe ghr pr bhi kha tha if u r not well to take rest.. "cabir.. said as he knows manik condition

Manik didn't say anything n come out of car in full attitude yes in home he was emotinal n very calm but for outside world he was arrogant angry young man he became like this when she lost her love her life her wife nandini.. before meeting her that time also he was same rude person n but she change him fully new man he became a kind n soft hearted person n came to know the value of each n everything but after lossing her he became same before meeting her or i can say more rude he became like a angry bird cabir knows that why he always remain like infront of everyone because no one can see his deep pain that he is hiding inside him

As they enter in office all staff is gather at one place without knowing manik their aggressive boss has been arrived

"Yeah... kya thamsha... lga rkha hai yha..."manik shouted n everyone stand still in fear

"Kya main tum sb ko yeh km krne ki salary deta hn.. "manik again shouted but no one dare so anything n he again shouted "i m asking something... r u all r dum. Answer me... "

"Sorry sir.. we were... "one employee is about to say something but manik cut her b/w n say "u r all doing wht ever i don't care.. i just want proper displane in my office.. got it.. "

"why u all looking at me just go n start yr work.. otherwise i will fire u all ..."manik said n everybody start doing there work n manik goes to conference hall

All employee have the habit of manik that kind of behaviour so they listen him n never dare to argue with him

He goes to confernce hall n the normal meeting is going on n cabir is giving the peresentation n manik is listening him n than after something the rain started n manik look outside the rain drops n again went to his past thought

...Flashback...

Next night after when manik see nandini n manik is going back home after along terific day n with his confusion about love n again he sees her n he got more confuse

it's raining heavily n manik car stop suddenly n manik ask driver to check the problem n than he again see her again

Manik P.O.V.

I was looking out of window n my eyes got stops again by seeing she was looking cute n beautifull she was wearing white crop top n pink short n she was playing with small kids in rain n before seeing her i hate rain n never thing some can enjoy the rain like her that she is enjoying n she jumping n dancing like 2 yr child n than i realised that i came out of the car unknowingly yeah my mind was on her n i was full wet but i don't care.. n than suddenly i take step toward her but the stupid driver call me n i turn to listen him n he say "sir car thik ho gye hai " after listening him n turn toward her but she disappear n that time i was feeling to kill my driver but i control my feeling n set in car in all the way i kept thinking about her... n think will i be meet her again... n is this love...

...Flashback...

Manik thought of Terrance broken by the Dealer mr. Khanna "so deal is final Mr. Mahlotra ?" Mr. Khanna ask by forwarding his hand toward him

Manik left the room without saying anything leaving all of them confused but only cabir knows dat wht happen to him
"Sorry gentlemen actually he is not well n the meeting is over n deal is final mr. Khanna "cabir shake hand with him n control the situation as he is perfect in it means dat controling the mess create by manik

So here is part 1 ..I putted my lots of effort in writting this so plz guyz i want response if response will be upto my satisfaction than i will continue this story n guyz i m agian telling this is a dark ss not a smiple n slowly slowly everything will be revealed n if u want to know so stay connected with story n plz do big wale comments
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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF]


Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
glad you are showing their memories in these flashback sequences...loving the past...cant wait to see how the meet for the first time...
want to know more about manan'life and disappearance of nandu...cabir as always manik's saviour...
loved it...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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